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5/10/2016 c1 84Chronic Guardian
Awww... Shiki and Eri friendshipping is way too rare a sight. You do a good job with this duo! I always like seeing other writers' takes on both post game Shiki and Eri, the girl we only see a shadow of in the original TWEWY. The chemistry you work is well balanced and really lets Eri's character shine without ever losing the focus of Shiki in the scene.

I also really like how this is sort of a later-on-in-real-life sort of scene for Shiki. It makes me wonder where Neku ended up for University...

Speaking of missing characters though, where the heck is Mr. Mew? Did Shiki outgrow him? Or... is Hype-chan's Mr. Mew not actually a replica? Hmm... very interesting indeed!

Anyway, it's nice that you did something more centered on this side of TWEWY. Good job, Tash. You get a "CG approved" sticker and an awkward thumbs up d-.-b.

See you around,
-CG
8/27/2015 c1 120Aviantei
Ah, TWEWY. I have to say, I think that's the one fandom everyone in T-Sauce is well-acquainted with. Actually, most of us have written T-Sauce prompts with TWEWY, too, hmm...

I like that you chose to focus on Eri and Shiki's relationship in this one. I don't think a lot of people do, which is really kind of sad (or perhaps I don't read enough TWEWY fics, which is equally plausible).

I think you nailed Shiki post-game pretty well. Yes, she's grown, but people don't change like magic. Having self-confidence issues can still creep back up. But, of course, that's what having good friends is for.

(Ah, I feel so stupid because I could have approached this prompt with "aibou" in mind and that totally skipped my mind, ah-)

The last line is great, too. After all, even if they weren't partners in the Game, they are still partners after all. Just as Shiki and Neku do, Eri and Shiki balance each other out and that's what matters.

There's still some summer left, Tash (take note that I've posted prompts from last year like in January and am actually finishing up the cycle this week)! Keep going forward, see what you can accomplish (and be sure to share these over at the Billboard)!

See you around!
-Aviantei

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