
5/15/2016 c4
1PanickingNoob
Cool XD. The meeting finally happen as the same time would Sieg still in this story I wonder? (0_0)

Cool XD. The meeting finally happen as the same time would Sieg still in this story I wonder? (0_0)
5/15/2016 c3 PanickingNoob
It was a good chapter XD. And for Julian to be here too? Dang so many different plot revealing itself XD. And this is only 3rd chapter.
It was a good chapter XD. And for Julian to be here too? Dang so many different plot revealing itself XD. And this is only 3rd chapter.
5/15/2016 c2 PanickingNoob
Indeed XD. I glad u didn't remove Karna. Seeing him fight against Proto Saber alone is satisfying XD. As the same time good job with the fic there. Cant wait to c how this will go :D.
Indeed XD. I glad u didn't remove Karna. Seeing him fight against Proto Saber alone is satisfying XD. As the same time good job with the fic there. Cant wait to c how this will go :D.
5/14/2016 c9
14Getsunohimesama
Multiple men? So, hypothetically speaking, if they HAD pulled the sword out, would they all be Kings? I wonder how Merlin would have reacted to that one.
Oh my God Arthur, you can't just TALK about that one time! XD
It's because Merlin is weird. He leaves an impression of weird wherever he makes an appearence, even in someone's dream.
The only person that can rival Jeanne's appetite is Altria herself it seems. XD
Would you look at that, Robin Hood and Atalanta fight enough to have earned their very own demi-god babysitter. XD
Aw, the teasing between Archer and Archer is just too adorable. :D
XD XD XD XD The drinking contest to end all drinking contests! XD XD XD
I swear, Gilgamesh will one day die in horrible pain, with his spleen having exploded inside him. It cannot be possible to drink THAT much! I mean, Alexander is passed out and he is 3 times as big!
Poor Assassin. He may not actually be around enough for most to really care, but the poor guy just... :(
Yep, Caules just regularly parades around with a Love Live poster, just in case someone doesn't realise what Elizabeth means. Truly, a most thoughtful Master. XD
Haha, I half expected Astolfo to answer something along the lines of "cake". XD
Didin't Jeanne poke his eyes? I mean, I can see where she is coming from, however poking someone's eyes doesn't really qualify as comfort... right?
Poor Jeanne. XD The King of Knights is an unrepentant, teasing force of nature. XD
Merlin's pranks were always a bit on the wild side though. I wouldn't imagine that anyone who might have accidentally exploded would feel better about it because Merlin's heart was in the right place. XD
Sounds to me like the Kotomine family attracts Babylonian alcoholic sociopaths like light attracts a moth.
Rin and Sakura? Cousins? Rin and Sakura? :D :D :D That means that Sakura is kept away from the Matous? :D The happiness is real! :D
Also, how come the Tohsaka family has adopted Ayaka? And how come they are relatives in the first place?
Classic Kotomine: always making everything as needlessly awkward as possible. Because reasons. Shirou may not be a Kotomine by blood, however his adopted brother is clearly rubbing off on him.
Cu Chulainn VS Karna? Yep, it seems that my life has meaning. XD
Someone's chest, actually. Apparently, if a Hero transplants a vital internal organ into a Fate protagonist, biology is not allowed to interfere. Anime logic?

Multiple men? So, hypothetically speaking, if they HAD pulled the sword out, would they all be Kings? I wonder how Merlin would have reacted to that one.
Oh my God Arthur, you can't just TALK about that one time! XD
It's because Merlin is weird. He leaves an impression of weird wherever he makes an appearence, even in someone's dream.
The only person that can rival Jeanne's appetite is Altria herself it seems. XD
Would you look at that, Robin Hood and Atalanta fight enough to have earned their very own demi-god babysitter. XD
Aw, the teasing between Archer and Archer is just too adorable. :D
XD XD XD XD The drinking contest to end all drinking contests! XD XD XD
I swear, Gilgamesh will one day die in horrible pain, with his spleen having exploded inside him. It cannot be possible to drink THAT much! I mean, Alexander is passed out and he is 3 times as big!
Poor Assassin. He may not actually be around enough for most to really care, but the poor guy just... :(
Yep, Caules just regularly parades around with a Love Live poster, just in case someone doesn't realise what Elizabeth means. Truly, a most thoughtful Master. XD
Haha, I half expected Astolfo to answer something along the lines of "cake". XD
Didin't Jeanne poke his eyes? I mean, I can see where she is coming from, however poking someone's eyes doesn't really qualify as comfort... right?
Poor Jeanne. XD The King of Knights is an unrepentant, teasing force of nature. XD
Merlin's pranks were always a bit on the wild side though. I wouldn't imagine that anyone who might have accidentally exploded would feel better about it because Merlin's heart was in the right place. XD
Sounds to me like the Kotomine family attracts Babylonian alcoholic sociopaths like light attracts a moth.
