
7/1/2024 c19 bookivore
There’s not much you can do with shopping but I’ve noticed a trend: fanfic writers think Harry doesn’t have and/ or can’t get underwear. What’s up with that? Is Petunia actually going to think he has money if he spends the equivalent of $20 on socks and underwear once in a while? And it has to be available on the wizards side or Hermione at least would have had a major blow up at some point.
There’s not much you can do with shopping but I’ve noticed a trend: fanfic writers think Harry doesn’t have and/ or can’t get underwear. What’s up with that? Is Petunia actually going to think he has money if he spends the equivalent of $20 on socks and underwear once in a while? And it has to be available on the wizards side or Hermione at least would have had a major blow up at some point.
6/23/2024 c35 Esmereilda
unfortunately dumbles are the muggles in this might not all be muggles but some muggleborn instead so it will be harder for u to sweep this under the rug this time
unfortunately dumbles are the muggles in this might not all be muggles but some muggleborn instead so it will be harder for u to sweep this under the rug this time
6/23/2024 c26 Books85
I have been wondering ever since you introduced Mr. Howe, what happened to Mr. Cheatham? Once you have a Dewey and a Howe, you must have a Cheatham!
I would have asked a few chapters ago, but you write so well that I was always focused on, "What happens next? " That is a complement, by the way!
Thank you fro an entertaining tale. I appreciate the work needed for it to be here.
I have been wondering ever since you introduced Mr. Howe, what happened to Mr. Cheatham? Once you have a Dewey and a Howe, you must have a Cheatham!
I would have asked a few chapters ago, but you write so well that I was always focused on, "What happens next? " That is a complement, by the way!
Thank you fro an entertaining tale. I appreciate the work needed for it to be here.
6/22/2024 c19 Books85
One thing I like about this tale is that both Srius and Remus act parental with Harry as opposed to their characterization in canon. That will be harder for both once they are in the headmaster's presence; he tends to treat everyone as children as a power play, plus he has some "hold" over each. That may be their biggest challenge.
Thank you.
One thing I like about this tale is that both Srius and Remus act parental with Harry as opposed to their characterization in canon. That will be harder for both once they are in the headmaster's presence; he tends to treat everyone as children as a power play, plus he has some "hold" over each. That may be their biggest challenge.
Thank you.
6/9/2024 c52 Justice4Hagrid
Finally, a story that acknowledges the fact that Hagrid should never have been expelled, and that his wand never should have been snapped! Love it!
Finally, a story that acknowledges the fact that Hagrid should never have been expelled, and that his wand never should have been snapped! Love it!
6/8/2024 c75 Guest
CONGRATULATIONS on completing an excellent story. Thanks
CONGRATULATIONS on completing an excellent story. Thanks
6/8/2024 c72 Guest
Random thoughts...A fine upon conviction is one thing but perhaps the family could be allowed to survive without charity. The government takes their money then Harry has to support them ? 4,000 per year tuition seems a bit steep. Is it assumed most everyone in the magical world is in need of charity? Top speed brooms for beginners in flying class? Maybe a nice safe training broom would be more appropriate. Fire bolts all around for teams? At least one player was afraid of the professional level broom and these children are the most skilled flyers in the school. Are all war orphans pathetic? Harry is a war orphan with gobs of money. Seems like he's just throwing money around with no analysis of need or priorities.
Random thoughts...A fine upon conviction is one thing but perhaps the family could be allowed to survive without charity. The government takes their money then Harry has to support them ? 4,000 per year tuition seems a bit steep. Is it assumed most everyone in the magical world is in need of charity? Top speed brooms for beginners in flying class? Maybe a nice safe training broom would be more appropriate. Fire bolts all around for teams? At least one player was afraid of the professional level broom and these children are the most skilled flyers in the school. Are all war orphans pathetic? Harry is a war orphan with gobs of money. Seems like he's just throwing money around with no analysis of need or priorities.
6/5/2024 c47 Guest
I've got a bad feeling about this. Dumbledore may plan one last desperate strike at Harry. Maybe they should put a silencing ward around Harry until after D has had his say. That way the conversation can be edited or even kept from Harry altogether if D plans to harm him verbally. And be prepared to intervene I the event of an attack of any kind. CONSTANT VIGILANCE!
I've got a bad feeling about this. Dumbledore may plan one last desperate strike at Harry. Maybe they should put a silencing ward around Harry until after D has had his say. That way the conversation can be edited or even kept from Harry altogether if D plans to harm him verbally. And be prepared to intervene I the event of an attack of any kind. CONSTANT VIGILANCE!
6/5/2024 c25 Guest
Kind of rubbing their face in the Snuggles lie. That could end poorly.
Kind of rubbing their face in the Snuggles lie. That could end poorly.
6/5/2024 c24 Guest
Perhaps Harry could order Dobby to call Remus Mr. Lupin instead of the risky Wolfie. Remus has already had to lie about Animagus training to cover this blunder. Also lied about not knowing where Sirius is. Good story.
Perhaps Harry could order Dobby to call Remus Mr. Lupin instead of the risky Wolfie. Remus has already had to lie about Animagus training to cover this blunder. Also lied about not knowing where Sirius is. Good story.
6/5/2024 c20 Guest
"Harry! Hermione!" yelled Ron. Harry and Hermione went to the door and Snuffles sidled over to check out the group that had just invaded. It's a wonder Scabbers didn't sneak away. If Sirius could recognize a photo of Scabbers/Wormtail, Pettigrew would definitely recognize Snuffles. Excellent story, quite entertaining. Thanks
"Harry! Hermione!" yelled Ron. Harry and Hermione went to the door and Snuffles sidled over to check out the group that had just invaded. It's a wonder Scabbers didn't sneak away. If Sirius could recognize a photo of Scabbers/Wormtail, Pettigrew would definitely recognize Snuffles. Excellent story, quite entertaining. Thanks
6/3/2024 c75 Rose
Thank you for a fun and interesting take on Wizarding World. I have enjoyed it
-Rose of the Midwest
Thank you for a fun and interesting take on Wizarding World. I have enjoyed it
-Rose of the Midwest