for Fate Magnus Bellum10/12/2021 c9 Saemoon
I didn't know about Ayaka until this chapter but I want to know more about her so I hope Karna won't kill her or her servant... But Karna is so strong, it's hard to believe he could be defeated now...
Great chapter!
I didn't know about Ayaka until this chapter but I want to know more about her so I hope Karna won't kill her or her servant... But Karna is so strong, it's hard to believe he could be defeated now...
Great chapter!
10/7/2021 c34 Anonymous
Looking forward to the rewrite my request is that you do not take down the old version though and allow us to read both versions.
Looking forward to the rewrite my request is that you do not take down the old version though and allow us to read both versions.
10/2/2021 c5 Saemoon
Stand your ground Jeanne! You're Ruler, don't flinch away from Gilgamesh and Mordred when they're talking bad at you!
I just can't get myself to like Mordred... She's always screaming, talking badly to people and not being respectful... I hope this will change
I hoped to see Jeanne fight. I know she has a servant to do it for her but she's powerful and should be taken seriously by other servants and I don't feel like that's the case right now...
I love this story, thanks for sharing
Stand your ground Jeanne! You're Ruler, don't flinch away from Gilgamesh and Mordred when they're talking bad at you!
I just can't get myself to like Mordred... She's always screaming, talking badly to people and not being respectful... I hope this will change
I hoped to see Jeanne fight. I know she has a servant to do it for her but she's powerful and should be taken seriously by other servants and I don't feel like that's the case right now...
I love this story, thanks for sharing
10/1/2021 c2 Saemoon
I live this story so much! Thanks for writing it, it's so hard to find a good and long story about Arthur (male or female) and Jeanne! I nearly squealed when I found your story!
Aww I was a little bit sad when I saw that Frankenstein wouldn't be Caules' servant but it'll be great to know more about Bathory as I don't know much about her. And I'm happy to see Siegfried! I hope he won't die this time, I would love to know more about him!
I love the way you changed things, like the four servants that are acting outside of the Gail's influence, I can't wait to know more about them as well.
Keep up the excellent work!
I live this story so much! Thanks for writing it, it's so hard to find a good and long story about Arthur (male or female) and Jeanne! I nearly squealed when I found your story!
Aww I was a little bit sad when I saw that Frankenstein wouldn't be Caules' servant but it'll be great to know more about Bathory as I don't know much about her. And I'm happy to see Siegfried! I hope he won't die this time, I would love to know more about him!
I love the way you changed things, like the four servants that are acting outside of the Gail's influence, I can't wait to know more about them as well.
Keep up the excellent work!
9/27/2021 c34 Nearsighted
Seeing as how Arthur and Jeanne share the same voice actor and voice actress as Cloud Strife and Aerith Gainsborough. I thought it was pretty neat to see the pairing.
I mean Arthur does wield a big sword albeit not as big like Cloud and Jeanne does wield a polearm like Aerith.
Seeing as how Arthur and Jeanne share the same voice actor and voice actress as Cloud Strife and Aerith Gainsborough. I thought it was pretty neat to see the pairing.
I mean Arthur does wield a big sword albeit not as big like Cloud and Jeanne does wield a polearm like Aerith.
9/24/2021 c34 Yorozuya Forever
That's a real shame, it would have been nice to see the story get to it's ending and see the sequel that you had planned of Shirou and Hakuno. I mean I don't think there has been a lot of Fate Extra stories lately, excluding the crossover section of course.
Well I guess I may as well wait for the rewrite and hopefully the story gets a proper ending and the sequel.
That's a real shame, it would have been nice to see the story get to it's ending and see the sequel that you had planned of Shirou and Hakuno. I mean I don't think there has been a lot of Fate Extra stories lately, excluding the crossover section of course.
Well I guess I may as well wait for the rewrite and hopefully the story gets a proper ending and the sequel.
9/20/2021 c17 Guest
To Jorge Steven fuck off you troll.
To Jorge Steven fuck off you troll.
8/9/2021 c34 Marche V
Lmao I was wondering how you were managing with so many freaking Servants. Thanks for the read so far. It was really fun.
Lmao I was wondering how you were managing with so many freaking Servants. Thanks for the read so far. It was really fun.
8/9/2021 c33 Marche V
I think I remember reading somewhere that Karna's Vasavi Shakti's sheer firepower is so high that it can even kill Gods, instead of an Anti-Divine property per se.
Not saying anything is wrong since I can't seem to find where I read this but just thought I should mention.
I think I remember reading somewhere that Karna's Vasavi Shakti's sheer firepower is so high that it can even kill Gods, instead of an Anti-Divine property per se.
Not saying anything is wrong since I can't seem to find where I read this but just thought I should mention.
3/2/2021 c34 Guest
Looking forward to the rewrite !
Looking forward to the rewrite !
2/20/2021 c34 Guest
Cant wait for rewrite , i only hope you keep proto gilgamehs and richard lionheart as characters
Cant wait for rewrite , i only hope you keep proto gilgamehs and richard lionheart as characters
2/15/2021 c34 Giuseppe
Well, that's just sad I really like your story but I understand the matter, this pandemic do not help at all. I hope your relative gets better and, in general all your family have good health.
Good luck man, greetings from Lima, Peru.
Well, that's just sad I really like your story but I understand the matter, this pandemic do not help at all. I hope your relative gets better and, in general all your family have good health.
Good luck man, greetings from Lima, Peru.
2/14/2021 c34 Firefly
I may not be a writer myself, but as an artist I get your pain dear Author. It's so cringey and embarrassing to look back on your old work with a fresher perpective and see all the flaws in it haha ! Specially after a few years have passed and you got better... So yes, I relate, and I hope that you may have a good rewrite of your story at your own pace. Try not to worry too much over making a true masterpiece or reinventing the wheel of your fanfic tough, from what I remember from it's already quite good, and mental head bashing on your desk is quite an stressful thing to do if left unchecked after all ! You first, story second, so take care ! :D
I may not be a writer myself, but as an artist I get your pain dear Author. It's so cringey and embarrassing to look back on your old work with a fresher perpective and see all the flaws in it haha ! Specially after a few years have passed and you got better... So yes, I relate, and I hope that you may have a good rewrite of your story at your own pace. Try not to worry too much over making a true masterpiece or reinventing the wheel of your fanfic tough, from what I remember from it's already quite good, and mental head bashing on your desk is quite an stressful thing to do if left unchecked after all ! You first, story second, so take care ! :D
2/14/2021 c34 
6triscythe59
A shame that your letting this one go. One of the best Fate Fics ever, it was fun when it lasted. Looking forward to the rewrite!
6triscythe59A shame that your letting this one go. One of the best Fate Fics ever, it was fun when it lasted. Looking forward to the rewrite!