for Fate Magnus Bellum11/25/2015 c6 vegaaltair
Actually I was searching everywhere for a story between mordred and male arthur, so I'm reaaalllly looking forward into this family matter (and who knows there'll be a day where they can spend one time as father and daughter without any dispute?) XD
I'm also hoping for an epic fighting scene for the next chapter, and Lu Bu deserves more love, so I'm glad that u put him here! Keep up the good work!
Actually I was searching everywhere for a story between mordred and male arthur, so I'm reaaalllly looking forward into this family matter (and who knows there'll be a day where they can spend one time as father and daughter without any dispute?) XD
I'm also hoping for an epic fighting scene for the next chapter, and Lu Bu deserves more love, so I'm glad that u put him here! Keep up the good work!
11/21/2015 c6 
10DocHoliday0316
This was a very nice chapter. I love the conversation between Jeanne and Arthur, and I also love Archer of Red comparing Assassin of Red to Ishtar.
Also, nice of you to bring in Lu Bu!Berserker. He's definitely more interesting than Herakles.
10DocHoliday0316This was a very nice chapter. I love the conversation between Jeanne and Arthur, and I also love Archer of Red comparing Assassin of Red to Ishtar.
Also, nice of you to bring in Lu Bu!Berserker. He's definitely more interesting than Herakles.
11/18/2015 c5 DocHoliday0316
Alright, I loved the fight between Saber and Mordred, and it was really awesome to see Archer of Red get in on the action.
Also, nice of you to bring in Prototype Rider (although I'm assuming that its Prototype Rider).
Alright, I loved the fight between Saber and Mordred, and it was really awesome to see Archer of Red get in on the action.
Also, nice of you to bring in Prototype Rider (although I'm assuming that its Prototype Rider).
11/18/2015 c6 14Getsunohimesama
Haha, that couple bomb came out of nowhere, though I do suppose it wasn't quite that unexpected... Oh Jeanne. XD
I can't help but wonder if reconciliation is in the air for Mordred and her dad, or at least some form of closure between them. After the previous chapter's events,
"very estranged family member" is one way to put it. XD
Arthur was there all along? Talk about awkward. XD
I never really thought of it before but it does stand to reason that Gilgamesh would abhor someone like Semiramis. She has a lot of similarities to Ishtar, no matter how one looks at it. I wonder if he will indeed be the one to kill her by the endof this.
And this is why nobody likes Gordes. And why his death shall be welcomed with pop-corn, pizza and happiness.
Oh my God, the moment where you see Elizabeth play the spoiled teenage brat and Vlad Tepes III being the strict Dad... strangely fitting for them though. XD
Oh dear! That was a scene worth having in my head. XD I imagine it like the poking between Saber Alter and Gilgamesh in Carnival Phantasm, only with Saber and Ruler... and the danger of the former missing an eyeball or two. XD
Well, Mordred's situation was a complicated matter... though her gender could be concealed (I mean, Fate Stay Night Saber did that quite well) and her bastard status somehw by-passed... she basically lost the right to the throne because her Mother was a treacherous witch and her father couldn't accept the fact he was a father... wow. Poor Mordred.
No one is safe from the King of Knights' teasing. Not even the Saint of Orleans. XD
:D This is going to be such an awesome battle! I really can't wait! Great job so far, this story is officially one of my favorites!
14GetsunohimesamaHaha, that couple bomb came out of nowhere, though I do suppose it wasn't quite that unexpected... Oh Jeanne. XD
I can't help but wonder if reconciliation is in the air for Mordred and her dad, or at least some form of closure between them. After the previous chapter's events,
"very estranged family member" is one way to put it. XD
Arthur was there all along? Talk about awkward. XD
I never really thought of it before but it does stand to reason that Gilgamesh would abhor someone like Semiramis. She has a lot of similarities to Ishtar, no matter how one looks at it. I wonder if he will indeed be the one to kill her by the endof this.
And this is why nobody likes Gordes. And why his death shall be welcomed with pop-corn, pizza and happiness.
Oh my God, the moment where you see Elizabeth play the spoiled teenage brat and Vlad Tepes III being the strict Dad... strangely fitting for them though. XD
Oh dear! That was a scene worth having in my head. XD I imagine it like the poking between Saber Alter and Gilgamesh in Carnival Phantasm, only with Saber and Ruler... and the danger of the former missing an eyeball or two. XD
Well, Mordred's situation was a complicated matter... though her gender could be concealed (I mean, Fate Stay Night Saber did that quite well) and her bastard status somehw by-passed... she basically lost the right to the throne because her Mother was a treacherous witch and her father couldn't accept the fact he was a father... wow. Poor Mordred.
