for Fate Magnus Bellum5/26/2016 c18 
6mastergamer98007
Hmm...this is a great story you've got here mister, looking forward to the future.
6mastergamer98007Hmm...this is a great story you've got here mister, looking forward to the future.
5/25/2016 c1 Guest
Older not always means more powerful or better.
Example: Heracles its Perseus' great grandson. what means that he is 4generations younger.
And Chiron, Medusa, Perseus along Ares and Thanatos are all older than Heracles and he still outclass all them. and the latter two he did this before full ascension to godhood. but big H its a rare special case so i apologizes if i offended you, i just wanna make a comment. because i read a lot of type moon fics and no one before explained about: for every rule always will have at least one exception.
nor implied.
other example its that Cu Chulann and the other Ireland heroics spirits are even matched or surpassed by the Knights of Round that at least a few centuries younger that the Ulster cycle.
i sincerely expected not have been rude,
I wish good luck and expect that in the future your fic surpass all the others that i read so far.
Older not always means more powerful or better.
Example: Heracles its Perseus' great grandson. what means that he is 4generations younger.
And Chiron, Medusa, Perseus along Ares and Thanatos are all older than Heracles and he still outclass all them. and the latter two he did this before full ascension to godhood. but big H its a rare special case so i apologizes if i offended you, i just wanna make a comment. because i read a lot of type moon fics and no one before explained about: for every rule always will have at least one exception.
nor implied.
other example its that Cu Chulann and the other Ireland heroics spirits are even matched or surpassed by the Knights of Round that at least a few centuries younger that the Ulster cycle.
i sincerely expected not have been rude,
I wish good luck and expect that in the future your fic surpass all the others that i read so far.
5/25/2016 c18 unknown
leonheart vs Arthur m so excited you are the best
leonheart vs Arthur m so excited you are the best
5/25/2016 c16 1chronotimeguard
I actually find myself being a Karna/Atalanta shipper. Despite the very few scene they have together their interaction is something I find very interesting.
1chronotimeguardI actually find myself being a Karna/Atalanta shipper. Despite the very few scene they have together their interaction is something I find very interesting.
5/25/2016 c18 Code Zero
Altair-san, how the red faction did make Achilles cheat out Gilgamesh in the game of janken or how Shirou and Semiramis managed hide their secrets without he release?
I am asking because while restrained, the NP:Sha Nagba Imuru its constantly active and wouldn't allow him be tricked.
Altair-san, how the red faction did make Achilles cheat out Gilgamesh in the game of janken or how Shirou and Semiramis managed hide their secrets without he release?
I am asking because while restrained, the NP:Sha Nagba Imuru its constantly active and wouldn't allow him be tricked.
5/25/2016 c18 Black 13
Wonderful! Congratulations 00-san, i knew that you deserve a place in the Tv Tropes.
But, if i read right. You said that Rin went to Finland?
This means "that person" will meet her and chaos will happen, right?
Who do you consider the strongest son of the bitch between the male servants?
I don't want offend but i don't know very badass phrases.
Wonderful! Congratulations 00-san, i knew that you deserve a place in the Tv Tropes.
But, if i read right. You said that Rin went to Finland?
This means "that person" will meet her and chaos will happen, right?
Who do you consider the strongest son of the bitch between the male servants?
I don't want offend but i don't know very badass phrases.
5/24/2016 c18 ordinarybystandr
So Ayaka's Tokiomi mother in this verse (unless the Skyscraper President from the OVA is actually part of the Tohsaka family in this verse, I'm okay with this headcanon), interesting. But, at least it's good to see Ayaka. And it's understandable for StrangeFake's Ayaka to be nicknamed Aya, as seen in Zelretch's book in Strange Fake Manga. And Caster is actually Casko from EXTRA, well that beats my guess for Gilles, but she's fine too. And looks like Fou/Cath Palug (and perhaps with a help from a certain Magus of Flowers) the one who help save the children from the Excaliblast. Nice. Keep it up.
BTW, about Arthur's son you came up with, Lucius Pendragon, in the previous chapters. To me, I imagine his appearance to look (a bit) exactly like/similar to Swallow Cratsvalley/Sweallow Clazzvali from Red Dragon/Chaos Dragon.
