for Blood Stained1/13 c4 Pincho
I'm done. horrid story. took a look at other chapter's as a skim and it doesn't get any better.
I'm done. horrid story. took a look at other chapter's as a skim and it doesn't get any better.
1/13 c2 J
Meh, the first chapter is as bland as 98% of every other wbwl story out there.
The second chapter's first bit is also horribly done, it felt like it was all just filler and lame excuse. For instance child neglect is done purposely in this situation as the chapter just doesn't bother explaining how parents who are supposedly loving forget a child after 5 years. And a 5 year old who is supposedly forgotten about can read before that and read sophisticated books that most college aged kids have problems pronouncing. Seriously put some effort into it.
Meh, the first chapter is as bland as 98% of every other wbwl story out there.
The second chapter's first bit is also horribly done, it felt like it was all just filler and lame excuse. For instance child neglect is done purposely in this situation as the chapter just doesn't bother explaining how parents who are supposedly loving forget a child after 5 years. And a 5 year old who is supposedly forgotten about can read before that and read sophisticated books that most college aged kids have problems pronouncing. Seriously put some effort into it.
11/10/2024 c20 toa1311
He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive? Original Motorola razr backstock phones from the early 2000’s are sold for between 80 and 100 today in 2024. He is nearly getting them for free and may actually be getting them for free if that qoute includes shipping.
He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive? Original Motorola razr backstock phones from the early 2000’s are sold for between 80 and 100 today in 2024. He is nearly getting them for free and may actually be getting them for free if that qoute includes shipping.
11/10/2024 c20 toa1311
He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive?
He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive?
8/23/2024 c6 Guest
He bought $13,800 worth of books! Pickup truck? Bag of holding? He plans to read 24.7 ?Yeah, the girl was weird asking if he wanted to books in a bookstore...but Harry was weirder.
He bought $13,800 worth of books! Pickup truck? Bag of holding? He plans to read 24.7 ?Yeah, the girl was weird asking if he wanted to books in a bookstore...but Harry was weirder.
8/23/2024 c4 Guest
My mother had twins. One died only a few hours after birth. Mom NEVER forgot the twin she lost. I find the idea of forgotten and abandoned Harry absolutely preposterous. Still. looks like the beginning of a good story. Thanks
My mother had twins. One died only a few hours after birth. Mom NEVER forgot the twin she lost. I find the idea of forgotten and abandoned Harry absolutely preposterous. Still. looks like the beginning of a good story. Thanks
8/12/2024 c24 cdnviolets
I'm enjoying your tale a lot. BTW, you might have meant "awfully" rather than "offly".
I'm enjoying your tale a lot. BTW, you might have meant "awfully" rather than "offly".
6/10/2024 c4 N. A. Wennerholm
This chapter just proves that the boy-who-lived bullshit should not have been allowed. And focusing on just one son only and not treating both sons as equals. And forgetting the fact you are dealing with twins. That is why I would make it clear to the wizards and witches of The United Kingdom of Great Britain that they cannot be trusted to Govern and Police themselves. As and the fact that I would have given them a warning years before especially Albus. And the worshiping humans is wrong immoral and illegal. Those forms are heroes, celebrities, and so much more. And sadly it is even an issue with non-magicals. They have forgotten and in many cases ignored the laws and commandments given to us on the matter.
And sadly too many authors write this crap but don't think about the consequences. And most are younger than me with a few that are of my generation and age who have also forgotten. But yet many who are of my age and generation have not heck have even seen those who are older than me and are of my parents generation who have written on site. And making changes to canon to point out problems they see in Canon to Correct them. In hope of getting threw to the younger generations.
This chapter just proves that the boy-who-lived bullshit should not have been allowed. And focusing on just one son only and not treating both sons as equals. And forgetting the fact you are dealing with twins. That is why I would make it clear to the wizards and witches of The United Kingdom of Great Britain that they cannot be trusted to Govern and Police themselves. As and the fact that I would have given them a warning years before especially Albus. And the worshiping humans is wrong immoral and illegal. Those forms are heroes, celebrities, and so much more. And sadly it is even an issue with non-magicals. They have forgotten and in many cases ignored the laws and commandments given to us on the matter.
And sadly too many authors write this crap but don't think about the consequences. And most are younger than me with a few that are of my generation and age who have also forgotten. But yet many who are of my age and generation have not heck have even seen those who are older than me and are of my parents generation who have written on site. And making changes to canon to point out problems they see in Canon to Correct them. In hope of getting threw to the younger generations.
4/24/2024 c5 mst3ktoo
wow this universe's Thanos is as pathetic as Voldemort for having a feud with a 6-year-old.
wow this universe's Thanos is as pathetic as Voldemort for having a feud with a 6-year-old.
4/3/2024 c46 Guest
Wow, what a fucking garbage bullshit ending, I want several hours of my god dam life back I wasted on this fucking trash of a story.
Wow, what a fucking garbage bullshit ending, I want several hours of my god dam life back I wasted on this fucking trash of a story.
4/3/2024 c39 Guest
Did... did you just write that Thanos rules the Kree?! I don't think there are enough words in all the languages on earth to describe just how utterly fucking retarded you actually are.
Did... did you just write that Thanos rules the Kree?! I don't think there are enough words in all the languages on earth to describe just how utterly fucking retarded you actually are.
4/3/2024 c39 Guest
Nope I'm out, you are a sick fuck and I have no interest being forced to read your disgusting filth, put a fucking BDSM tag in this you piece of shit
Nope I'm out, you are a sick fuck and I have no interest being forced to read your disgusting filth, put a fucking BDSM tag in this you piece of shit