
11/15/2015 c6 Hakuryuu
Nice chapter.
Nice chapter.
11/15/2015 c6 Orpheus
It was a great chapter!, but 00-dono, you don't need answer any of my questions, but read the wikipedia about the argonauts, and besides Chiron, Atalanta could identify Heracles, she tried make part of argo's crew and was rejected, but she could have seen his face there, Medea also could identify him.
You said that you had plans to Cu Chulainn, right? (it was a retoric question), só i assume that Heracles will have some paper.
It was a great chapter!, but 00-dono, you don't need answer any of my questions, but read the wikipedia about the argonauts, and besides Chiron, Atalanta could identify Heracles, she tried make part of argo's crew and was rejected, but she could have seen his face there, Medea also could identify him.
You said that you had plans to Cu Chulainn, right? (it was a retoric question), só i assume that Heracles will have some paper.
11/14/2015 c6
2Hercules8
Oh, this is going to be good. Lu Bu as the Berserker of Red!
This is a good choice for Berserker if wasn't going to be Heracles. I can't wait to see Lu Bu in action! :D

Oh, this is going to be good. Lu Bu as the Berserker of Red!
This is a good choice for Berserker if wasn't going to be Heracles. I can't wait to see Lu Bu in action! :D
10/28/2015 c5
9Idyllicdream
Blimey, this is brilliant! This chapter is, I think, the most enjoyable in the series so far. I really love the action scenes and can truly feel the frustration and anger between characters.
I especially love Mordred, surprisingly enough. I never understood nor sympathised with her during her cameos in Fate, but she’s now my favourite character in this story. Her attitude is very charming! And I love seeing her stubbornness. I didn’t think it was possible, but the intensity of her feelings actually made me resent Saber/Arthur in this chapter a little (still love him though).
I’m still quite excited to read your interpretation of Ruler’s character, because I think she has great potential. However, I think in canon it is quite difficult for some fans to tell the difference between Saber/Arturia and Ruler/Jeanne, in terms of personality and theme. I’m looking forward to see how her character would develop here, since you did an excellent job narrating Mordred. (He he, don’t be mad at me, but I think Mordred stands out more than Jeanne in this chapter. Dont’ know if that’s your intention but great job!)

Blimey, this is brilliant! This chapter is, I think, the most enjoyable in the series so far. I really love the action scenes and can truly feel the frustration and anger between characters.
I especially love Mordred, surprisingly enough. I never understood nor sympathised with her during her cameos in Fate, but she’s now my favourite character in this story. Her attitude is very charming! And I love seeing her stubbornness. I didn’t think it was possible, but the intensity of her feelings actually made me resent Saber/Arthur in this chapter a little (still love him though).
I’m still quite excited to read your interpretation of Ruler’s character, because I think she has great potential. However, I think in canon it is quite difficult for some fans to tell the difference between Saber/Arturia and Ruler/Jeanne, in terms of personality and theme. I’m looking forward to see how her character would develop here, since you did an excellent job narrating Mordred. (He he, don’t be mad at me, but I think Mordred stands out more than Jeanne in this chapter. Dont’ know if that’s your intention but great job!)
10/28/2015 c5 MGSFanatic
"I never thought of you as a son...but I have always respected you as a solider...and as a man." (Big Boss to Solid Snake)
"I never thought of you as a son...but I have always respected you as a solider...and as a man." (Big Boss to Solid Snake)
10/28/2015 c5 Guest
I didn't see any spelling or any other mistakes in this chapter. So you did a job with that! :)
I really like the fight scenes in this chapter! First with the fight between Saber and Mordred, then with Proto-Gilgamesh vs Berserker. Close fights are always the best kind of fights for me, b/c it's awesome to see people with their physical strength, agility, and skill against one and other.
Finally I am really interested in who is the Berserker of the Red is? Can't wait to find out in later chapters!
I didn't see any spelling or any other mistakes in this chapter. So you did a job with that! :)
I really like the fight scenes in this chapter! First with the fight between Saber and Mordred, then with Proto-Gilgamesh vs Berserker. Close fights are always the best kind of fights for me, b/c it's awesome to see people with their physical strength, agility, and skill against one and other.
Finally I am really interested in who is the Berserker of the Red is? Can't wait to find out in later chapters!
10/28/2015 c1
4Reine Sevia
I've always liked the Greater Holy Grail War, I founded that one interesting more than anything else. Good concept I likey

I've always liked the Greater Holy Grail War, I founded that one interesting more than anything else. Good concept I likey
10/28/2015 c5 Code Zero
Its was a great chapter! Altair-san!, and it was showed that Proto-Gilgamesh its more badass than his F/SN counterpart, despite of Gilgamesh from Fate Extra is in my opnion so badass as his prototype-version ( i know that its can be strange by the lack of a better word from my part, but what happens Altair-san its that i tend judge characters mainly by their battle-prowess, mainly its a physical fight, using bare fists or close combat weapons.
Its was a great chapter! Altair-san!, and it was showed that Proto-Gilgamesh its more badass than his F/SN counterpart, despite of Gilgamesh from Fate Extra is in my opnion so badass as his prototype-version ( i know that its can be strange by the lack of a better word from my part, but what happens Altair-san its that i tend judge characters mainly by their battle-prowess, mainly its a physical fight, using bare fists or close combat weapons.
10/28/2015 c5 Hakuryuu
I love this fic.
I love this fic.
10/28/2015 c5 XarksTheHunter
This gilgamesh, I want to know if you gonna put his fsn counterpart's OP NPs enkidu and ea, or even the Hanging Garden Gilgamesh Original version, remember that he got pretty much anything not divine creation or items with alien concept . Considering how hardcore of a fighter ProtoGil is, this could be very much OP. In any case good chapter, good pacing maybe the fight could be better but it is a okay. I am honestly wondering if this gil gonna have a shoujo manga moment like the one in the original material over glassless ayaka
This gilgamesh, I want to know if you gonna put his fsn counterpart's OP NPs enkidu and ea, or even the Hanging Garden Gilgamesh Original version, remember that he got pretty much anything not divine creation or items with alien concept . Considering how hardcore of a fighter ProtoGil is, this could be very much OP. In any case good chapter, good pacing maybe the fight could be better but it is a okay. I am honestly wondering if this gil gonna have a shoujo manga moment like the one in the original material over glassless ayaka
10/28/2015 c5 Guest
nice chapter
nice chapter