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8/25/2015 c1 33Hippothestrowl
An interesting look into Harry's mind as he faces death.
8/25/2015 c1 9The Sorting Hat's Sunglasses
This was beautifully written; you really have a way with words. :) It really is a chunky piece of text though - maybe you could split it up into paragraphs?

'That's when the sky cried, then bled, then died, and the world was left in the dark.'
I love this final sentence. It's wonderful imagery; I can almost see the sky darkening above me - as if I actually was Harry, dying.

I'd love to read more from you but thank you for this scrumptious piece. :)
8/25/2015 c1 snowdragon23
fateful, not faithful.
Other than that I have no other comments

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