for The Definition of Normal3/13/2022 c5 peggy77
They had an appointment with the goblins at 10, not 9. This is good so far but feels...like things are too rushed.
They had an appointment with the goblins at 10, not 9. This is good so far but feels...like things are too rushed.
2/18/2022 c20 ProditorMagnus
Its unreasonable to expect Peter had forgotten Padfoot. He should have tried to fight or escape before reaching shop.
Its unreasonable to expect Peter had forgotten Padfoot. He should have tried to fight or escape before reaching shop.
2/12/2022 c22 BlazeStryker
Given my Policy, you can imagine I would suspect this, but I really do have to wonder in a Headbastard type would have set compulsions in Molly Prewitt Weasley so she blasts everyone with Howlers to better hear of everything others find out; a red-headed alert system.
Given my Policy, you can imagine I would suspect this, but I really do have to wonder in a Headbastard type would have set compulsions in Molly Prewitt Weasley so she blasts everyone with Howlers to better hear of everything others find out; a red-headed alert system.
1/20/2022 c75 renowned-warrior
For most parts, this story was a good and exciting story. Many funny details, good plots and believable characters. There were a few small details along the way which were somewhat deficient, but it takes a lot of work to make everything equally good.
However, I think the story began to limp two-thirds into it and in particular the last five chapters were decidedly inconsequential and ended up for me to appear more as an attempt to keep something alive down artificial respiration, which I think is a pity.
For most parts, this story was a good and exciting story. Many funny details, good plots and believable characters. There were a few small details along the way which were somewhat deficient, but it takes a lot of work to make everything equally good.
However, I think the story began to limp two-thirds into it and in particular the last five chapters were decidedly inconsequential and ended up for me to appear more as an attempt to keep something alive down artificial respiration, which I think is a pity.
1/19/2022 c53 renowned-warrior
35 degrees! Wow that's warm! I wouldn't recommend a blanket with that. But is that probable even in early november?you are aware that they use celsius in the UK and not fahrenheit?
35 degrees! Wow that's warm! I wouldn't recommend a blanket with that. But is that probable even in early november?you are aware that they use celsius in the UK and not fahrenheit?
1/9/2022 c61 TennysonPoet
I think some of the $$ should have gone to the Weasley family rather than Ginny. Yes she was impacted but the threat wasn't targeted to her but rather to the family itself.
great story.
I think some of the $$ should have gone to the Weasley family rather than Ginny. Yes she was impacted but the threat wasn't targeted to her but rather to the family itself.
great story.
1/5/2022 c53 Hermione.G 2.0
Oh my goodness. Isn't this overdoing it?
Oh my goodness. Isn't this overdoing it?
1/2/2022 c38 Hermione.G 2.0
Again: Why are you making Ron so lazy? And rude? And making him look as if he's dumb? He just has a short attention span and has a few troubles in school, that's all. That's fine. Not EVERYONE has to be good at something. I sense a fight breaking out between Harry and Ron.
Again: Why are you making Ron so lazy? And rude? And making him look as if he's dumb? He just has a short attention span and has a few troubles in school, that's all. That's fine. Not EVERYONE has to be good at something. I sense a fight breaking out between Harry and Ron.
12/30/2021 c18 Guest
I read the title of this chapter and started humming that Wiggles song, the one about glasses. Yuck.
I read the title of this chapter and started humming that Wiggles song, the one about glasses. Yuck.
12/29/2021 c4 Hermione.G 2.0
Ok, no Weasley bashing. Good.
Ok, no Weasley bashing. Good.
12/29/2021 c1 Hermione 2.0
Wait. Is this Ron bashing? I only say that because, and I quote, 'he was delighted to see it was from Hermione'. Mind you, he never said anything like that towards the Weasleys. Soooo...…
I just don't agree with bashing. Not that this is a bad story. It's perfectly fine right now.
Wait. Is this Ron bashing? I only say that because, and I quote, 'he was delighted to see it was from Hermione'. Mind you, he never said anything like that towards the Weasleys. Soooo...…
I just don't agree with bashing. Not that this is a bad story. It's perfectly fine right now.
12/23/2021 c75 jaqmaq77
it was good while it lasted. I was hoping that it was going to go one more year - finally giving Harry his hearts desire - a quiet year... and the trip to the world cup... could have met Fleur while camping... little romance and flirting. Pen pals leading to more later... (Oops... guess who likes H/Fleur...) No Tri Wiz... just boredom... till he gets kidnapped by Fleur... Sorry... my bad... almost took you to an 'M'... "Naughty Fleur, untie 'arry from zat bed and give him back 'is clothes..." "But Mama... It ez 'Arry Potter... can we not keep 'im." "Do not look at me with those puppy eyes... oh, ok, but just a month or so... then 'e' as to go 'ome."
it was good while it lasted. I was hoping that it was going to go one more year - finally giving Harry his hearts desire - a quiet year... and the trip to the world cup... could have met Fleur while camping... little romance and flirting. Pen pals leading to more later... (Oops... guess who likes H/Fleur...) No Tri Wiz... just boredom... till he gets kidnapped by Fleur... Sorry... my bad... almost took you to an 'M'... "Naughty Fleur, untie 'arry from zat bed and give him back 'is clothes..." "But Mama... It ez 'Arry Potter... can we not keep 'im." "Do not look at me with those puppy eyes... oh, ok, but just a month or so... then 'e' as to go 'ome."
12/23/2021 c72 jaqmaq77
wow, Harry really should care about money - with that kind of Philanthropist mindset he will be bankrupt before he graduates...
It was a strange chapter... Money, money, money, must be funny, in the wizard world... Ra Ra rice pudding, a dish that Dobby is serving, now that's a dish, soon to be gone...
Ok, ok... I'll stop... that last curse just missed me...
wow, Harry really should care about money - with that kind of Philanthropist mindset he will be bankrupt before he graduates...
It was a strange chapter... Money, money, money, must be funny, in the wizard world... Ra Ra rice pudding, a dish that Dobby is serving, now that's a dish, soon to be gone...
Ok, ok... I'll stop... that last curse just missed me...