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1/2/2018 c1 6Lillr Kayla
it was sad...
but awesome
arigato
9/5/2015 c1 110th Squad 3rd Seat
Right in the feels. Right in them.*Sobs into pillow.*
9/3/2015 c1 1Crimson Amarone
Wash, how are we going to choose our favorites with such a prompt? Which one made us cry the most? The imagery and your sentence structure was really lovely. I liked all the single word breaks. It kinda goes along with the state of mind at the climax. It's really sad that he's all alone too, hopefully he had others supporting him outside of this particular scene.
9/2/2015 c1 58kakashikrazy256
Ahhh Kaito angst is the best! I wrote a review before but since FFnet was glitching I couldn't send it ;u;

Anyways, the image of Kid collapsed in front of the decimated roller coaster is striking and heartbreaking. Risking his life, lying to everyone for years just for this moment. Even though Pandora is destroyed, there is only a bittersweet feeling resulting from this ordeal.

Lovely job, Neo. Good luck in the contest!

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