No one is safe from the King of Knights' teasing. Not even the Saint of Orleans. XD
:D This is going to be such an awesome battle! I really can't wait! Great job so far, this story is officially one of my favorites!
11/17/2015 c5 Getsunohimesama
I've heard of people with daddy issues but Mordred must be at a whole new level...
Caster of Red is so awesome. It takes a special kind of person to be able to make everyone want to skewer him. XD
Oh damn. Mordred and Arthur's battle is intense and full of so many feels! So awesome, what I expectedof it and more.
A masked Rider... Perseus?
Call me crazy, but are Arthur and Mordred having a moment here?
Aaand Gilgamesh spoils the moment. Typical.
Oh my God. Imaginign Achilles and Gilgamesh in a rock-paper-scissors. I am rolling right now. XD XD XD
Of course the helmet would break when faced with Gilgamesh's head- it's where his eo is concetrated after all. -_-
He called Mordred a little girl! Oh, now he is going t get it alright! :D
What's the "thing"?! What could it possibly be that Archer of Red wants so much that he would actually do as he is told for once?!
Arthur and Mordred are definitely having a moment THIS time! :D
This chapter was so very intense. I was standing on my toes the whole time! By far my favorite so far in terms of both combat and plot. Wow.
I've heard of people with daddy issues but Mordred must be at a whole new level...
Caster of Red is so awesome. It takes a special kind of person to be able to make everyone want to skewer him. XD
Oh damn. Mordred and Arthur's battle is intense and full of so many feels! So awesome, what I expectedof it and more.
A masked Rider... Perseus?
Call me crazy, but are Arthur and Mordred having a moment here?
Aaand Gilgamesh spoils the moment. Typical.
Oh my God. Imaginign Achilles and Gilgamesh in a rock-paper-scissors. I am rolling right now. XD XD XD
Of course the helmet would break when faced with Gilgamesh's head- it's where his eo is concetrated after all. -_-
He called Mordred a little girl! Oh, now he is going t get it alright! :D
What's the "thing"?! What could it possibly be that Archer of Red wants so much that he would actually do as he is told for once?!
Arthur and Mordred are definitely having a moment THIS time! :D
This chapter was so very intense. I was standing on my toes the whole time! By far my favorite so far in terms of both combat and plot. Wow.
11/17/2015 c4 14Getsunohimesama
At least Saber does remember that Jeanne uses a human body... well, someone needs to. XD
I wonder how Jeanne is going to break the news about Lancelot to Saber though. If nothing else for his own safety's sake. Altria was so shocked that she sat there and took the beating and there is a good chance Arthur will do the same...
XD Rider and Waver in their boxers playing videogames... that's indeed enough of a shock to make anyone stop in their tracks for a moment or two. XD
Of course Gilgamesh would find someone's anguish and hatred interesting... that bloody creep.
Astolfo and Elizabeth are just too cute... if only Elizabeth wasn't a blood-thirsty monster. :(
Romantic advise from Astolfo... Who knows what to answer to that. XD
None may guess Astolfo's gender at first glance! The mysteries of this world indeed. XD
Aw, a pity that Lancer realized his mistake so quickly... I am longing for a good ol' "don't call me a girl" yell. XD
The person in the Grail... was that Merlin? Will he play a role in events to come? What is he doing in the Grail in the first place? :O
Also, just a thought, but wouldn't the fact that Jeanne has no connection to the rogue Servants as a Ruler of this latest Holy Grail War mean that there is a second Grail? Shirou is after all a Servant Ruler himself so couldn't it be that he found a way to conceal the resence of and summon a second (maybe one similar to the fake ones of the previous wars) Grail? That would explain the presence of the extra Servants and how they are sustained... as well as the fact that there are two Archers and there are only four of them...
Oh goody. A reunion. Because that's what this meesed up War needs... XD
This is so great. I have no words for how great this story is.
14GetsunohimesamaAt least Saber does remember that Jeanne uses a human body... well, someone needs to. XD
I wonder how Jeanne is going to break the news about Lancelot to Saber though. If nothing else for his own safety's sake. Altria was so shocked that she sat there and took the beating and there is a good chance Arthur will do the same...
XD Rider and Waver in their boxers playing videogames... that's indeed enough of a shock to make anyone stop in their tracks for a moment or two. XD
Of course Gilgamesh would find someone's anguish and hatred interesting... that bloody creep.
