for Fate Magnus Bellum2/14/2021 c34 Kenza
Yeah I guess the Class Cards may have been much, but since you are not including them in the rewrite, I guess we won't be seeing Servants like Karna and Atalanta, which kinda sucks, because I found their interaction to be interesting.
And yeah, while it is great that Arthur had a lot of character development, we didn't see much from Jeanne, her falling love with him is nice, but we never saw enough build up for that, and her character development didn't fully start until Act III.
Yeah I guess the Class Cards may have been much, but since you are not including them in the rewrite, I guess we won't be seeing Servants like Karna and Atalanta, which kinda sucks, because I found their interaction to be interesting.
And yeah, while it is great that Arthur had a lot of character development, we didn't see much from Jeanne, her falling love with him is nice, but we never saw enough build up for that, and her character development didn't fully start until Act III.
2/14/2021 c34 Yeet
Please don't edit the story, or put in on another thread. As i sometimes reread this story from time to time.
Please don't edit the story, or put in on another thread. As i sometimes reread this story from time to time.
2/14/2021 c34 Turtleeagle
I am sad to see this go, but I understand why you are rewriting it. The class card system in particular came out of left field. But please do not delete this story. This is one of my favorite stories, and it made me a Arthur/Jeanne shipper. I hope the next story, you keep Arthur in it, and keep that dynamic between them. Good luck, I look forward to your rewrite.
I am sad to see this go, but I understand why you are rewriting it. The class card system in particular came out of left field. But please do not delete this story. This is one of my favorite stories, and it made me a Arthur/Jeanne shipper. I hope the next story, you keep Arthur in it, and keep that dynamic between them. Good luck, I look forward to your rewrite.
2/14/2021 c34 Dxhologram
This makes me sad, but it's understandable. I'd still hope certain Servants will still be in the story, though it could be unlikely.
I hope things will get better for you.
This makes me sad, but it's understandable. I'd still hope certain Servants will still be in the story, though it could be unlikely.
I hope things will get better for you.
2/14/2021 c34 
1Reaper7heGrim
The story was definitely starting to drag in the last few chapters, so this is good news. Cant wait to read the rewrite.
1Reaper7heGrimThe story was definitely starting to drag in the last few chapters, so this is good news. Cant wait to read the rewrite.
2/14/2021 c1 Dan1142000
Yea class cards were weird for me here and i was a bit puzzled on their apearance in this story. And i do agree that about your selfcriticism on Jeanne as most of her characterisation and development throught this fic was her finding out that she is indeed in love with Arthur. You can try to introduce Gilles in the story to help help her development.
Yea class cards were weird for me here and i was a bit puzzled on their apearance in this story. And i do agree that about your selfcriticism on Jeanne as most of her characterisation and development throught this fic was her finding out that she is indeed in love with Arthur. You can try to introduce Gilles in the story to help help her development.
2/14/2021 c34 Volfy790
Welp I kinda expected this but thank goodness you're still gonna make a remake tho. Now that there is a lot more new lore in FGO especially for beast vi in the coming lost belt 6, hopefully, you can integrate those in the remake. Stay safe and I look forward to that incoming remake of this.
Welp I kinda expected this but thank goodness you're still gonna make a remake tho. Now that there is a lot more new lore in FGO especially for beast vi in the coming lost belt 6, hopefully, you can integrate those in the remake. Stay safe and I look forward to that incoming remake of this.
2/14/2021 c34 Soleilis
Well, your fanfic is decent to be honest. But yeah, class card appear out nowhere a bit weird, then they can becomes servant which give me WTF. jpeg. At same time i just dissapointed you're gonna cancelled this fanfic even at bit weird some time like class card, i want to see this fanfic thorought the end. Well you maybe plan to rewrite this, but have you has clear vision how your rewrite fanfic to end?... because if not then it's just end up same with this fanfic.
Well, your fanfic is decent to be honest. But yeah, class card appear out nowhere a bit weird, then they can becomes servant which give me WTF. jpeg. At same time i just dissapointed you're gonna cancelled this fanfic even at bit weird some time like class card, i want to see this fanfic thorought the end. Well you maybe plan to rewrite this, but have you has clear vision how your rewrite fanfic to end?... because if not then it's just end up same with this fanfic.
2/14/2021 c34 ThatGrayFan
Thats okay! Do you know when we should expect the rewrite to start being posted?
Thats okay! Do you know when we should expect the rewrite to start being posted?
2/14/2021 c34 33Gundam-Knight-Chris
Dude, I totally understand what you mean. I've been playing PSO2 nonstop when it came out and between that and my job, hardly had anytime to work on my stuff. So take your time.
33Gundam-Knight-ChrisDude, I totally understand what you mean. I've been playing PSO2 nonstop when it came out and between that and my job, hardly had anytime to work on my stuff. So take your time.
2/14/2021 c33 FGOrider23
Since I already answered my own question I'm going to reread this all over again. Then if I can find any fault you can use for the rewrite I'mma comment it. At mag Pipinoy na rin ako. First time ko makakita ng Pinoy author dito sa FF. NET. Wawaw!
Since I already answered my own question I'm going to reread this all over again. Then if I can find any fault you can use for the rewrite I'mma comment it. At mag Pipinoy na rin ako. First time ko makakita ng Pinoy author dito sa FF. NET. Wawaw!
2/14/2021 c34 AVL04
I'll 100% enjoy the rewrite, this version really became too much, with the cards appearing literally everywhere, and deaths feeling cheap.
I'll 100% enjoy the rewrite, this version really became too much, with the cards appearing literally everywhere, and deaths feeling cheap.
2/14/2021 c34 FGOrider23
Knew it was coming sooner or later. The way you write the story smells like testing the waters in my opinion. Like there are scenes which you can change for the better outcome yet you didn't do so to see how it goes.
Don't worry bud, your loyal fans are patient-including me. Just hope that the rewrite comes out better. Also, are you Filipino by any chances?
Knew it was coming sooner or later. The way you write the story smells like testing the waters in my opinion. Like there are scenes which you can change for the better outcome yet you didn't do so to see how it goes.
Don't worry bud, your loyal fans are patient-including me. Just hope that the rewrite comes out better. Also, are you Filipino by any chances?