for Fate Magnus Bellum5/4/2016 c14 Cain
Cool! So Shirou and Arthur have fought with the physically strongest warrior of nasu-verse?
I am saying this because Thor as long i know had to use a magic belt to manage use mjonir, so without his belt his strenght can lesser than Heracles, because the latter managed support the sky'weight in his shoulders, while thor even using his belt couldn't lift the midgard' serpent.
But this don't have anything with your story, so to what interest.
When Shirou and Arthur fought Our Favorite hair trigget giant, he probably left them in a pretty bad shape.
My question is, who defeated him? because i doubt that the King of Knights can have the chance to use Excalibur against someone whose instinct to danger and agility are top notch , Heracles would had bisected Arthur before the latter could use his NP.
And how Shirou managed to survive to Greatest Greek Hero's rampage?
But i enjoyed this chapter very much.
Cool! So Shirou and Arthur have fought with the physically strongest warrior of nasu-verse?
I am saying this because Thor as long i know had to use a magic belt to manage use mjonir, so without his belt his strenght can lesser than Heracles, because the latter managed support the sky'weight in his shoulders, while thor even using his belt couldn't lift the midgard' serpent.
But this don't have anything with your story, so to what interest.
When Shirou and Arthur fought Our Favorite hair trigget giant, he probably left them in a pretty bad shape.
My question is, who defeated him? because i doubt that the King of Knights can have the chance to use Excalibur against someone whose instinct to danger and agility are top notch , Heracles would had bisected Arthur before the latter could use his NP.
And how Shirou managed to survive to Greatest Greek Hero's rampage?
But i enjoyed this chapter very much.
5/4/2016 c12 other
arthur is different from altria given the fact e dont actually know his version of what did happen his wish could be completely different
arthur is different from altria given the fact e dont actually know his version of what did happen his wish could be completely different
5/4/2016 c14 
4taovkool
Casualty of Holy Grail's Massive Engagement: Rogue Berserker Lu Bu, Archer of Black Chiron. Freakin' awesome.
4taovkoolCasualty of Holy Grail's Massive Engagement: Rogue Berserker Lu Bu, Archer of Black Chiron. Freakin' awesome.
5/4/2016 c14 8ForteOfTheBallad98
Damn, that was an awesome chapter! Finally, everything begins to connect!
8ForteOfTheBallad98Damn, that was an awesome chapter! Finally, everything begins to connect!
4/28/2016 c13 7Blue Bragon
It's nice to see Father and Son working together for once, and just seeing the two sides working as a team was kinda nice. If I had to guess, Manaka soon will enter the war formally with her six servants, and then hijack Saber back and make him into Alter or something like that. Can't wait to see Jeanne, Lancelot and Mordred rush out to save Arty from his yandere ex-master.
Overall, I really love the big scope of events in this mess, but at the tame time a part of me worries this might be too big for you to handle and that will cause you to mess up. I guess the prudent choice is to just keep some prudent optimism as this goes along. "Wait and see" as a certain Avenger said.
Really my favorite Grail War story right now, it's very fresh and stands out above other stories, so keep your hard work.
7Blue BragonIt's nice to see Father and Son working together for once, and just seeing the two sides working as a team was kinda nice. If I had to guess, Manaka soon will enter the war formally with her six servants, and then hijack Saber back and make him into Alter or something like that. Can't wait to see Jeanne, Lancelot and Mordred rush out to save Arty from his yandere ex-master.
Overall, I really love the big scope of events in this mess, but at the tame time a part of me worries this might be too big for you to handle and that will cause you to mess up. I guess the prudent choice is to just keep some prudent optimism as this goes along. "Wait and see" as a certain Avenger said.
Really my favorite Grail War story right now, it's very fresh and stands out above other stories, so keep your hard work.
4/27/2016 c13 8ForteOfTheBallad98
Fudging awesome chapter 00Altair!
I enjoyed the action simply because there was so many of it, and you've addresses one of my criticisms regarding this story; finally, Archer is acting more like Proto-Gil compared to regular FSN Gil.
