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7/14/2023 c4 Lmao
I love that team rocket is actually a threat in this, and that they actually win sometimes. Sure, the hero should win, but if the villains also never win there are no stakes in a battle since the outcome is already decided.
5/21/2023 c39 Guest
I Hope You make Ash more consistent Is competent trainers.. It angry me at the ThatvThe Writers Of pokemon Black and white completely sucked To Tbe Point Where Ash Lost To Novice Traimlner With Snivey..Lol

When will it get chapter 40.

How will you handle age.. Ash Should Literally Be Grown Man By Now. At least Spending 1 Year In Each Region or Something.. Possibly More
6/19/2022 c39 Mugen Kagemaru
And now I'm caught up.

Hope this comes back someday.
6/19/2022 c30 Mugen Kagemaru
Amazing how you covered Celadon Game Corner, and it's an epic divergence that Ash wound up inspiring a resistance against Team Rocket.
6/19/2022 c22 Mugen Kagemaru
3. I would say it's a matter for whether Jessiebelle existed out-of-universe when they made the episode. Probably not, but it's not like either of us know in what order things went on in-house.
6/18/2022 c19 Mugen Kagemaru
Hilarious that Mitchell's going to Celadon to get away from Team Rocket. In the games they have a major base there: the only one barring Viridian Gym that Red actually raids.
3/24/2022 c39 Schazmen
Holy crap! This entire chapter was awesome, but that chase with Staryu and Guarados was FANTASTIC! Staryu is MVP, no doubt!

It saddens me to see that this story has gone so long without an update. Personally, I'd love to see more, this is easily in my top favorite Pokemon fanfics.
But, if it's real life and inspiration that's been keeping updates from happening, nothing that can be done about that. I hope this story isn't dead, but I also don't want to pressure you to update.
3/23/2022 c37 Schazmen
That was a lot of awesome action. And man, the expression on Gary's face at Ash's experience and tiredness... Beautiful. XD
3/20/2022 c35 Schazmen
Oh hey, Gary made his reappearance... and was soundly trounced, damn, wow.

Well, that as a nice resolution to the probl- goddammit! I bet it's Team Rocket again!
3/20/2022 c39 27Orochimaru's Wife
Amazing story looking forward to reading more.
3/20/2022 c31 Orochimaru's Wife
Great story also will Jessie eventually get another pokemon?
3/18/2022 c34 Schazmen
Gringey City. Man, I didn't even see this episode, but I'm glad how it was handled. Also, damn, Pikachu so smooth he attracts machines. XD

I love seeing Pokemon train their own moves. Needle Ray!
3/16/2022 c33 Schazmen
Well, this one had a lot of fun stuff. And a little less fun.

Still, as I suspected, Drowzee's really being useful for everybody, especially Psyduck and Butterfree. I'm really glad the latter has gotten a start on his proper mourning. He shouldn't hurt this long.

It's also nice to see Misty showing more than just her arguing side toward Ash. Vaporeon's gonna be good on her team.

Frankly, I'm surprised I haven't seen Pokémon help train their Trainers before. like, off the top of my head, I can't recall it happening anywhere. That was a brilliant idea!
3/16/2022 c31 Schazmen
Wonder if that's the Psyduck Misty would've gotten. Poor guy.

That blue Pokémon is a surprise, though. Not that well-versed with the following generations, though, so- Yo! Is it a Sneasel? The hell is one doing in Kanto?
3/15/2022 c30 Schazmen
I love it when abilities are given a mundane utility. Like Drowzee's translations.

As for the gender issue... I mean, honestly... There are some limitations of the Gen I game engines that need to be ignored for the sake of coherency and just... common freaking sense. Especially since this is mostly based on the anime and not the game canon.
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