for One Week Left9/17/2015 c1 
14Shirahime Shou95
I can't believe no one reviewed this story... I like it! Although Inuyasha's roughness when he first met Kagome again was a little bit extreme, it's still pretty understandable.
Although something bothered me a bit. Kagome had been doing her best not to let Inuyasha and their child know about her for years. Yet it seems like she had so easily give in when she met them again.
I think it would've be great too if we could see Inuyasha's sadness and grief depicted more clearly after Kagome's death. All in all, it's a pretty good job!
14Shirahime Shou95I can't believe no one reviewed this story... I like it! Although Inuyasha's roughness when he first met Kagome again was a little bit extreme, it's still pretty understandable.
Although something bothered me a bit. Kagome had been doing her best not to let Inuyasha and their child know about her for years. Yet it seems like she had so easily give in when she met them again.
I think it would've be great too if we could see Inuyasha's sadness and grief depicted more clearly after Kagome's death. All in all, it's a pretty good job!