for Fate Magnus Bellum1/28/2017 c6 Xiumin Snape
Oh my! Jeanne Arthur scene is very cute. both of them is my favorite character in fate series.
about gilgamesh, I hope he will be a friend with Mordred lol
Oh my! Jeanne Arthur scene is very cute. both of them is my favorite character in fate series.
about gilgamesh, I hope he will be a friend with Mordred lol
1/3/2017 c8 Promakhos
*sighs*. I wish Gilgamesh would show some respect for Jeanne too. Seeing my favourite Fate character treated this way makes me frustrated! But I noticed that she is weaker in this fic. In light novel she was as strong as (maybe stronger than) Arturia had been. Her stats were awesome and she was really charismatic and badass. I hope she would show more "Ruler" like aspects of her personality as the story goes on.
*sighs*. I wish Gilgamesh would show some respect for Jeanne too. Seeing my favourite Fate character treated this way makes me frustrated! But I noticed that she is weaker in this fic. In light novel she was as strong as (maybe stronger than) Arturia had been. Her stats were awesome and she was really charismatic and badass. I hope she would show more "Ruler" like aspects of her personality as the story goes on.
1/1/2017 c25 Guest
I wonder in your upcoming KoW fanfic, is there gonna be a Ritsuka Fujimaru character from FGO will make an appearance/cameo there?
I wonder in your upcoming KoW fanfic, is there gonna be a Ritsuka Fujimaru character from FGO will make an appearance/cameo there?
12/31/2016 c25 
1PanickingNoob
An awesome fight X3. love all the match up n the suspense in each fight with who live or die :3. But wait I thought Lancer's Gae Bolg is a reverse cause spear. It not something 1 can just distort space since it like how to said this...from what it describe a sure kill move unless a higher level weapon like Excalibur or Gate of Babylon intercept it. While the portal thing is impressive I don't think it will work, at best Gae Bolg would pierce through it right away. That's all beside that like this chapter as always :3.
1PanickingNoobAn awesome fight X3. love all the match up n the suspense in each fight with who live or die :3. But wait I thought Lancer's Gae Bolg is a reverse cause spear. It not something 1 can just distort space since it like how to said this...from what it describe a sure kill move unless a higher level weapon like Excalibur or Gate of Babylon intercept it. While the portal thing is impressive I don't think it will work, at best Gae Bolg would pierce through it right away. That's all beside that like this chapter as always :3.
12/30/2016 c25 nomorehiatusplz
That was a very enjoyable chapter. It was very well written and I didn't notice any grammar errors while reading. But then again, after reading fan fiction for such a long time I tend to ignore grammatical mistakes. It looks like servants are starting to get knocked off the list. Can't wait for the next chapter!
That was a very enjoyable chapter. It was very well written and I didn't notice any grammar errors while reading. But then again, after reading fan fiction for such a long time I tend to ignore grammatical mistakes. It looks like servants are starting to get knocked off the list. Can't wait for the next chapter!
11/19/2016 c1 no one
just a question have you ever thought of using fate lucius tiberius rather than richard that would be a very fun grudge match
just a question have you ever thought of using fate lucius tiberius rather than richard that would be a very fun grudge match
10/17/2016 c24 Pluto iii
This was a awesome chapter, good characterization.
Question:
Do you will include Nero (red saber) in KofW? Because it can't be a fate/extra crossover without the adorable empress of Roma!
(fate/extra already have its own fanfiction page, probably a result of the game Extella and the new Anime Last Encore).
And thank you by including Fou, he is such kawaiii!
This was a awesome chapter, good characterization.
Question:
Do you will include Nero (red saber) in KofW? Because it can't be a fate/extra crossover without the adorable empress of Roma!
(fate/extra already have its own fanfiction page, probably a result of the game Extella and the new Anime Last Encore).
And thank you by including Fou, he is such kawaiii!
10/14/2016 c24 Kratos
I would like to apologize by my insensible commentaries in the past.
Curiosity:when Kirisugu and Irisviel adopted Shirou, how old was Illyasviel?
Because even kids as kind and gentle as she can be possessive of their parents attention.
And in this univerese both shirou and myui are fullblooded silings?
I would like to apologize by my insensible commentaries in the past.
Curiosity:when Kirisugu and Irisviel adopted Shirou, how old was Illyasviel?
Because even kids as kind and gentle as she can be possessive of their parents attention.
And in this univerese both shirou and myui are fullblooded silings?
10/14/2016 c24 Cain
This chapter was great, and i am disappointed that Karna's badass boast wasn't put in the tv tropes page.
I have some doubts:
In MB universe: Kiritsugu gets rid off all his weapons and gear or the Emiya household has a secret compartment hidden in a closet where are stored all firearms and knives from the Magus Killer ?
Does Alice Kounji lives in fuyuki?
This chapter was great, and i am disappointed that Karna's badass boast wasn't put in the tv tropes page.
I have some doubts:
In MB universe: Kiritsugu gets rid off all his weapons and gear or the Emiya household has a secret compartment hidden in a closet where are stored all firearms and knives from the Magus Killer ?
Does Alice Kounji lives in fuyuki?