The three Sabers were especially awesome. Or rather, should I say 'The Three Saberteers?' Haha, crap pun!
Overall, a really good chapter; a nice change of pace from Act I in a similar fashion to Fate/Zero's 1st Season; the 1st Season of F/Z was really to establish characters, but I lost some interest in the middle chapters before it rammed everything up with Ionian Hetairoi and Cthulu's bastard so.
Keep it up!
8ForteOfTheBallad98Fudging awesome chapter 00Altair!
I enjoyed the action simply because there was so many of it, and you've addresses one of my criticisms regarding this story; finally, Archer is acting more like Proto-Gil compared to regular FSN Gil.
The three Sabers were especially awesome. Or rather, should I say 'The Three Saberteers?' Haha, crap pun!
Overall, a really good chapter; a nice change of pace from Act I in a similar fashion to Fate/Zero's 1st Season; the 1st Season of F/Z was really to establish characters, but I lost some interest in the middle chapters before it rammed everything up with Ionian Hetairoi and Cthulu's bastard so.
Keep it up!
4/26/2016 c13 Guest
astolfo's hippogriff not griffin
astolfo's hippogriff not griffin
4/26/2016 c13 Cain
Interesting,
Just to confirm, Arthur in you story laments he couldn't have a proper duel with Arash? Because the latter sacrificied himself to help defeat Ramsses already his(Arash) noble Phantasm its a suicidal one?
Interesting,
Just to confirm, Arthur in you story laments he couldn't have a proper duel with Arash? Because the latter sacrificied himself to help defeat Ramsses already his(Arash) noble Phantasm its a suicidal one?
4/25/2016 c13 Kratos
Goooooodddd! Chapter!
I half expected that when Karna was use his Phantasm Arthur would COunter with Excalibur.
Goooooodddd! Chapter!
I half expected that when Karna was use his Phantasm Arthur would COunter with Excalibur.
4/25/2016 c13 Orpheus
You already know about Fate Aphocrypa will have a manga version? Its true
Seems fate extra ccc with Nero as main heroine will be launched as a manga also.
And seems Attila/Altera originally would be a new love interest to Hakuno Kishinami and is going in the new game Fate/Extella.
I also saw new images featuring Scacthach and other servant online alongside to profiles.
The art are really good!
I must ask something? Will be a sequel to FMB?! cool!
If so, do you make a prequel?
Thank you 00-dono!
Do you have a ps4 or vita? Because in the moment they are the only consoles when F/Extella get out.
This story its really good! Good health to you
You already know about Fate Aphocrypa will have a manga version? Its true
Seems fate extra ccc with Nero as main heroine will be launched as a manga also.
And seems Attila/Altera originally would be a new love interest to Hakuno Kishinami and is going in the new game Fate/Extella.
I also saw new images featuring Scacthach and other servant online alongside to profiles.
The art are really good!
I must ask something? Will be a sequel to FMB?! cool!
If so, do you make a prequel?
Thank you 00-dono!
Do you have a ps4 or vita? Because in the moment they are the only consoles when F/Extella get out.
This story its really good! Good health to you
4/24/2016 c13 zachary2
Fuck yeah! I love Shirou right now, not as evil as people made him out to be. Amazing job. I absolutely lovr your story, the description, weapons and most of all the plot!
Fuck yeah! I love Shirou right now, not as evil as people made him out to be. Amazing job. I absolutely lovr your story, the description, weapons and most of all the plot!
4/21/2016 c12 4taovkool
Okay. I'm sold. The interactions. The fights. The characters. This is all so f*cking awesome. More please?
4taovkoolOkay. I'm sold. The interactions. The fights. The characters. This is all so f*cking awesome. More please?
3/29/2016 c6 7Personaddict07
The teasing part was quite good. It had me chuckling. Naughty naughty Joan. tsk tsk. ;)
7Personaddict07The teasing part was quite good. It had me chuckling. Naughty naughty Joan. tsk tsk. ;)