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1Rhovania
I love this story! I hope you find the inspiration to finish this because it is great!
1RhovaniaI love this story! I hope you find the inspiration to finish this because it is great!
10/9/2015 c6 dojoson41
namely a bear?
namely a bear?
10/7/2015 c6 6Nenithiel
Poor injured Fili and worried Kili. I do wonder when Dis will come back into the story or how you will tie both parts together.
6NenithielPoor injured Fili and worried Kili. I do wonder when Dis will come back into the story or how you will tie both parts together.
9/16/2015 c5 Nenithiel
This chapter seemed rushed. When you change scenes put ### or some other indicator. Waiting to see what happens with Fili now injured.
This chapter seemed rushed. When you change scenes put ### or some other indicator. Waiting to see what happens with Fili now injured.
9/7/2015 c4 dojoson41
hhhmmm me thanks that the dwarrows forging, would be easy for one of them to put (discreatly placed runes) the location of their wearabouts engraved in the metal, say a sword?
hhhmmm me thanks that the dwarrows forging, would be easy for one of them to put (discreatly placed runes) the location of their wearabouts engraved in the metal, say a sword?
9/6/2015 c4 Luci
Poor Dís! :( I love all the details you put into this chapter! You've really thought out this story well! :)
And I totally understand the struggle with writing and school... *sigh*
Poor Dís! :( I love all the details you put into this chapter! You've really thought out this story well! :)
And I totally understand the struggle with writing and school... *sigh*
9/8/2015 c4 Nenithiel
Good to see what it is Dis has been dealing with. Can't wait to see more of the brothers.
Good to see what it is Dis has been dealing with. Can't wait to see more of the brothers.
9/5/2015 c3 Luci
POOR LITTLE FRERIN! *sobbing* I love him...
And that last part is just... AHHHHHH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! :)
POOR LITTLE FRERIN! *sobbing* I love him...
And that last part is just... AHHHHHH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! :)
9/5/2015 c3 Nenithiel
Would've liked to see more outside Thorin's nightmares. Otherwise, nicely done.
Would've liked to see more outside Thorin's nightmares. Otherwise, nicely done.
9/2/2015 c2 Luthien
I love this story. But the CLIFFIE!
I love this story. But the CLIFFIE!
9/2/2015 c2 Luci
I'm glad you persevered and wrote this chapter, because I loved it. Poor boys... And Thorin. They're going to have a hard time without Dís... :( And know I'm DYING to know what will happen next!
I'm glad you persevered and wrote this chapter, because I loved it. Poor boys... And Thorin. They're going to have a hard time without Dís... :( And know I'm DYING to know what will happen next!
8/31/2015 c2 singingoompaloompas
I love your story! It is well written and off to a great start! I look forward to see how the story will unfold. Thanks for writing :)
I love your story! It is well written and off to a great start! I look forward to see how the story will unfold. Thanks for writing :)
8/29/2015 c1 Luci
I think this is a wonderful, amazing idea, and I can't wait to read more! I love it already! Why aren't there a gazillion reviews?! :)
I think this is a wonderful, amazing idea, and I can't wait to read more! I love it already! Why aren't there a gazillion reviews?! :)