
6/13/2018 c32 Nero
You know I've been thinking on how does one kill Manaka, and the only thing I can come up with is to destroy the original Grail that contains the Beast as I think that's what has been keeping her alive despite how she has gaping wound in her chest.
If not, then she really bulls!t Mary Sue, I mean she has been stated to surpass even Servants and Magi from the Age of Gods and I have to say that is ridiculous.
You know I've been thinking on how does one kill Manaka, and the only thing I can come up with is to destroy the original Grail that contains the Beast as I think that's what has been keeping her alive despite how she has gaping wound in her chest.
If not, then she really bulls!t Mary Sue, I mean she has been stated to surpass even Servants and Magi from the Age of Gods and I have to say that is ridiculous.
6/10/2018 c26
1Archetype-Moon
You are honestly terrible. First for wanting to kill off Broskandar in the first place, but even more so for using three Servants toting some of the coolest Anti-Army N.P.s in the Nasuverse to do it. I mean seriously, did you really need Karna to nuke him right in the face, right after Perseus and Atalanta were drive-by carpet bombing his friends?

You are honestly terrible. First for wanting to kill off Broskandar in the first place, but even more so for using three Servants toting some of the coolest Anti-Army N.P.s in the Nasuverse to do it. I mean seriously, did you really need Karna to nuke him right in the face, right after Perseus and Atalanta were drive-by carpet bombing his friends?
5/25/2018 c32 nightdollie
This is so awesome! Please update soon! I need to know what is happening! :'S
This is so awesome! Please update soon! I need to know what is happening! :'S
5/23/2018 c3 Archetype-Moon
Motherfucker! Medea AND Hundred Face Hassan? The Servant roster for this fic is practically made for me. And Julian? Who would have expected that guy to show up? I don't even know what to say at this point besides good work. All the surprises concerning Servant identities and especially the character interactions among the two factions are great fun to read. Except Shirou but he's a snakey prick.
Motherfucker! Medea AND Hundred Face Hassan? The Servant roster for this fic is practically made for me. And Julian? Who would have expected that guy to show up? I don't even know what to say at this point besides good work. All the surprises concerning Servant identities and especially the character interactions among the two factions are great fun to read. Except Shirou but he's a snakey prick.
5/23/2018 c2 Archetype-Moon
Holy shiiiiiiit! Achilles is Lancer! Someone actually did that! Fuck yes! Gil is Archer, Proto Gil but still Gil. Fuck it, you are hands down my favorite author for Fate fanfics unless you somehow manage to fuck up 10 chapters in a row. I cannot wait for the shit show that will be the God-tier Battle Royale.
My fanboying aside, how the hell are there 4 more Servants? The 15 from Apocrypha is already insane enough that Servants were dying every volume/other episode, and you want to have 20?! Initially I had thought that Robin Hood had been summoned as Caster (druid and all that) but even after reading about Karna and Atalanta, it didn't occur to me that he and Lancelot were additional Servants to the main 16. Having learnt that though, are Spartacus, Shakespeare and Jack still Servants seeing as you decided to swap out Fran for Liz? Kinda hoping that Will stays while Jack and Spartacus get swapped, the latter 2 weren't really that good.
Highlight of the chapter had to be Proto Saber and Ruler at the airport. They are like goddamn puppies! One is adorably shy while the other is adorably clueless. At first I thought Arthur was teasing her on purpose but him doing it by accident makes it so much better.
Speaking of Jeanne and pairings, with the removal of Fran there is no way to rez Sieg. Since that is the case, please don't have Siegfried sacrifice himself. Even if he is technically weaker than Cardboard!Saber in immediate output, the extra fighting time easily makes up for it. Alternatively, you could just give Saber of Black his Dragon Core for even more Balmung spam.
Final point. Reines and Gray are actually being used?! Reines is like a non threatening mix Ko-Gil/Rin. Let the chaos ensue (insert Luvia laugh here). I'll admit I don't like Gray as much as Reines but the moment she breaks out Rhon or, better yet, gives it to Arthur, Imma go insane.
Holy shiiiiiiit! Achilles is Lancer! Someone actually did that! Fuck yes! Gil is Archer, Proto Gil but still Gil. Fuck it, you are hands down my favorite author for Fate fanfics unless you somehow manage to fuck up 10 chapters in a row. I cannot wait for the shit show that will be the God-tier Battle Royale.
