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12/15/2016 c13 7Alicia Olivia Mirza
Hey!
I love this story so far!
I dearly hope that you haven't given upon it yet!
Keep up the good work!

Alicia :)
2/6/2016 c13 2PancakeNSyrup
Good job
2/6/2016 c13 ctc
round 2 not so good...
2/6/2016 c13 3lilyflower1345
Good chapter! I felt sorry for James at the end there, but they're both dealing with alot. Thanks for writing this
2/6/2016 c13 6BookLover1182
Love it and very interesting story please update when you can.
1/26/2016 c12 SlaveOfPassion
I like this story and where it's going.
Although I'm wondering if they're going to remember the exact details of "that night"...?
I hope you keep getting reviews to encourage you to write more! I know how writers block can be, it sucks, but reviews always seem to help!
Keep it up :)
1/24/2016 c12 3lilyflower1345
Thanks for the great chapter!
1/5/2016 c11 lilyflower1345
great chapter! I liked the seeing James and Lily's dad get along and talk sports. I'm glad that her dad was supportive. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed this chapter :)
12/21/2015 c10 lilyflower1345
great chapter! I loved seeing James be supportive and saying he'll do whatever Lily needs. Thanks for writing this!
12/13/2015 c5 Guest
PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU DONT MAKE LILY PREGNANT!PLEASE DONT MAKE HER PREGNANT
12/12/2015 c9 lilyflower1345
Good chapter! I feel sorry for Lily though it makes sense James needs time to think. Thanks for writing this!
11/29/2015 c8 lilyflower1345
Good chapter! I'm glad that Lily finally told James she's pregnant. James was cute trying not to joke. I'm excited to see his reaction. Thanks for writing this!
11/28/2015 c8 musicfan1346
Poor James. He has been after her for so long and now that he had, he can barely remember the night they spend together. Not only that, but now he got Lily pregnant. His reaction is bound to be interesting.
11/1/2015 c6 SuraWaldelfe
Hey,

I really like your story so far & I'm excited to read more of it.
Will Lily tell her mum that she's pregnant over the winter holidays?
She will sooner or later start showing, more possibly later because it's her first baby and some woman don't really start showing until ca 6 month.

Please don't take to long with the next update :)
10/31/2015 c6 15xXxVioletSkyxXx
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