for Harry Potter and the Shadow Legion3/27/2021 c1 
1Urdrald
Alright.
First impression.
Of course it's a katana. I swear, it's like people don't know what a regular longsword it is. It can cut people too you know.
So good so far, onwards we go.
1UrdraldAlright.
First impression.
Of course it's a katana. I swear, it's like people don't know what a regular longsword it is. It can cut people too you know.
So good so far, onwards we go.
3/11/2021 c1 abyssjumper
I have no problem with the queen being in this in fact I respect that you have the balls to attempt this idea l. anyways this chapter in .y opinion could be longer but other than that I have no complaints
I have no problem with the queen being in this in fact I respect that you have the balls to attempt this idea l. anyways this chapter in .y opinion could be longer but other than that I have no complaints
12/30/2020 c39 SleepyFluffball
Personally if I were to design a quidditch rule set I'd add in decoy snitches that would egg on the seekers while the normal ran away. Would add a bit of comedy relief to it.
Personally if I were to design a quidditch rule set I'd add in decoy snitches that would egg on the seekers while the normal ran away. Would add a bit of comedy relief to it.
7/23/2020 c41 3Fyr RedNight
Awesome story. You did a great job in writing it.
The plot is very much interesting and the way how you write the characters is as captivating.
I'll quickly jump on part 2!
3Fyr RedNightAwesome story. You did a great job in writing it.
The plot is very much interesting and the way how you write the characters is as captivating.
I'll quickly jump on part 2!
6/11/2020 c1 4pavook
I like this. It's so much more if you can see it from a personal standpoint. Harry is a family. Having some secret magical queen corps taking care of Harry had been done a few times, but I don't recall any interesting one with Queen taking things personally.
Interesting, Victoria and Arturius Potter. Are they a replacement to Harry's granddad Fleamont Potter? It might be better if he was the brother of Fleamont, it might not. I will reserve judgement to later if ever.
4pavookI like this. It's so much more if you can see it from a personal standpoint. Harry is a family. Having some secret magical queen corps taking care of Harry had been done a few times, but I don't recall any interesting one with Queen taking things personally.
Interesting, Victoria and Arturius Potter. Are they a replacement to Harry's granddad Fleamont Potter? It might be better if he was the brother of Fleamont, it might not. I will reserve judgement to later if ever.
3/21/2020 c29 The8thMarauder
Your spelling and grammar is quiet bad.. simply proof reading this even once would have cleared most of it
Your spelling and grammar is quiet bad.. simply proof reading this even once would have cleared most of it
2/26/2020 c41 Caliban03
Long and interesting story thanks to its original "background"
Let's see the sequel then :)
Long and interesting story thanks to its original "background"
Let's see the sequel then :)
2/9/2020 c41 Harrypotterpercyjacksonfan90
Very interesting story so far thanks for writing it! Now on too part two!
Very interesting story so far thanks for writing it! Now on too part two!