My fanboying aside, how the hell are there 4 more Servants? The 15 from Apocrypha is already insane enough that Servants were dying every volume/other episode, and you want to have 20?! Initially I had thought that Robin Hood had been summoned as Caster (druid and all that) but even after reading about Karna and Atalanta, it didn't occur to me that he and Lancelot were additional Servants to the main 16. Having learnt that though, are Spartacus, Shakespeare and Jack still Servants seeing as you decided to swap out Fran for Liz? Kinda hoping that Will stays while Jack and Spartacus get swapped, the latter 2 weren't really that good.
Highlight of the chapter had to be Proto Saber and Ruler at the airport. They are like goddamn puppies! One is adorably shy while the other is adorably clueless. At first I thought Arthur was teasing her on purpose but him doing it by accident makes it so much better.
Speaking of Jeanne and pairings, with the removal of Fran there is no way to rez Sieg. Since that is the case, please don't have Siegfried sacrifice himself. Even if he is technically weaker than Cardboard!Saber in immediate output, the extra fighting time easily makes up for it. Alternatively, you could just give Saber of Black his Dragon Core for even more Balmung spam.
Final point. Reines and Gray are actually being used?! Reines is like a non threatening mix Ko-Gil/Rin. Let the chaos ensue (insert Luvia laugh here). I'll admit I don't like Gray as much as Reines but the moment she breaks out Rhon or, better yet, gives it to Arthur, Imma go insane.
5/23/2018 c1 Archetype-Moon
When I first read the summary for this story (almost two years ago I believe), I didn't bother even checking it out. Main reason being I had misread Arthur as Arturia. Having tried some fics with Jeanne/Arturia as a pairing, not a fan. Man do I wish I paid a bit more attention because this was/is epic. JeanneBest girl, ArthurBest guy (drawing with Gil and Achilles but still). Talk about my favorite pairing ever besides LancelotFighter Jet which I ALSO get in this fic.
My favorite Servants in my preferred Classes for them are
RulerJeanne (not much competition)
SaberArthur
LancerAchilles
ArcherGil
RiderMedusa
BerserkerLancelot
CasterMedea/Semiramis
AssassinHundred Face/Cursed Arm
AvengerGorgon (Medusa is good enough for two Classes)
With Waver as a Master, Achilles is out as Rider and since Karna is probably Lancer I don't get Achilles at all (sad sauce). Not like people ever have Lancer Achilles anyway. Semi is still Assassin so you still managed to have 4 of my favorite Servants in one fic, you are a miracle worker. I do hope you switch up the Black Faction line up like you did with some Red Servants, for the group with 60 years of prep they are sorely underwhelming.
Man am I glad I still have another 370k words to binge right now. Everything so far has got me hyped.
P.S. Why is Krypto the Murder Dog here? Is Altrouge watching or some shit?
P.S. Just remembered a slight nit pick. Why was Jeanne using her sword? I was fairly certain she didn't draw it, even in life, except when using her suicide NP, hence why its such a big deal when she does.
When I first read the summary for this story (almost two years ago I believe), I didn't bother even checking it out. Main reason being I had misread Arthur as Arturia. Having tried some fics with Jeanne/Arturia as a pairing, not a fan. Man do I wish I paid a bit more attention because this was/is epic. JeanneBest girl, ArthurBest guy (drawing with Gil and Achilles but still). Talk about my favorite pairing ever besides LancelotFighter Jet which I ALSO get in this fic.
My favorite Servants in my preferred Classes for them are
RulerJeanne (not much competition)
SaberArthur
LancerAchilles
ArcherGil
RiderMedusa
BerserkerLancelot
CasterMedea/Semiramis
AssassinHundred Face/Cursed Arm
AvengerGorgon (Medusa is good enough for two Classes)
With Waver as a Master, Achilles is out as Rider and since Karna is probably Lancer I don't get Achilles at all (sad sauce). Not like people ever have Lancer Achilles anyway. Semi is still Assassin so you still managed to have 4 of my favorite Servants in one fic, you are a miracle worker. I do hope you switch up the Black Faction line up like you did with some Red Servants, for the group with 60 years of prep they are sorely underwhelming.
Man am I glad I still have another 370k words to binge right now. Everything so far has got me hyped.