So Ayaka's Tokiomi mother in this verse (unless the Skyscraper President from the OVA is actually part of the Tohsaka family in this verse, I'm okay with this headcanon), interesting. But, at least it's good to see Ayaka. And it's understandable for StrangeFake's Ayaka to be nicknamed Aya, as seen in Zelretch's book in Strange Fake Manga. And Caster is actually Casko from EXTRA, well that beats my guess for Gilles, but she's fine too. And looks like Fou/Cath Palug (and perhaps with a help from a certain Magus of Flowers) the one who help save the children from the Excaliblast. Nice. Keep it up.
BTW, about Arthur's son you came up with, Lucius Pendragon, in the previous chapters. To me, I imagine his appearance to look (a bit) exactly like/similar to Swallow Cratsvalley/Sweallow Clazzvali from Red Dragon/Chaos Dragon.
5/24/2016 c18 1PanickingNoob
Nice we get to know more of the last war. Also I just got to say Arthur situation is just like Arturia with how another Servant mistook him for someone he is not XD. Also wonder who saved the children then?
1PanickingNoobNice we get to know more of the last war. Also I just got to say Arthur situation is just like Arturia with how another Servant mistook him for someone he is not XD. Also wonder who saved the children then?
5/24/2016 c18 No need be weak
this chapter was brilliant!
but i am want know its why Arthur don't tell to his allies about the Ramesses's NPs, Sphinx of Abul el-Hol and the powerful Mesektet?
will Iskandar invite Richard and Ramesses to a drink?
because i don't think in this point temporary truce be a option, he can even either make Arthur, Jeanne, Medea, Mordred, Elizabeth, Waver, Caules, Fiore, Aya, Ayaka and Kairi frustrated and irritated with such in the case of Gilgamesh, furious and coleric by calling the Pharaoh to their encounter. but Achilles would use this as a opportunity to ask Richard send a message to Perseus.
this chapter was brilliant!
but i am want know its why Arthur don't tell to his allies about the Ramesses's NPs, Sphinx of Abul el-Hol and the powerful Mesektet?
will Iskandar invite Richard and Ramesses to a drink?
because i don't think in this point temporary truce be a option, he can even either make Arthur, Jeanne, Medea, Mordred, Elizabeth, Waver, Caules, Fiore, Aya, Ayaka and Kairi frustrated and irritated with such in the case of Gilgamesh, furious and coleric by calling the Pharaoh to their encounter. but Achilles would use this as a opportunity to ask Richard send a message to Perseus.
5/24/2016 c18 Cain
curiosity.
in F/MB universe. Kairi and Kiritsugu fought each-other in the past or worked together?. because usually mercenaries tend to come in conflit or work as a team depending of their employer.
and when Ramssess show up in the front of the allied faction, proudly declaring his title.
Gilgamesh will say something like:" King of Knights, Dragonslayer and King of Conquerors don't dare to interfere! this insolent fool its mine!", right?
curiosity.
in F/MB universe. Kairi and Kiritsugu fought each-other in the past or worked together?. because usually mercenaries tend to come in conflit or work as a team depending of their employer.
and when Ramssess show up in the front of the allied faction, proudly declaring his title.
Gilgamesh will say something like:" King of Knights, Dragonslayer and King of Conquerors don't dare to interfere! this insolent fool its mine!", right?
5/24/2016 c18 Orphee
00-dono, i forgot to ask something, and just remember today.
in the chapter where Arthur and Mordred had their duel, Gilgamesh mentioned about a beast wich he had to kill and compared this to Mordred to this beast.
What i want, he was talking about the Humbaba or the Bull of Heaven?
because both are really troublesome.
00-dono, i forgot to ask something, and just remember today.
in the chapter where Arthur and Mordred had their duel, Gilgamesh mentioned about a beast wich he had to kill and compared this to Mordred to this beast.
What i want, he was talking about the Humbaba or the Bull of Heaven?
because both are really troublesome.
5/22/2016 c17 Cain
so, Arthur and probably Shirou Amakusa are genre savy enough to tell their allies about the capabilities of Ozymandias, Brinhyld, Arash and Heracles.
Achilles lost every bit of respect he had by Perseus, right?
Karna, i bet that he will be anxious to challenge Heracles, Ozymandias and Brinhyld
so, Arthur and probably Shirou Amakusa are genre savy enough to tell their allies about the capabilities of Ozymandias, Brinhyld, Arash and Heracles.
Achilles lost every bit of respect he had by Perseus, right?
Karna, i bet that he will be anxious to challenge Heracles, Ozymandias and Brinhyld