9/6/2015 c2 isha
I absolutely adore the both of them there is alot of fluff in this chapter(awwwwwwwwww theyr so cute together) and i loooove your writing style ;)
I absolutely adore the both of them there is alot of fluff in this chapter(awwwwwwwwww theyr so cute together) and i loooove your writing style ;)
9/6/2015 c1 wthtonibelle
one of the best wedding g/cc first days of marriage fics i've read. please don't abandon this. thanks!
one of the best wedding g/cc first days of marriage fics i've read. please don't abandon this. thanks!
9/5/2015 c1 77Reda
Omigosh I found you on ffnet. Small world it is. I thought I should let you know I re-read this fic a lot. I love it that much. Your characterizations, your pacing, your general writing style. I just love it all. And now that I happened across it here, I can add it to my favorites and have such an easier time finding it too. Yay!
-Reda
Omigosh I found you on ffnet. Small world it is. I thought I should let you know I re-read this fic a lot. I love it that much. Your characterizations, your pacing, your general writing style. I just love it all. And now that I happened across it here, I can add it to my favorites and have such an easier time finding it too. Yay!
-Reda
9/4/2015 c1 isha
Its soo sweet and is well written and i liked it that you didnt made goku to be a complete idiot and chichingoku both are new to all of these experiences and they are both so innocent omg lovvveee it plzz update soon:)
Its soo sweet and is well written and i liked it that you didnt made goku to be a complete idiot and chichingoku both are new to all of these experiences and they are both so innocent omg lovvveee it plzz update soon:)
9/3/2015 c1 Alice
I love the first chapter so much! Will you continue it or is this a oneshot?
I love the first chapter so much! Will you continue it or is this a oneshot?
8/31/2015 c1 11ElricKeyblade
I really like this. It was sweet, sensual, and well-written. I enjoy stories that explore Goku discovering all the 'perks' of married life, and I also like how you put some emphasis on Chi-Chi's innocence as well. These two are so sweet- innocent little lovebirds discovering marriage together. Thanks so much for writing this, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I really like this. It was sweet, sensual, and well-written. I enjoy stories that explore Goku discovering all the 'perks' of married life, and I also like how you put some emphasis on Chi-Chi's innocence as well. These two are so sweet- innocent little lovebirds discovering marriage together. Thanks so much for writing this, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
8/30/2015 c1 9Saiyajin Princess Chichi
First off I adore this. I also like that you don't make him a complete idiot. He has natural urges and kind of goes off instinct, which I think most people do the first time. It's realistic and yet suiting of him.
Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter!
First off I adore this. I also like that you don't make him a complete idiot. He has natural urges and kind of goes off instinct, which I think most people do the first time. It's realistic and yet suiting of him.
Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter!
8/30/2015 c1 busi.sibeko1
Absolutely wonderful, this fic has all the elements that make GoChi my favourite couple. So sweet and innocent, naïve and so willing to learn, love and compromise.
This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter
Absolutely wonderful, this fic has all the elements that make GoChi my favourite couple. So sweet and innocent, naïve and so willing to learn, love and compromise.
This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter