
9/11 c16 thiagohiago2008
DAWM IT! I just love this fanfic Soo much! It's a good take on the Kyuubi Naruto and it is do good! I hate I can't pay the Patreon to even see more chapter's
Continue the good work if you either alive or not, please if you all switched platforms say it!
DAWM IT! I just love this fanfic Soo much! It's a good take on the Kyuubi Naruto and it is do good! I hate I can't pay the Patreon to even see more chapter's
Continue the good work if you either alive or not, please if you all switched platforms say it!
9/3 c16
1Pitch'snieceanddaughterofMew
DYAAAAAAAAA THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND HAVING NARUTO JUST BIENG SO CONFUSED AT HOW HE WAS INSTANTLY PSUEDO-ADOPTED AS FAMILY JUST MWAH MARVELOUS DARLING ABSOLUTELY MARVELOUS

DYAAAAAAAAA THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND HAVING NARUTO JUST BIENG SO CONFUSED AT HOW HE WAS INSTANTLY PSUEDO-ADOPTED AS FAMILY JUST MWAH MARVELOUS DARLING ABSOLUTELY MARVELOUS
9/2 c16 Dragonblaze66
Nice new chap! Few questions
1. What happens to the chakra of his parents?
2. Is it possible for him for him to be sealed in anyone else?
3. Can he access kurama memories?
Nice new chap! Few questions
1. What happens to the chakra of his parents?
2. Is it possible for him for him to be sealed in anyone else?
3. Can he access kurama memories?
8/30 c16 Guest
Update pls this story is good
Update pls this story is good
8/31 c1 BIOHAZARD 04
Ah I seem to have accidentally pressed the post button prematurely. I’ll continue on with my previous post.
The second part of the premise would be the amount of intrigue and entertainment value it has (which is subjective to me, of course, as id this entire review) I believe that overall it has effectively set it up for start of a particularly exciting and entertaining read that I feel no qualms with investing a disproportionate amount of time reading.
The Story: It’s a little slow at some parts (which isn’t a bad thing, depending on the future path of the story as well as the intentional pacing, as I do feel as if we are in a “calm before the storm” section, and the politics will soon spill over drastically increasing the pace of the story.) overall I believe the story is solid and well thought out.
Ah I seem to have accidentally pressed the post button prematurely. I’ll continue on with my previous post.
The second part of the premise would be the amount of intrigue and entertainment value it has (which is subjective to me, of course, as id this entire review) I believe that overall it has effectively set it up for start of a particularly exciting and entertaining read that I feel no qualms with investing a disproportionate amount of time reading.
The Story: It’s a little slow at some parts (which isn’t a bad thing, depending on the future path of the story as well as the intentional pacing, as I do feel as if we are in a “calm before the storm” section, and the politics will soon spill over drastically increasing the pace of the story.) overall I believe the story is solid and well thought out.
8/31 c1 BIOHAZARD 04
Hello! I have a couple things that I feel the need to touch up on and provide feedback.
The premise: I’d say that compared to what the usual is for this site it sits around a 9-10, based upon 2 categories; it’s uniqueness of the premise, as i haven’t seen anything like this, as well as how
Hello! I have a couple things that I feel the need to touch up on and provide feedback.
The premise: I’d say that compared to what the usual is for this site it sits around a 9-10, based upon 2 categories; it’s uniqueness of the premise, as i haven’t seen anything like this, as well as how
8/25 c16 Gen. Malaise
P.S. in a letter stands for "post script". So if you're leaving a message after your post script it would be a post post script.
In your letter in this chapter you have PSS, it should be PPS.
P.S. in a letter stands for "post script". So if you're leaving a message after your post script it would be a post post script.
In your letter in this chapter you have PSS, it should be PPS.
8/24 c16 Nathair1
prteey damn interesting, so far
what's with the egg, shikamaru found?
will naruto EVER have a love lifein this story?
eager to see what happens next
prteey damn interesting, so far
what's with the egg, shikamaru found?
will naruto EVER have a love lifein this story?
eager to see what happens next
8/24 c16 Guest
Suiken is now officially a slug teddy bear in my mind.
Suiken is now officially a slug teddy bear in my mind.