for The Sixth Hokages Rival3/11/2016 c7 Huhudqkhwiuru2k
This story was really, really good. We need more Obito x Kakashi! I really liked how you protayed Obito. He had to have become bitter after all that and he can't just move on like nothing ever happened... I don't think the rating needs to be M though. I think T would be a more correct rating! (there's no gore or sexual scenes) Really sweet fanfiction. Poor, porr Bito. And Kashi deserves some love too! Both their lives have been so tragic... And Obito clearly means a lot to Kakashi.
This story was really, really good. We need more Obito x Kakashi! I really liked how you protayed Obito. He had to have become bitter after all that and he can't just move on like nothing ever happened... I don't think the rating needs to be M though. I think T would be a more correct rating! (there's no gore or sexual scenes) Really sweet fanfiction. Poor, porr Bito. And Kashi deserves some love too! Both their lives have been so tragic... And Obito clearly means a lot to Kakashi.
2/29/2016 c8 A.Draglandr
Hey! Great story! I was waiting for more fanfictions about Kakashi and Obito but I was afraid there were going to be less and less people writing about this fandom because the manga is finished... Yours is good ! At first, it was a bit strange to see Obito acting like that, I mean, I don't really know how he would act, but... He has to be bitter and to have a bit of this naivety left, so the way you write him is good ! (I don't know if I'm making any sense ')
Hey! Great story! I was waiting for more fanfictions about Kakashi and Obito but I was afraid there were going to be less and less people writing about this fandom because the manga is finished... Yours is good ! At first, it was a bit strange to see Obito acting like that, I mean, I don't really know how he would act, but... He has to be bitter and to have a bit of this naivety left, so the way you write him is good ! (I don't know if I'm making any sense ')
52/7/2016 c8 Andy is quite dandy
So. Freaking. Cute! I love that the tension between them is getting better drastically! That last scene though... I died. I really really love this story, one of the few multi-chaptered KakaObi stories out there! The fandom's not very big but full of talented people! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
So. Freaking. Cute! I love that the tension between them is getting better drastically! That last scene though... I died. I really really love this story, one of the few multi-chaptered KakaObi stories out there! The fandom's not very big but full of talented people! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
2/7/2016 c7 Andy is quite dandy
THEY KISSED THEY KISSED MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!
The amount of tension that was built up leading to this chapter made the kiss so much better! It was built really well. Also Obito's nervousness at kissing Kakashi is adorable! Ohmygod I can't believe they actually kissed... Lol you have no idea how many times I was chanting "Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!" at the screen in the previous chapters... Love KakaObi!
THEY KISSED THEY KISSED MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!
The amount of tension that was built up leading to this chapter made the kiss so much better! It was built really well. Also Obito's nervousness at kissing Kakashi is adorable! Ohmygod I can't believe they actually kissed... Lol you have no idea how many times I was chanting "Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!" at the screen in the previous chapters... Love KakaObi!
2/7/2016 c6 Andy is quite dandy
The story lines in here sound familiar but I can't remember where they're from. They're from Kakashi's novel, I think. Also it's cute how Obito went and saved Kakashi. It seems like he was worried for him which is just adorable! I really loved drunk Kakashi and their interaction at the end, Obito was nicer to him! Improvement!
The story lines in here sound familiar but I can't remember where they're from. They're from Kakashi's novel, I think. Also it's cute how Obito went and saved Kakashi. It seems like he was worried for him which is just adorable! I really loved drunk Kakashi and their interaction at the end, Obito was nicer to him! Improvement!
2/6/2016 c4 Andy is quite dandy
What Kakashi said to Obito about why he let him live was perfect. It's just what I expect of Kakashi to have been thinking. Also Gai's small motivational speech about Kakashi becoming Hokage just made me so proud of him! Don't you just love Kakashi? XD
What Kakashi said to Obito about why he let him live was perfect. It's just what I expect of Kakashi to have been thinking. Also Gai's small motivational speech about Kakashi becoming Hokage just made me so proud of him! Don't you just love Kakashi? XD
2/6/2016 c3 Andy is quite dandy
Holy shit that was way different of Obito than I was expecting! It's interesting that he's still in his "evil" personality but I like it cause it gives more room to see the relationship change between him and Kakashi XD. Haha I actually quite like this dark Obito thing!
Holy shit that was way different of Obito than I was expecting! It's interesting that he's still in his "evil" personality but I like it cause it gives more room to see the relationship change between him and Kakashi XD. Haha I actually quite like this dark Obito thing!
2/6/2016 c2 Andy is quite dandy
Omg another thing I absolutely love just got introduced in this chapter: Hokage Kakashi! I absolutely love Kakashi as Hokage, it's unfortunate we don't see much in the series :(
Omg another thing I absolutely love just got introduced in this chapter: Hokage Kakashi! I absolutely love Kakashi as Hokage, it's unfortunate we don't see much in the series :(
2/6/2016 c1 Andy is quite dandy
Gah I can't wait to read the rest, it sounds amazing so far! This has got to be one of my fav AUs for Obito, I love the fact that he survives and returns to Konoha! Who dosen't love Kakashi and Obito XD
Gah I can't wait to read the rest, it sounds amazing so far! This has got to be one of my fav AUs for Obito, I love the fact that he survives and returns to Konoha! Who dosen't love Kakashi and Obito XD
1/31/2016 c2 Xandistra
I love the intensity of this chapter with all these accusations Tsunade is throwing to and about Obito , I love reading all of Kakashi's internal dialogues throughout this chapter. I feel a lot of people do not understand Kakashi's character , but the author depicts it really well .
I love the intensity of this chapter with all these accusations Tsunade is throwing to and about Obito , I love reading all of Kakashi's internal dialogues throughout this chapter. I feel a lot of people do not understand Kakashi's character , but the author depicts it really well .
1/31/2016 c1 Xandistra
This is a very lovely introduction ! I love how smooth and well written this first chapter is , because a lot of times people make it very awkward . * o * ! ! ! The characters are so in character aswell , I love it !
This is a very lovely introduction ! I love how smooth and well written this first chapter is , because a lot of times people make it very awkward . * o * ! ! ! The characters are so in character aswell , I love it !