Rin and Sakura? Cousins? Rin and Sakura? :D :D :D That means that Sakura is kept away from the Matous? :D The happiness is real! :D
Also, how come the Tohsaka family has adopted Ayaka? And how come they are relatives in the first place?
Classic Kotomine: always making everything as needlessly awkward as possible. Because reasons. Shirou may not be a Kotomine by blood, however his adopted brother is clearly rubbing off on him.
Cu Chulainn VS Karna? Yep, it seems that my life has meaning. XD
Someone's chest, actually. Apparently, if a Hero transplants a vital internal organ into a Fate protagonist, biology is not allowed to interfere. Anime logic?
5/14/2016 c16 Guest
Okay, this fanfic is a masterpiece! You've GOT to post this on AO3 site as well! They will love this!
Okay, this fanfic is a masterpiece! You've GOT to post this on AO3 site as well! They will love this!
5/14/2016 c16 ilover145
Ohohoho~
Arthur, you perv...and what's with the sudden shift in background at the last part along with the mention of the other child he had? And I really thought that Gray was going to give him Rhongomyniad.
On another note, Jeanne's realized her/Leticia's feelings. I'm actually expecting some sort of confrontation between Manaka and Jeanne concerning their feelings for Arthur at some point thanks to this chapter.
Also, what's Mordred's choice concerning her wish? Now that she knows the truth behind the Grail, will she continue pursuing her wish or not. Not to mention, it's only a matter of time before she snaps at Arthur for giving her mixed signals on whether or not he actually hates her.
I can't wait to see where this all goes. Nicely done! :D
Ohohoho~
Arthur, you perv...and what's with the sudden shift in background at the last part along with the mention of the other child he had? And I really thought that Gray was going to give him Rhongomyniad.
On another note, Jeanne's realized her/Leticia's feelings. I'm actually expecting some sort of confrontation between Manaka and Jeanne concerning their feelings for Arthur at some point thanks to this chapter.
Also, what's Mordred's choice concerning her wish? Now that she knows the truth behind the Grail, will she continue pursuing her wish or not. Not to mention, it's only a matter of time before she snaps at Arthur for giving her mixed signals on whether or not he actually hates her.
I can't wait to see where this all goes. Nicely done! :D
5/13/2016 c16 Amatsumi
Thank you for updating this fast. Still I lost about what thier goals are in here. Sajyou wanted to end all with the Beast 666, Shirou originally wanted to edit evil out of existence and Julian wanted Humanity to survive if that even is his goal. Still waiting for the reveal regarding this on lated chapters.
Despite that this isn't Prisma Ilya verse, is the Grain related event happening in this universe?
Out of curiosity, because of these events happening that can possibly threathen Human race, will EMIYA be summoned either as a Servant or Counter Guardian?
Karna and Atalanta, thier interaction is for friendship rather than Shipping right?
Thank you for updating.
Thank you for updating this fast. Still I lost about what thier goals are in here. Sajyou wanted to end all with the Beast 666, Shirou originally wanted to edit evil out of existence and Julian wanted Humanity to survive if that even is his goal. Still waiting for the reveal regarding this on lated chapters.
Despite that this isn't Prisma Ilya verse, is the Grain related event happening in this universe?
Out of curiosity, because of these events happening that can possibly threathen Human race, will EMIYA be summoned either as a Servant or Counter Guardian?
Karna and Atalanta, thier interaction is for friendship rather than Shipping right?
Thank you for updating.
5/13/2016 c8
14Getsunohimesama
Quick thinking on Gilgamesh's part, but would it really be possible to meddle with the Grail in such a manner? I mean, if the Black Faction had the ability to pass false information through the Grail to Jeanne, doesn't that mean they would have been able to halt her summoning in the first place?
Of course Gil would know. He tied rocks to his feet and sunk himself to the bottom of the ocean in his attempts to never die. Doesn't really strike as the behavior of someone who doesn't want to die, but what do I know.
Because it's not really Gilgamesh if he doesn't make weird, perverted comments and instill the desire to feed him his own intestines to someone related to the Arthurian lore. Especially some version of Arthur.
Well, Siegfried definitely owes Bathory one. XD
Oh good. Another Saber having a Caster going all freaky on her, I take it? XD Though I would hate to be Medea if Arthur happened to find his daughter going through the same torture Medea put Altria through in UBW. Like really, really hate it.
I thought Vlad's attack was "Kaziklu Bey"? May be wrong though.
I like how Mordred's daddy issues resurface at the weirdest and most random of times. XD
PRINCESS? Wow, it's like pushing all the buttons in the Bat-mobile simultaneously: Chaos. Elizabeth is really in for it now. XD
Indeed Julian, this is all we, poor humans have to offer. And how dare we think that not actually being dark and gloomy all the time is a good thing! The nerve! -_-
Oh God, Mordred is a riot. XD
Manaka has... problems. A whole lot of problems. She is Dr. Phil's dream patient.