P.S. Why is Krypto the Murder Dog here? Is Altrouge watching or some shit?
P.S. Just remembered a slight nit pick. Why was Jeanne using her sword? I was fairly certain she didn't draw it, even in life, except when using her suicide NP, hence why its such a big deal when she does.
5/9/2018 c32 Oran
Have you seen all the currently released Fate Extella Link trailers? Man is it awesome!
Also cool to see the Prototype Fragments Servants in action, Ozymandias fighting Semiramis and her Hanging Garden is pretty awesome. Great, now Brynhildr is all yandere-like on Karna as well. Cool to see Atalanta, Richard and Perseus surviving Heracles rampage. Nice Karna and Atalanta moment.
Now that Achilles is a playable Servant on FGO along with Chiron and Sieg, based on his dialogue, I'm curious how well he can fight against Heracles.
Have you seen all the currently released Fate Extella Link trailers? Man is it awesome!
Also cool to see the Prototype Fragments Servants in action, Ozymandias fighting Semiramis and her Hanging Garden is pretty awesome. Great, now Brynhildr is all yandere-like on Karna as well. Cool to see Atalanta, Richard and Perseus surviving Heracles rampage. Nice Karna and Atalanta moment.
Now that Achilles is a playable Servant on FGO along with Chiron and Sieg, based on his dialogue, I'm curious how well he can fight against Heracles.
4/22/2018 c32
36The Kingdom of Ruby Luxuria
you know, i was wondering if somehow shirou amakusa can have his epic reality marble. i know he is a ruler, but he really doesn't have anything else that could make him super dangerous. i mean, in this big chaotic war, his arms aren't exactly a big deal (also i am confused with what they can actually do, but i know you know stuff more than i do)
shimbara hell on the other hand...
can you make a list of who's who in the story? which servant in which team currently... it can get pretty overwhelming sometimes

you know, i was wondering if somehow shirou amakusa can have his epic reality marble. i know he is a ruler, but he really doesn't have anything else that could make him super dangerous. i mean, in this big chaotic war, his arms aren't exactly a big deal (also i am confused with what they can actually do, but i know you know stuff more than i do)
shimbara hell on the other hand...
can you make a list of who's who in the story? which servant in which team currently... it can get pretty overwhelming sometimes
4/22/2018 c17 Silver566
Will Guinevere and Arthur reunite/get back together again? Or will it end up being ArthurXJeanne
Will Guinevere and Arthur reunite/get back together again? Or will it end up being ArthurXJeanne
4/19/2018 c32
2Qweplar
This story is great I love the Arthur Mordred interactions. However I have a question. How will you make it a challenge for the main group to win? Because Gilgamesh is the strongest servant in the throne of heroes the only one that could pose a challenge is Karna but Achilles' shield can block Karna's nuke, so I am curious to see how are you going to see this through.

This story is great I love the Arthur Mordred interactions. However I have a question. How will you make it a challenge for the main group to win? Because Gilgamesh is the strongest servant in the throne of heroes the only one that could pose a challenge is Karna but Achilles' shield can block Karna's nuke, so I am curious to see how are you going to see this through.
4/9/2018 c32 Guest
I really love this fanfic! Jeanne is my favourite female servant of all time and Arthur is also one of my top favourite male servants so this fic is a dream come true for me! I'm curious though, what made you pair them up together in the first place? Keep up the good work both for this fic and IRL!
I really love this fanfic! Jeanne is my favourite female servant of all time and Arthur is also one of my top favourite male servants so this fic is a dream come true for me! I'm curious though, what made you pair them up together in the first place? Keep up the good work both for this fic and IRL!
4/9/2018 c32 Guest
Awww I was looking forward to seeing Jeanne getting dressed up and the servants teasing her. If you're not planning to put it in the main story, will you consider making it an omake? I'm not forcing you to writing it, just curious _
I really love this story though! Keep up the good work!
Awww I was looking forward to seeing Jeanne getting dressed up and the servants teasing her. If you're not planning to put it in the main story, will you consider making it an omake? I'm not forcing you to writing it, just curious _
I really love this story though! Keep up the good work!
3/30/2018 c32 Guest
Did kiritsugu summon Mordred she's the only one I know who somewhat matches the description.
Did kiritsugu summon Mordred she's the only one I know who somewhat matches the description.