for Fate Magnus Bellum5/22/2016 c17 Code Zero
Altair-san, in your story when Proto-Gilgamesh was sumoned by Reines, he was sumoned in his throne?
And i want say a compliment, you're very compassionate, giving Fiore her use of her legs and shipping
Ayaka and Caules.
Altair-san, in your story when Proto-Gilgamesh was sumoned by Reines, he was sumoned in his throne?
And i want say a compliment, you're very compassionate, giving Fiore her use of her legs and shipping
Ayaka and Caules.
5/22/2016 c17 Black 13
Does Tokiomi have a brother in your story?!
So what its his name?
Does Tokiomi have a brother in your story?!
So what its his name?
5/21/2016 c17 ordinary bystand
So, Ayaka's grandmother (aka PrototypeAyaka) is still alive? Hmm, makes me wonder who she married to after the war, before giving birth to child who then marries to one of the Tohsaka family members. The President of Tokyo's Skyscraper (AKA Archer's Master from the Prototype's OVA and Character Material)? Or someone new or someone familiar in Nasuverse? Anyway, good story! And I'm really liking the interaction between Ayaka and Caules.
So, Ayaka's grandmother (aka PrototypeAyaka) is still alive? Hmm, makes me wonder who she married to after the war, before giving birth to child who then marries to one of the Tohsaka family members. The President of Tokyo's Skyscraper (AKA Archer's Master from the Prototype's OVA and Character Material)? Or someone new or someone familiar in Nasuverse? Anyway, good story! And I'm really liking the interaction between Ayaka and Caules.
5/20/2016 c17 Guest
Good synopsis, along character development.
Just to confirm, you already know that True Archer(F/SF) its An Heracles human, without divinity?
Will elder Ayaka ask to King Arthur if he remember her?
Good synopsis, along character development.
Just to confirm, you already know that True Archer(F/SF) its An Heracles human, without divinity?
Will elder Ayaka ask to King Arthur if he remember her?
5/20/2016 c17 No need be weak
Julian will be suffering An. "break the haughty"?
Because his dickness annoys not only me but probably several any fans and readers.
Julian will be suffering An. "break the haughty"?
Because his dickness annoys not only me but probably several any fans and readers.
5/19/2016 c17 No need be weak
impressive, Arthur managed deduce black knight berserker's identity, he understand why Jeanne hide this from him?
i made some possible deductions about the identities of the other two extra servants of Rogue faction:
Saber: Lancer:
Gawain Diarmuid
Richard I Enkidu
impressive, Arthur managed deduce black knight berserker's identity, he understand why Jeanne hide this from him?
i made some possible deductions about the identities of the other two extra servants of Rogue faction:
Saber: Lancer:
Gawain Diarmuid
Richard I Enkidu
5/18/2016 c17 Orphee
00-dono, curiosity, Arthur smacked Cu Chullann before the travel or he will let to do this after the Alliance makes their base in Ayaka's grandmother's house?
Oh and a review of a reader of the last chapter asked to you about EMIYA appearing.
But i don't think that its possible, after all, no Great Fire, no Broken Kiritsugu( i mean no cursed, the man its already broken after natalia incidents) and no Shirou inheriting flawed ideals.
00-dono, curiosity, Arthur smacked Cu Chullann before the travel or he will let to do this after the Alliance makes their base in Ayaka's grandmother's house?
Oh and a review of a reader of the last chapter asked to you about EMIYA appearing.
But i don't think that its possible, after all, no Great Fire, no Broken Kiritsugu( i mean no cursed, the man its already broken after natalia incidents) and no Shirou inheriting flawed ideals.
5/18/2016 c17 Kratos
Ok, sorry!
I get very surprised and excited that since the first battle of Red vs Black when you used funny moments whose theme its breasts( Gil leering Jeanne) or Manaka's thinking about Arthur's fetish or the joke that the hound of ulster posted about the former!
Ok, sorry!
I get very surprised and excited that since the first battle of Red vs Black when you used funny moments whose theme its breasts( Gil leering Jeanne) or Manaka's thinking about Arthur's fetish or the joke that the hound of ulster posted about the former!
