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5/17/2016 c16 Orphee
00-dono, i like very much of all funny scenes until now, but can i ask why Cu Chulainn and Achilles didn't try make a pass or even flirts with Jeanne? because I already saw Hollow Ataraxia Lancer try flirts Altria and read about Achilles attempts flirt Atalanta.

I want know, besides of C-Lancer, some other man will try spy the women bathing?
and you will show a flashback showing Lancer spying Jeanne or least he making shameless comentaries?
5/16/2016 c16 Kratos
00, how long?
Good chapter,
I am liking very much of this,
Curiosity, in the possibility of sequel, or, you're going to use the servants of F/GO ?
And you can't complain about this question above because its about your story, and I'm sorry if i am being bit rude about this.
Medea knows that if she attempts to use the rule-breaker in Arthur or other possible servant this will make Jeanne punish her with a command spell.
5/15/2016 c16 1PanickingNoob
Wow after all that this is really good (_). Thanks for all the great chapters enjoyed all of it, will be waiting for next chap.
5/15/2016 c15 PanickingNoob
Well that was a suspend conclusion temporarily for the War. And now thing is so chaotic I think it more chaotic than someone who didn't know anything about Doctor Who just suddenly watch Season 9...which was something I did...and paid the prize for it...(-_-) Ah Aspirin what I would have do without it.
5/15/2016 c14 PanickingNoob
Oh that just Gold! XD. All hail the gold motorcycle! XD. As the same time well things just get chaotic to downright Hellish! DX.
5/15/2016 c13 PanickingNoob
interesting fight XD and finally the other Ruler appeared XD
5/15/2016 c12 PanickingNoob
Well like it said crap hitting the fan XD. And yeah I think this Banquet was good enough XD Really how can we really predict 100% each words and action a character could take? They are not robot but character with personality as such in life a person doesn't act in a format, sometimes random action can be take, what important is the core of character still being focus on and I think that is something u did right here.
5/15/2016 c11 PanickingNoob
Yeah in Illya from what I know the Class Card basically just summon a much inferior version of the hero. They kind of like a dummy installed with their skills. Powerful, yes. But no where compare to a fully summoned Heroic Spirit who retain their mind and instinct plus experience. As the same time well Arthur got that right XD. And a shout out to Emiya Shirou XD...something always confuse me is the timeline though, if the Third Grail War was the last war before Apocrypha event then is Shirou and Rin even born yet? Cause in Fourth Grail War, Rin is barely 5 or 6 and each War take apart each other at least 10 years.
5/15/2016 c10 PanickingNoob
Well good fight, like how u combine concept of Card Systems in this XD. And as always enjoy Saber and Ruler banter.
5/15/2016 c10 14Getsunohimesama
There is a Lancer joke somewhere in this fight, but since they are both Lancers it just doesn't want to come out. For shame.
Sure is nice of Karna to not want to kill Ayaka. -_-
Wait, is it possible for his armor to be pierced by Gae Bolg? I mean, I know that it is supposedly a spear that is impossible to dodge, but Karna's Noble Phantasm (all of them) rank higher than Gae Bolg, so... shouldn't he have dodged? Or have his armor absorb the damage?
Not that he seems to be particularly affected by the fact that a cursed spear just turned his heart to ribbons. XD

Oh look, the psycho loli! Long time, no see Manaka-chan! :D

No trouble she cannot handle on her own? Like falling into a trap set by Shirou and Semiramis, having to face Atalanta on her own, and most likely any allies Kotomine has on stand-by? THAT sort of trouble?
The irony of King Arthur cutting down Robin Hood is not lost on me. I only wish that it had been King Richard instead. XD
Very observant of you Robin, to notice that the hand on the ground is yours. Good job.
The Gil-Gil Machine! XD This is not Robin's day. This is not his day at all. XD XD XD
Scathach is so tsundere people die with but a glance of her angered eyes!
I only pity the poor fool who will accidentally scratch Gilgamesh's

XD There is a certain feeling to watching the infamous Jeanne D' Arc hit the King of Camelot with a shoe. XD
No Lancer, not THAT Gilgamesh, just a namesake. You know, since naming your child with the gazillion Noble Phantasms "Gilgamesh" is all the rage right now. -_-

Is that girl with the Class Card Beatrice? THE Beatrice? And the creepy count continues to rise...

I get the feeling that the Class Cards are somehow responsible for the rogue Servants... maybe in a similar manner as in Prisma Illya? Somehow "equipped" on puppet bodies? Ah, but anyway, I really loved this chapter! It just kind of packed comedy and action all in one, and I am a sucker for both. XD Great job!
5/15/2016 c9 1PanickingNoob
I c...oh well I enjoyed the interact of Siefried with fellow Servants at least (_). Also wonder what Ayaka know that cause Shirou to pursue her? And Julian too...never like that kid (-_-;). Well let c where this all lead XD.
5/15/2016 c8 PanickingNoob
Well the fight ended quite bad for Red, if only Lubu manage to unleash his Noble Phantasm...man even now the one who bring his undoing is ultimately the soldiers and not the big general XD. I mean if he didn't get distracted no way Lancer can land that hit XD. Still now with more clue being revealed thing can only get more chaotic.
5/15/2016 c7 PanickingNoob
Great cant even review now XD. Too tempted to press the next button XD. But great job!
5/15/2016 c6 PanickingNoob
Nice! XD Being part Chinese myself there is no way I don't know of him XD. Heck just being in Asian and sooner or later you bound to hear his name once or twice in your life. Now then let's the war begin XD...also fun interact between Saber and Ruler XD.
5/15/2016 c5 PanickingNoob
Nonsense XD. This chapter was filled with great suspense! And the fight scene was great too XD. All in all it like I am reading a real work of the canon if Proto-Saber was summoned for Ruler XD.
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