for The Sixth Hokages Rival8/17/2016 c7 bartlettpear
It feels so natural the way they came together. I really like your writing style.
It feels so natural the way they came together. I really like your writing style.
8/17/2016 c6 bartlettpear
There's something about your writing tbat is completely fascinating to me, it's so straight forward. It feels like you don't waste words. I like how you include Sakura, her concern and her growth. Naruto's open acceptance leave me with a fond feeling where I hope he never changes that part of himself. Your characterizations of Kakashinand Obito feel on point. I am really digging your story. Thank you for writing.
There's something about your writing tbat is completely fascinating to me, it's so straight forward. It feels like you don't waste words. I like how you include Sakura, her concern and her growth. Naruto's open acceptance leave me with a fond feeling where I hope he never changes that part of himself. Your characterizations of Kakashinand Obito feel on point. I am really digging your story. Thank you for writing.
7/6/2016 c10 LovelessDarkness
First I would like to apologize. I have not been the best follower. I finally cought up on your updates. I love this story. I never been a fan of this pairing but you have changed my mind. Thank you for sharing your work. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
First I would like to apologize. I have not been the best follower. I finally cought up on your updates. I love this story. I never been a fan of this pairing but you have changed my mind. Thank you for sharing your work. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
6/9/2016 c10 sanghyuk
Omg they almost-almost had sex!
I'm so hyped for this, the blow job was pretty hot, I bet Obito enjoyed it a lot
Please continue and keep the good work!
Omg they almost-almost had sex!
I'm so hyped for this, the blow job was pretty hot, I bet Obito enjoyed it a lot
Please continue and keep the good work!
6/9/2016 c4 Xandistra
It really breaks my heart to see these two fight T T Kakashi has so "much" in Obito's eyes , but all Kakashi seems to want is his friend back : This fic has so much suspense * A * / / I love it ! ! !
It really breaks my heart to see these two fight T T Kakashi has so "much" in Obito's eyes , but all Kakashi seems to want is his friend back : This fic has so much suspense * A * / / I love it ! ! !
6/9/2016 c10 ritag1998
YAY update! I just love this chapter with drunk obito-kun it's priceless! Keep up the good work I'm rooting for you! ;)
YAY update! I just love this chapter with drunk obito-kun it's priceless! Keep up the good work I'm rooting for you! ;)
6/9/2016 c3 Xandistra
Obito's situation sucks so bad as of this chapter , everyone is so mean to him , I don't blame them but the treatment he gets . . . It must be hard living : , ( I must say though I just really love his portrayal it's so perfect * A * I'm just ready for those two to get along ; ;
Obito's situation sucks so bad as of this chapter , everyone is so mean to him , I don't blame them but the treatment he gets . . . It must be hard living : , ( I must say though I just really love his portrayal it's so perfect * A * I'm just ready for those two to get along ; ;
3/22/2016 c9 Huhudqkhwiuru2k
Another great chapter! I'm really happy for the update! :D
Seems Obito is starting to realize he has a thing for Kakashi ;) And I know Kakashi's nose isn't as good as Kiba's, but he's a ninja and well... has a pretty good sense of smell, at least according to Naruto... so I can't help but wonder if Kakashi wouldn't notice a lingering scent of Obito's, well, arousal? XD I guess I'll find out! :D Now, Obito- how are you going to explain that?
Aww. And that note. So childish/immature somhow, but still cute. Figures Kakashi would do something like that.
Another great chapter! I'm really happy for the update! :D
Seems Obito is starting to realize he has a thing for Kakashi ;) And I know Kakashi's nose isn't as good as Kiba's, but he's a ninja and well... has a pretty good sense of smell, at least according to Naruto... so I can't help but wonder if Kakashi wouldn't notice a lingering scent of Obito's, well, arousal? XD I guess I'll find out! :D Now, Obito- how are you going to explain that?
Aww. And that note. So childish/immature somhow, but still cute. Figures Kakashi would do something like that.
3/22/2016 c9 Neko Chan
Awwwww~ Can't wait to see Obito's reaction about the note!
Awwwww~ Can't wait to see Obito's reaction about the note!
3/22/2016 c9 
7QuirkCirc
Ya gotta love Kakashi, Obito . It don't get much cheesier than him. But I couldn't help but think, 'Isn't Kakashi going to notice the scent of semen in his room?' Poor Obito xD
7QuirkCircYa gotta love Kakashi, Obito . It don't get much cheesier than him. But I couldn't help but think, 'Isn't Kakashi going to notice the scent of semen in his room?' Poor Obito xD
3/22/2016 c9 5Kris Senju
awww kakashi. man poor obito. hmm anbu maybe no one would no his identity or wouldnt find out till later.
5Kris Senjuawww kakashi. man poor obito. hmm anbu maybe no one would no his identity or wouldnt find out till later.