for Blood Stained7/14/2021 c36 Rune Tobor
Sex scenes are very easy to write ... BADLY!
Hugs, kisses, and hints like above are the way to go.
Then the reader can imagine the rest.
Sex scenes are very easy to write ... BADLY!
Hugs, kisses, and hints like above are the way to go.
Then the reader can imagine the rest.
7/14/2021 c33 Rune Tobor
In the fic M-Day by mjimeyg Loki gets Judged.
In chapter 22 of the fic Loki is caught by Death and senteced to live life again, as a girl!
In the fic M-Day by mjimeyg Loki gets Judged.
In chapter 22 of the fic Loki is caught by Death and senteced to live life again, as a girl!
7/14/2021 c1 Guest
Wonderful work
A believable cast of characters acting in Character.
Thanks
Wonderful work
A believable cast of characters acting in Character.
Thanks
7/14/2021 c32 Rune Tobor
Harry in Star Wars is fun, I will look after I finish this one.
Harry in Star Wars is fun, I will look after I finish this one.
7/14/2021 c31 Rune Tobor
Long ago, there was a Batman movie, might have had Val Kilmer in it.
A paperback was also sold. In the book you got to know what the characters thought.
The movie only showed what they did. The extra depth made the book better.
Funny thing was the book was made after the movie.
Usually its the reverse...
Long ago, there was a Batman movie, might have had Val Kilmer in it.
A paperback was also sold. In the book you got to know what the characters thought.
The movie only showed what they did. The extra depth made the book better.
Funny thing was the book was made after the movie.
Usually its the reverse...
7/14/2021 c30 Rune Tobor
Either your spellchecker is old or you use speech to text.
In the first chapter you have quiz where you meant crib.
In this chapters authors note at the end you have right where you meant write.
Does not really bother me, unlike others I am smart enuf to figure out what you meant.
What would bother me is an incomplete fic but this is done.
Thanks for writing.
Either your spellchecker is old or you use speech to text.
In the first chapter you have quiz where you meant crib.
In this chapters authors note at the end you have right where you meant write.
Does not really bother me, unlike others I am smart enuf to figure out what you meant.
What would bother me is an incomplete fic but this is done.
Thanks for writing.
7/14/2021 c28 Rune Tobor
Here is an Idea.
Reverse the animagus magic and have an animal take human shape.
It would allow Harry/girlHedwig and Harry/girlFawkes or Harry/girldragon...
I have not seen Harry/girlGoblin either.
Here is an Idea.
Reverse the animagus magic and have an animal take human shape.
It would allow Harry/girlHedwig and Harry/girlFawkes or Harry/girldragon...
I have not seen Harry/girlGoblin either.
7/14/2021 c27 Rune Tobor
The is gold!
No diamond!
Not quite a valuable as antimatter...
Dumbledore trapped and manipulated!
Dumbledore was the true dark lord.
He manipulated Harry even from beyond the grave with pensive memories.
Harry had no choice in where or who he lived.
No choice in his friends.
Even his wife Ginny was chosen for him.
Harry was not a hero but a puppet and victim.
I despise Dumbledore ... and Rowling for her gain off Harrys pain.
The is gold!
No diamond!
Not quite a valuable as antimatter...
Dumbledore trapped and manipulated!
Dumbledore was the true dark lord.
He manipulated Harry even from beyond the grave with pensive memories.
Harry had no choice in where or who he lived.
No choice in his friends.
Even his wife Ginny was chosen for him.
Harry was not a hero but a puppet and victim.
I despise Dumbledore ... and Rowling for her gain off Harrys pain.
7/14/2021 c26 Rune Tobor
That the Ministry sent in someone to torture children and Dumbledore and the staff did nothing is Unforgivable!
Kill them all...
That the Ministry sent in someone to torture children and Dumbledore and the staff did nothing is Unforgivable!
Kill them all...
7/14/2021 c25 Rune Tobor
A really, really, really fun part of Avengers crossovers is messing with Fury!
Well done!
A really, really, really fun part of Avengers crossovers is messing with Fury!
Well done!
7/14/2021 c24 Rune Tobor
A very different tournament.
Just for fun tack on a chapter where S.H.I.E.L.D. want to hire Sammy and ignores Harry.
A very different tournament.
Just for fun tack on a chapter where S.H.I.E.L.D. want to hire Sammy and ignores Harry.
7/14/2021 c23 Rune Tobor
The light at the end of the tunnel? DRAGONFIRE!
The light at the end of the tunnel? DRAGONFIRE!
7/14/2021 c2 
1Gabe1234
Ok I'm sorry. Also nick fury? I think this is a very good story it's just not for me. The summary is incredibly misleading and honestly does not fit with the story. Like this isn't slightly close to canon. Also you said you wanted Harry to be smart? He's like a robot? I honestly don't get it. Anyway, I'll probably go back to this story and read it again in a month or two.
1Gabe1234Ok I'm sorry. Also nick fury? I think this is a very good story it's just not for me. The summary is incredibly misleading and honestly does not fit with the story. Like this isn't slightly close to canon. Also you said you wanted Harry to be smart? He's like a robot? I honestly don't get it. Anyway, I'll probably go back to this story and read it again in a month or two.
7/14/2021 c1 Gabe1234
Ok I was not expecting this to be a wbwl, forgotten Harry, living Jily, and manipulative dumbledore. If you had just written this story I would've recommended changing the summary to mention this stuff cause it seems incredibly important. Anyway, this story's old so it doesn't matter. Interested to see what's gonna happen.
Ok I was not expecting this to be a wbwl, forgotten Harry, living Jily, and manipulative dumbledore. If you had just written this story I would've recommended changing the summary to mention this stuff cause it seems incredibly important. Anyway, this story's old so it doesn't matter. Interested to see what's gonna happen.
7/13/2021 c19 Rune Tobor
If you kill all the death eaters
All the unmarked supporters
Every sympathiser
Cull the cowards
And the lazy
Lets not forget the mindless who believe the Ministry
Daily Prophet drones...
The number of witches and wizards left is very low.
Just destroy the witless wizzy wackos.
Wizards Fall is a fav of mine.
If you kill all the death eaters
All the unmarked supporters
Every sympathiser
Cull the cowards
And the lazy
Lets not forget the mindless who believe the Ministry
Daily Prophet drones...
The number of witches and wizards left is very low.
Just destroy the witless wizzy wackos.
Wizards Fall is a fav of mine.