Astolfo and Elizabeth are just too cute... if only Elizabeth wasn't a blood-thirsty monster. :(
Romantic advise from Astolfo... Who knows what to answer to that. XD
None may guess Astolfo's gender at first glance! The mysteries of this world indeed. XD
Aw, a pity that Lancer realized his mistake so quickly... I am longing for a good ol' "don't call me a girl" yell. XD
The person in the Grail... was that Merlin? Will he play a role in events to come? What is he doing in the Grail in the first place? :O
Also, just a thought, but wouldn't the fact that Jeanne has no connection to the rogue Servants as a Ruler of this latest Holy Grail War mean that there is a second Grail? Shirou is after all a Servant Ruler himself so couldn't it be that he found a way to conceal the resence of and summon a second (maybe one similar to the fake ones of the previous wars) Grail? That would explain the presence of the extra Servants and how they are sustained... as well as the fact that there are two Archers and there are only four of them...
Oh goody. A reunion. Because that's what this meesed up War needs... XD
This is so great. I have no words for how great this story is.
11/17/2015 c3 Getsunohimesama
And it is a well-known fact that Astolfo is the cutest of them all! :D
The battle between Saber and Lancer was really awesome. If you have little experience with writing action scenes, it didn't show. I was definitely on the edge of my seat the entire time! And Rider! That guy sure knows how to make an impression. XD I loved the fact that for a second time he barged in between a fight where the ones dueling are a Saber and a Lancer. A nice shout-out to Fate Zero I pressume? XD
Wait, does the fact that Rider has done this before mean that Waver's Grail War was the Fourth? Maybe of less magnitude or concequences, but close?
Be silent Gordes! Nobody likes you!
And of course Gilgamesh comes to crush Rider's entrance. Figures. -_-
Eh, Gilgamesh is twitchy about anything that is not wine or pain and suffering. So I'd say it would be to be expected of him to try and attack Jeanne.
Aaaaand Medea! Oh dang it. This just keeps getting more and more awesome. I wonder if her weird infatuation with Saber will be present here. XD
Yep, that's Kiritsugu alright. Blow the fothermucker up and be done with it. XD
Lancer and Saber of Red are so funny together! XD XD XD
How does anyone not shoot Kotomine is beyond me... The guy just screams "villain"! Things would be so much simpler if they all went with Kiritsugu's methods.
Poor Mordred. She just can't catch a break...
Julian? As in Julian AINSWORTH? Oh dear, this is indeed getting better and better and better... Wait, does that mean that the Class Cards will be brought into this? :O
And it is a well-known fact that Astolfo is the cutest of them all! :D
The battle between Saber and Lancer was really awesome. If you have little experience with writing action scenes, it didn't show. I was definitely on the edge of my seat the entire time! And Rider! That guy sure knows how to make an impression. XD I loved the fact that for a second time he barged in between a fight where the ones dueling are a Saber and a Lancer. A nice shout-out to Fate Zero I pressume? XD
Wait, does the fact that Rider has done this before mean that Waver's Grail War was the Fourth? Maybe of less magnitude or concequences, but close?
Be silent Gordes! Nobody likes you!
And of course Gilgamesh comes to crush Rider's entrance. Figures. -_-
Eh, Gilgamesh is twitchy about anything that is not wine or pain and suffering. So I'd say it would be to be expected of him to try and attack Jeanne.
Aaaaand Medea! Oh dang it. This just keeps getting more and more awesome. I wonder if her weird infatuation with Saber will be present here. XD
Yep, that's Kiritsugu alright. Blow the fothermucker up and be done with it. XD
Lancer and Saber of Red are so funny together! XD XD XD
How does anyone not shoot Kotomine is beyond me... The guy just screams "villain"! Things would be so much simpler if they all went with Kiritsugu's methods.
Poor Mordred. She just can't catch a break...
Julian? As in Julian AINSWORTH? Oh dear, this is indeed getting better and better and better... Wait, does that mean that the Class Cards will be brought into this? :O
11/17/2015 c2 Getsunohimesama
Poor Shishigou. XD
I can't believe Shirou Kotomine didn't even bother to find a better excuse than this. I mean, the sudden family problems and hand-written messages of the two missing members is more than enough to ensure that nobody in this team is going to trust him, ever. Being a representative of the Church only adds fuel to the fire.
Rider! :D I am fangirling so hard right now... then again he is the only Servant fitting of Waver. Ah, the feels...
