
12/13/2024 c32 LateToThePartyAndEverythingEls
Wow. The end was great- kicking myself for not seeing it coming, but it was clearly there all along- well done! This was a really interesting take on Bella- I liked how knowing the future and being able to burn people with her bare hands sort of leveled the playing field just a little. Also, putting Edward in this place of missing her but not despairing to the point of wanting to nip off and kill himself was interesting. And Alice’s meet cute story involving the drug cartel… also liked a lot how Bella remembers Edward’s mother even if Edward doesn’t. I wonder if he ever asked for stories to supplement his hazy human memories- thoughbin the canon for whatever reason they seem pretty indifferent to their human pasts. Anyway- thanks for this! I enjoyed it!
Wow. The end was great- kicking myself for not seeing it coming, but it was clearly there all along- well done! This was a really interesting take on Bella- I liked how knowing the future and being able to burn people with her bare hands sort of leveled the playing field just a little. Also, putting Edward in this place of missing her but not despairing to the point of wanting to nip off and kill himself was interesting. And Alice’s meet cute story involving the drug cartel… also liked a lot how Bella remembers Edward’s mother even if Edward doesn’t. I wonder if he ever asked for stories to supplement his hazy human memories- thoughbin the canon for whatever reason they seem pretty indifferent to their human pasts. Anyway- thanks for this! I enjoyed it!
10/25/2024 c32 Saravee
This is the fourth time I read this fanfic and it's always amazing as the first. Thank you!
This is the fourth time I read this fanfic and it's always amazing as the first. Thank you!
9/28/2024 c32 EeWee
Excellent story. I do live a good time travel plot. And Bella's power was awesome.
Excellent story. I do live a good time travel plot. And Bella's power was awesome.
9/19/2024 c32 Guest
This would be an awesome movie ..please try for it .. a blockbuster
This would be an awesome movie ..please try for it .. a blockbuster
6/17/2024 c32
3disguisedpen
why is this the best fanfic ever! i wanted this to be published and have a movie adaptation because the ride was so insane.

why is this the best fanfic ever! i wanted this to be published and have a movie adaptation because the ride was so insane.