5/18/2016 c17 
1PanickingNoob
Cool chapter :D. And yeah when it come to myth like this, seeing each person interpret of it is always interesting. I mean Servants by themselves were interpret using their original legend as a mold right? So it kind of a Type Moon theme really XD. So don't worry about it, as the same time the legend did said Lancelot and Guinevere become a monk and a nun respectively...I think. Wait there is monk in Camelot? (0_0) I thought the term wanderer would more fit but okay. Anyway imagining all the Servants and Masters on a craft XD. Oh God this is just disaster waiting to happen, hilarity disaster of course, as the same time maybe I missed it but where is Archer of Red? I thought he would make a face and said how beneath him or something XD...wait maybe he really didn't board the plane because of that.
Anywho see no problem with this, enjoy the chapter and yes! More Servants fight next and back to where it begin! Japan! Are we maybe going to c some Emiya Shirou cameo along with Fate Stay Night cast? :D.
1PanickingNoobCool chapter :D. And yeah when it come to myth like this, seeing each person interpret of it is always interesting. I mean Servants by themselves were interpret using their original legend as a mold right? So it kind of a Type Moon theme really XD. So don't worry about it, as the same time the legend did said Lancelot and Guinevere become a monk and a nun respectively...I think. Wait there is monk in Camelot? (0_0) I thought the term wanderer would more fit but okay. Anyway imagining all the Servants and Masters on a craft XD. Oh God this is just disaster waiting to happen, hilarity disaster of course, as the same time maybe I missed it but where is Archer of Red? I thought he would make a face and said how beneath him or something XD...wait maybe he really didn't board the plane because of that.
Anywho see no problem with this, enjoy the chapter and yes! More Servants fight next and back to where it begin! Japan! Are we maybe going to c some Emiya Shirou cameo along with Fate Stay Night cast? :D.
5/18/2016 c17 13ShishiroBotan
Honest review: Your fanfict is officially regarded as one of truly fanfict that close to creating an original alternate version of fate universe
Anyway, I took an interest on how arthur-jeanne relationship along with mordred-arthur. Can I expect about Mordred gonna call jeanne as mom soon? Or maybe epic Gilgamesh using Motocycle to literally smashing lancelot's face?
Joke aside, I also have few questions regarding few things.
-if this fict are connected from four series (Apocrypha, Kaleid, Zero and Prototype), can I expect another characters from other fate series to be appeared soon?
-I am still wondering if Jeanne had a chance to transform into her Alter version.
-one more, are you playing FGO?
That's all I think.
13ShishiroBotanHonest review: Your fanfict is officially regarded as one of truly fanfict that close to creating an original alternate version of fate universe
Anyway, I took an interest on how arthur-jeanne relationship along with mordred-arthur. Can I expect about Mordred gonna call jeanne as mom soon? Or maybe epic Gilgamesh using Motocycle to literally smashing lancelot's face?
Joke aside, I also have few questions regarding few things.
-if this fict are connected from four series (Apocrypha, Kaleid, Zero and Prototype), can I expect another characters from other fate series to be appeared soon?
-I am still wondering if Jeanne had a chance to transform into her Alter version.
-one more, are you playing FGO?
That's all I think.
5/17/2016 c16 No need be weak
In the war of half-century ago, in your story the servants that fought were:
Saber:Arthur Pendragon
Lancer:Brynhild
Archer:Arash
Berserker:Heracles
Assassin:Hassan-I-Sabbath( the woman with ability of poison body)
Rider:Ozymandias/Ramsses II
Ruler:Shirou Tokisada Amakusa
Caster:?
Am i correct?
Its incredible that the leader of the rogue faction managed to survive to this chaos specially with 5 super monsters.
When Saber will tells to his allies about the capabilities of his old opponents? In the flight? Or when they had estabilished their new headquarters?
In the war of half-century ago, in your story the servants that fought were:
Saber:Arthur Pendragon
Lancer:Brynhild
Archer:Arash
Berserker:Heracles
Assassin:Hassan-I-Sabbath( the woman with ability of poison body)
Rider:Ozymandias/Ramsses II
Ruler:Shirou Tokisada Amakusa
Caster:?
Am i correct?
Its incredible that the leader of the rogue faction managed to survive to this chaos specially with 5 super monsters.
When Saber will tells to his allies about the capabilities of his old opponents? In the flight? Or when they had estabilished their new headquarters?