for Tensions1/15/2017 c4 Guest
Wtf is wrong with Hazel
Wtf is wrong with Hazel
1/15/2017 c10 Guest
Oh my god I was imagining that and it was pretty ridiculous
Oh my god I was imagining that and it was pretty ridiculous
1/15/2017 c9 Guest
I agree with the last chapter's title
I agree with the last chapter's title
1/15/2017 c2 Guest
poor poor leo...
poor poor leo...
7/26/2016 c21 
2Whale Too Bad
I was gonna scream at you, but there's another story so you're safe this time.
2Whale Too BadI was gonna scream at you, but there's another story so you're safe this time.
7/15/2016 c21 Guest
THAT WAS AMAZING
THAT WAS AMAZING
4/1/2016 c21 1DaAwesomeGurl
I
LOVE
THIS
FANFICTION
SO
BLOODY
MUCH
You managed to capture all their character in the different POVs, i especially liked the Leo ones, I can imagine him actually thinking those things. You wrote it so well, I was entranced by every word, I despaired when percy and jason had to fight (because they are just freaking scary) and CALEO AHHH
as a fangirl of PJO and HOO I'd say this is the BEST (the BEST) fanfiction of the series I've EVER read. Honest. I love the way you set it just after they'd defeated gaia, and your plot is original and amazing, I LOVE it!
I will read the sequel soon.
Keep up the amazing fanfic skills.
NICO IS AMAZING
LEO IS AMAZING TOO
PERCABETH IS BAE
AND SO ARE YOU!
Thank you for making my day of reading so enjoyable. have a cookie (::)
1DaAwesomeGurlI
LOVE
THIS
FANFICTION
SO
BLOODY
MUCH
You managed to capture all their character in the different POVs, i especially liked the Leo ones, I can imagine him actually thinking those things. You wrote it so well, I was entranced by every word, I despaired when percy and jason had to fight (because they are just freaking scary) and CALEO AHHH
as a fangirl of PJO and HOO I'd say this is the BEST (the BEST) fanfiction of the series I've EVER read. Honest. I love the way you set it just after they'd defeated gaia, and your plot is original and amazing, I LOVE it!
I will read the sequel soon.
Keep up the amazing fanfic skills.
NICO IS AMAZING
LEO IS AMAZING TOO
PERCABETH IS BAE
AND SO ARE YOU!
Thank you for making my day of reading so enjoyable. have a cookie (::)
4/1/2016 c2 DaAwesomeGurl
LEO!
PERCY!
HOW COULD YOU?!
I agree with hazzel. I wanna rip that voice into A THOUSAND PIECES
LEO I LOVE YOU DONT BE SAD
PERCY I LOVE YOU TOO BUT YOU SAID SOME NASTY STUFF
i hope they make up
:'(
this was a great chapter! I won't review till I get to the end, sorry!
LEO!
PERCY!
HOW COULD YOU?!
I agree with hazzel. I wanna rip that voice into A THOUSAND PIECES
LEO I LOVE YOU DONT BE SAD
PERCY I LOVE YOU TOO BUT YOU SAID SOME NASTY STUFF
i hope they make up
:'(
this was a great chapter! I won't review till I get to the end, sorry!
2/18/2016 c21 Guest
Oh wow I just realized I read Flawed Heroes before this one... HAHA anyway... GOOD JOB! WELL DONE!
Oh wow I just realized I read Flawed Heroes before this one... HAHA anyway... GOOD JOB! WELL DONE!
2/18/2016 c19 Guest
I swear to god(even though I already kno u finished the story and I know what happens) if u kill Let Jason kill Percy Jackson I will kill you!
I swear to god(even though I already kno u finished the story and I know what happens) if u kill Let Jason kill Percy Jackson I will kill you!
2/7/2016 c21 180Karen Hikari
Aw! I loved this chapter, specially the part when you were describing how each cabin took Calypso's appearing, and the Hephaestus cabin! My gods, I love Nyssa when I literally have no reason at all to like her as she appeared so little!
Anyways and when they came back!
All in all I ended up reading this story because I didn't want to read something so long and decided to go for Flawed Herores but then you said it was a prequel and I was back in the beginning. Never mind,I don't regret anything.
Very good job! And I'll certainly go check your other stories!
Read you soon!
180Karen HikariAw! I loved this chapter, specially the part when you were describing how each cabin took Calypso's appearing, and the Hephaestus cabin! My gods, I love Nyssa when I literally have no reason at all to like her as she appeared so little!
Anyways and when they came back!
All in all I ended up reading this story because I didn't want to read something so long and decided to go for Flawed Herores but then you said it was a prequel and I was back in the beginning. Never mind,I don't regret anything.
Very good job! And I'll certainly go check your other stories!
Read you soon!
2/5/2016 c14 Karen Hikari
Oh my gods, I've literally been waiting for this since yesterday when I went to sleep and now I'm not sure if I want to know what happened!
Oh my gods, I've literally been waiting for this since yesterday when I went to sleep and now I'm not sure if I want to know what happened!
2/5/2016 c13 Karen Hikari
Oh gods, I was not supposed to enjoy the part where everyone cursed in different languages, but I did (look where my priorities are XP).
Anyways, if you ever need help reanslarukbg something from or to Spanish feel free to ask me!
PD: in loving this story so much!
Oh gods, I was not supposed to enjoy the part where everyone cursed in different languages, but I did (look where my priorities are XP).
Anyways, if you ever need help reanslarukbg something from or to Spanish feel free to ask me!
PD: in loving this story so much!
2/4/2016 c7 Karen Hikari
Okay, I'm just gonna answer Percy because I feel like it. Leo gets the best Olympic dad (though I do think Hades was a good one too, in his own way) because he lost his mom in a terribly way meanwhile Percy got Sally, who is plainly awesome and,well, I dunno, ALIVE!
Now, I don't know if I like Lyssaland because I'm loving this story or if I hate it because it's hurting my poor babies...
Okay, I'm just gonna answer Percy because I feel like it. Leo gets the best Olympic dad (though I do think Hades was a good one too, in his own way) because he lost his mom in a terribly way meanwhile Percy got Sally, who is plainly awesome and,well, I dunno, ALIVE!
Now, I don't know if I like Lyssaland because I'm loving this story or if I hate it because it's hurting my poor babies...
2/4/2016 c6 Karen Hikari
Yes, yes, YES! No,wait, I meant no, no, NO! Yes to Hephaestus helping them and being a caring father. Not to Leo's suffering and comma. Yes to Frank and Percy being idiots. Not to Annabeth and Piper fighting.
I don't know what I'm saying. Man,I should really just go to sleep already!
Yes, yes, YES! No,wait, I meant no, no, NO! Yes to Hephaestus helping them and being a caring father. Not to Leo's suffering and comma. Yes to Frank and Percy being idiots. Not to Annabeth and Piper fighting.
I don't know what I'm saying. Man,I should really just go to sleep already!