Ayaka! :D How strange though, that she will not even utter Shirou's name...
Oh Astolfo. You are too cute to be snarky.
Sure. Trust Julian. That always ends well.
Why is Archer wearing his jacket in the house? I know it's a silly thing to ask, but it just sounds strange.
YES! LIVER CIRRHOSIS IS ONLY FOR THE COMMON FOLK! SUCH IS THE CAPACITY OF THE KING! XD
Now, as for the author's note: I agree that the writing has a few flaws here and there, but I find the story rather compelling. It's also great that all the leading characters are kept actually in character (at least as far as my own knowledge goes). All in all, while I've encountered better narrating skills, the story is not particularly affected by it. After all now there are... what, four fractions to try and keep up with? I am afraid one would be too busy with them to pay attention to a few typos. XD
And just for the record, I find the battle sounds cute.

Quick thinking on Gilgamesh's part, but would it really be possible to meddle with the Grail in such a manner? I mean, if the Black Faction had the ability to pass false information through the Grail to Jeanne, doesn't that mean they would have been able to halt her summoning in the first place?
Of course Gil would know. He tied rocks to his feet and sunk himself to the bottom of the ocean in his attempts to never die. Doesn't really strike as the behavior of someone who doesn't want to die, but what do I know.
Because it's not really Gilgamesh if he doesn't make weird, perverted comments and instill the desire to feed him his own intestines to someone related to the Arthurian lore. Especially some version of Arthur.
Well, Siegfried definitely owes Bathory one. XD
Oh good. Another Saber having a Caster going all freaky on her, I take it? XD Though I would hate to be Medea if Arthur happened to find his daughter going through the same torture Medea put Altria through in UBW. Like really, really hate it.
I thought Vlad's attack was "Kaziklu Bey"? May be wrong though.
I like how Mordred's daddy issues resurface at the weirdest and most random of times. XD
PRINCESS? Wow, it's like pushing all the buttons in the Bat-mobile simultaneously: Chaos. Elizabeth is really in for it now. XD
Indeed Julian, this is all we, poor humans have to offer. And how dare we think that not actually being dark and gloomy all the time is a good thing! The nerve! -_-
Oh God, Mordred is a riot. XD
Manaka has... problems. A whole lot of problems. She is Dr. Phil's dream patient.
Ayaka! :D How strange though, that she will not even utter Shirou's name...
Oh Astolfo. You are too cute to be snarky.
Sure. Trust Julian. That always ends well.
Why is Archer wearing his jacket in the house? I know it's a silly thing to ask, but it just sounds strange.
YES! LIVER CIRRHOSIS IS ONLY FOR THE COMMON FOLK! SUCH IS THE CAPACITY OF THE KING! XD
Now, as for the author's note: I agree that the writing has a few flaws here and there, but I find the story rather compelling. It's also great that all the leading characters are kept actually in character (at least as far as my own knowledge goes). All in all, while I've encountered better narrating skills, the story is not particularly affected by it. After all now there are... what, four fractions to try and keep up with? I am afraid one would be too busy with them to pay attention to a few typos. XD
And just for the record, I find the battle sounds cute.
5/13/2016 c16 Cain
Touche!
Curiosity, in your story, Avalon is still buried in someplace or in the hands of Einzbern family?
And why that bitch of Alaya didn't send any Counter Guardian in the last war or the current one, seen as a tpotential threat is begining to show up?
Touche!
Curiosity, in your story, Avalon is still buried in someplace or in the hands of Einzbern family?
And why that bitch of Alaya didn't send any Counter Guardian in the last war or the current one, seen as a tpotential threat is begining to show up?
5/13/2016 c16 Code Zero
Altair-san, i am happy that and surprised that Lorelei Barthomeloi decided to forgive the yggmilenia clan with a slight punishment, because the Association usual way of deal with problems its the same way that the Organization Chronos of black cat or even more brutal, killing, and sometImes with cruelty.
Altair-san, i am happy that and surprised that Lorelei Barthomeloi decided to forgive the yggmilenia clan with a slight punishment, because the Association usual way of deal with problems its the same way that the Organization Chronos of black cat or even more brutal, killing, and sometImes with cruelty.
5/13/2016 c16
8ForteOfTheBallad98
Damn, this was a good chapter. I liked how Gil comforted Achilles in his classical douche way.
REALLY looking forward to see Guinevere and Arthur interact next chapter!

Damn, this was a good chapter. I liked how Gil comforted Achilles in his classical douche way.
REALLY looking forward to see Guinevere and Arthur interact next chapter!
5/10/2016 c15 No need to weak
Thank you.
Julian does not have any danger notion?
Because if the bratt had, he wouldn't had call Shirou of bastard even if the latter is!
Thank you.
Julian does not have any danger notion?
Because if the bratt had, he wouldn't had call Shirou of bastard even if the latter is!