... of course. Because such a huge mess as this War seems to be turning out to be is not complete without a matching asshole to rejoice in it. At least it's Proto-Gilgamesh, who supposedly is a better person than his Fate counterpart.
So far, I am loving the Association's Servants! Especially Rider! Everyone shall love him!
Aw, Saber and Ruler are so cute! :D
The Red Fraction Servants are like big babies. XD
I wonder why anyone would immediately jump at the conclusion of "strays" of the previous fake Wars. I mean, it's a natural conclusion from Shioru since he is a left-over himself, but why would anyone else even consider this logic? Since there was no winner, there could be no left-over from the fake Grails...
Oh wow... that was fast... I can't wait to see where Karna and Atalanta come from, as well as who this unseen new set of Masters is, let alone how they managed to summon and keep their Servants hidden until now.
Great Job with this chapter, I loved it!
Poor Shishigou. XD
I can't believe Shirou Kotomine didn't even bother to find a better excuse than this. I mean, the sudden family problems and hand-written messages of the two missing members is more than enough to ensure that nobody in this team is going to trust him, ever. Being a representative of the Church only adds fuel to the fire.
Rider! :D I am fangirling so hard right now... then again he is the only Servant fitting of Waver. Ah, the feels...
... of course. Because such a huge mess as this War seems to be turning out to be is not complete without a matching asshole to rejoice in it. At least it's Proto-Gilgamesh, who supposedly is a better person than his Fate counterpart.
So far, I am loving the Association's Servants! Especially Rider! Everyone shall love him!
Aw, Saber and Ruler are so cute! :D
The Red Fraction Servants are like big babies. XD
I wonder why anyone would immediately jump at the conclusion of "strays" of the previous fake Wars. I mean, it's a natural conclusion from Shioru since he is a left-over himself, but why would anyone else even consider this logic? Since there was no winner, there could be no left-over from the fake Grails...
Oh wow... that was fast... I can't wait to see where Karna and Atalanta come from, as well as who this unseen new set of Masters is, let alone how they managed to summon and keep their Servants hidden until now.
Great Job with this chapter, I loved it!
11/17/2015 c1 Getsunohimesama
This is an impressive start for sure! I love what you did with Jean d'Arc, as well as Arthur's summoning.
At some poibt you mentioned "over a hundred Servants" though. How can Ruler (and by extension the Grail) be unaware of their existence? And how come it would be possible for it to support this many?
Gah, I am so totally hooked.
This is an impressive start for sure! I love what you did with Jean d'Arc, as well as Arthur's summoning.
At some poibt you mentioned "over a hundred Servants" though. How can Ruler (and by extension the Grail) be unaware of their existence? And how come it would be possible for it to support this many?
Gah, I am so totally hooked.
11/16/2015 c3 10DocHoliday0316
Well, this was a very nice chapter. I like the fight between Karna, Jeanne, Saber, and only complaint is that the way you have Iskander talk seems off.
And I'm going to assume that Caster of Black is Medea?
10DocHoliday0316Well, this was a very nice chapter. I like the fight between Karna, Jeanne, Saber, and only complaint is that the way you have Iskander talk seems off.
And I'm going to assume that Caster of Black is Medea?
11/15/2015 c2 DocHoliday0316
Alright, I REALLY love you for bringing in Prototype Gilgamesh and Iskander, as well as keeping around Achilles under a different class. And I'm starting to wonder who you have in mind for the rest of the Red and Black faction servants.
Anyway, I can wait to see the fight between Saber, Ruler, Karna and Atalanta next chapter.
Also, I'm going to assume that Lancelot, Robin Hood, Karna and Atalanta are somehow connected to Shirou Kotomine?
Alright, I REALLY love you for bringing in Prototype Gilgamesh and Iskander, as well as keeping around Achilles under a different class. And I'm starting to wonder who you have in mind for the rest of the Red and Black faction servants.
Anyway, I can wait to see the fight between Saber, Ruler, Karna and Atalanta next chapter.
Also, I'm going to assume that Lancelot, Robin Hood, Karna and Atalanta are somehow connected to Shirou Kotomine?
11/15/2015 c2 3DragonXDelinquent
Wait there is a third faction?
Black- Archer Chiron/ Lancer Vlad
Red-Archer ProtoGilgamesh/ Lancer Achilles
Atalanta and Karna being around makes no sense
3DragonXDelinquentWait there is a third faction?
Black- Archer Chiron/ Lancer Vlad
Red-Archer ProtoGilgamesh/ Lancer Achilles
Atalanta and Karna being around makes no sense