
1/21/2018 c5 coolgirl
please write more
please write more
1/20/2018 c5
1moonlight46
Great new/end chapter! If it is the end then it is a good one!
If it continues then I look forward to the chapters to come!

Great new/end chapter! If it is the end then it is a good one!
If it continues then I look forward to the chapters to come!
6/8/2016 c4 eyeore1994
Ducking Patti and Liz...love em to death but REALLY!? Souls already having a tough going, and and HR WAS GOING TO TELL HER. And now he might not! All cuz of their crappy photo! Noooo...
Maka just confess to the idiot and clear up this whole mess please!
Can't wait to find out what happens next. Know it's been a while since you last updated but...PLEASE CONTINUE!
Ducking Patti and Liz...love em to death but REALLY!? Souls already having a tough going, and and HR WAS GOING TO TELL HER. And now he might not! All cuz of their crappy photo! Noooo...
Maka just confess to the idiot and clear up this whole mess please!
Can't wait to find out what happens next. Know it's been a while since you last updated but...PLEASE CONTINUE!
6/8/2016 c3 eyeore1994
Oh my god. SOUL it's a misunderstanding. Oh god . Fuck. Shit. Well either kids gonna die or souls going to just die inside forever. Don't leave Maka soul! I bet it's painful but endure because, because you're SOMA!
Oh my god. SOUL it's a misunderstanding. Oh god . Fuck. Shit. Well either kids gonna die or souls going to just die inside forever. Don't leave Maka soul! I bet it's painful but endure because, because you're SOMA!
2/17/2016 c4
18Rebeccaseal
Of course. Cool guys aren't violent, Soul. They're calm. Don't just hit Kid, no matter how tempting it may be.

Of course. Cool guys aren't violent, Soul. They're calm. Don't just hit Kid, no matter how tempting it may be.
2/17/2016 c3 Rebeccaseal
What happened to your confidence, Soul? Being insecure isn't cool, you know.
What happened to your confidence, Soul? Being insecure isn't cool, you know.
2/17/2016 c1 Rebeccaseal
While this is totally realistic and cute, the punctuation is annoying me so much. I think I've spent too much time editing lately... But anyways, Soul is adorable!
While this is totally realistic and cute, the punctuation is annoying me so much. I think I've spent too much time editing lately... But anyways, Soul is adorable!
12/26/2015 c4 AfterWriter
I LOVE IT! Please write more, I love the story and your writing is very good ️
I LOVE IT! Please write more, I love the story and your writing is very good ️
12/4/2015 c4
6ChaosreigN
Aahhhhhh.
I'm not gonna lie I want this to end with them tearing into each other, ripping off clothes and whatnot
But gawd I'll take anything at this point!
I'm eagerly awaiting the finale!

Aahhhhhh.
I'm not gonna lie I want this to end with them tearing into each other, ripping off clothes and whatnot
But gawd I'll take anything at this point!
I'm eagerly awaiting the finale!
12/2/2015 c1
1Youkai Zeta
I don't like it. It's bland and boring and does not have flair improve that it's pretty good though.

I don't like it. It's bland and boring and does not have flair improve that it's pretty good though.
10/6/2015 c3
1camcradi
i'm a body with my soul hollowed out right now tbh
i've been reading au!soma ficks all day and this one is packed to the brim with angst, and i ask myself why i do this but i know why. your writing style is absolutely fantastic, and i can relate to this situation so hard that it's not even funny. I just hope you update this soon!

i'm a body with my soul hollowed out right now tbh
i've been reading au!soma ficks all day and this one is packed to the brim with angst, and i ask myself why i do this but i know why. your writing style is absolutely fantastic, and i can relate to this situation so hard that it's not even funny. I just hope you update this soon!
9/21/2015 c1 JLC
I love your story! Great job...please post more chapters soon!
I love your story! Great job...please post more chapters soon!
9/20/2015 c3 Guest
I'm freaking out ! I can't wait till the next chapter to come out plz plz make another chapter soon !
I'm freaking out ! I can't wait till the next chapter to come out plz plz make another chapter soon !
9/20/2015 c1 Banana
Wow ! This is amazing ah I like it so much
Wow ! This is amazing ah I like it so much
9/17/2015 c3 YmaSumac
I /do/ like it! This is some wonderful, rapidly paced writing. Keep writing, don't worry about edits, you can do that later when you've finished the story. :) It's a great story with strong, motivated characterization. I'm enjoying it a lot! thank you, Yma
I /do/ like it! This is some wonderful, rapidly paced writing. Keep writing, don't worry about edits, you can do that later when you've finished the story. :) It's a great story with strong, motivated characterization. I'm enjoying it a lot! thank you, Yma