12/15/2023 c44 tiabaldwinDBZ
Hey, i found this story day before yesterday and i finally caught up, i absolutely loves this story and im excited to read the updated version, thank you for creating this wonderful story
Hey, i found this story day before yesterday and i finally caught up, i absolutely loves this story and im excited to read the updated version, thank you for creating this wonderful story
12/17/2022 c37 Nora
Ace getting is own storyline is very good.
Love the flashback at the beginning when Ace learned somethings about his father.
I like the fact that Ace learned somethings about what is going on with the Whitebeard Pirates and he might bring up the fact if Rose knew the information before hand or not.
I like the new character Cato. He seems cool. Hopefully we'll see more of him in the future.
Zira and Ace teaming up was great.
Meanwhile Rose and Luffy get a room and met Shirahoshi.
Ace getting is own storyline is very good.
Love the flashback at the beginning when Ace learned somethings about his father.
I like the fact that Ace learned somethings about what is going on with the Whitebeard Pirates and he might bring up the fact if Rose knew the information before hand or not.
I like the new character Cato. He seems cool. Hopefully we'll see more of him in the future.
Zira and Ace teaming up was great.
Meanwhile Rose and Luffy get a room and met Shirahoshi.
12/13/2022 c34 Nora
Fleet Admiral Aokiji is perfect because everyone has said that the Marine's would've been better off with him. So Rose making sure that happens is perfect.
Fleet Admiral Aokiji is perfect because everyone has said that the Marine's would've been better off with him. So Rose making sure that happens is perfect.
12/13/2022 c33 Nora
Reunion between Luffy and Rose is cute. Plus, everyone's reaction to Rose being alive is perfect. I like the fact that Ace met with Rose first and said sorry about everything before anyone else knew she was still alive.
Reunion between Luffy and Rose is cute. Plus, everyone's reaction to Rose being alive is perfect. I like the fact that Ace met with Rose first and said sorry about everything before anyone else knew she was still alive.
12/10/2022 c32 Nora
Luffy and Ace training together their fire moves was great. Even though I kinda wish the training fight was a little longer.
Rose and Zira are on their way back to the crew.
Luffy and Ace training together their fire moves was great. Even though I kinda wish the training fight was a little longer.
Rose and Zira are on their way back to the crew.
12/10/2022 c28 Nora
Rose training with Shanks for the next two years is cool. Then she meets Cora who has a time travel fruit because Rose changed the time stream because Ace lived.
Even though I don't think you need time travel in this because you could've still had Sabo in Dressrosa witness Ace and Luffy getting hurt and that might've triggered his memories because he never did meet them in real life, only ever read about them. Meeting them in real life might end up triggering his memories or if they say him and tried to make him remember them.
Rose training with Shanks for the next two years is cool. Then she meets Cora who has a time travel fruit because Rose changed the time stream because Ace lived.
Even though I don't think you need time travel in this because you could've still had Sabo in Dressrosa witness Ace and Luffy getting hurt and that might've triggered his memories because he never did meet them in real life, only ever read about them. Meeting them in real life might end up triggering his memories or if they say him and tried to make him remember them.
12/10/2022 c27 Nora
Angela; The scariest doctor in the world.
Angela; The scariest doctor in the world.
12/10/2022 c26 Nora
Rose's letters get read. The truth is finally revealing.
Rose's letters get read. The truth is finally revealing.
12/10/2022 c25 Nora
Rose vs Hancock. It went as to be expected.
Ace found out his brother has a girlfriend. That's a shock of his life. Luffy having a girl from another world.
Rose saving Ace and Luffy. Ace get's to live (Yes, I love this fic)
Whitebeard's death, now that Ace witnessed it, at Teach's hands might end up as servicing motivation for Luffy and him to get stronger. Since Ace would be crush at his pop's death and Luffy would have to witness his brother break-might make Luffy value to get stronger so he never has to see Ace heart broke over a lost of someone again.
Aokiji kills Rose, but he also didn't. But Rose being thought to be dead by the crew is interesting and would crush Luffy and every Strawhat member.
Rose vs Hancock. It went as to be expected.
Ace found out his brother has a girlfriend. That's a shock of his life. Luffy having a girl from another world.
Rose saving Ace and Luffy. Ace get's to live (Yes, I love this fic)
Whitebeard's death, now that Ace witnessed it, at Teach's hands might end up as servicing motivation for Luffy and him to get stronger. Since Ace would be crush at his pop's death and Luffy would have to witness his brother break-might make Luffy value to get stronger so he never has to see Ace heart broke over a lost of someone again.
Aokiji kills Rose, but he also didn't. But Rose being thought to be dead by the crew is interesting and would crush Luffy and every Strawhat member.
12/10/2022 c24 Nora
Rose meets Ace for the first time and says; Freckled logia users should stick together. Which is a great quote.
I can understand Garp fighting Rose, but since Garp was against the war in the first place and got out voted, I secretly see him wanting Rose to save Ace (especially because of her future knowledge), but would put on a show and hold back and let the girl overpower him (which he did with Luffy).
Zira using her skills to cause chaos was perfect since it confused everyone.
Doflamingo might end up becoming interested in Rose because of the girls knowledge and might want to compare his notes of the world with what she knows. (Which is why he might kidnap her during Dressrosa)
Stopping Whitebeard from getting stab might not change his death because this is the moment Blackbeard actually made a power move which 100% shaped history.
Ace's secret not being revealed is actually a good thing in the long run, unless the Marines put; Gol D Ace on his next wanted poster.
Rose meets Ace for the first time and says; Freckled logia users should stick together. Which is a great quote.
I can understand Garp fighting Rose, but since Garp was against the war in the first place and got out voted, I secretly see him wanting Rose to save Ace (especially because of her future knowledge), but would put on a show and hold back and let the girl overpower him (which he did with Luffy).
Zira using her skills to cause chaos was perfect since it confused everyone.
Doflamingo might end up becoming interested in Rose because of the girls knowledge and might want to compare his notes of the world with what she knows. (Which is why he might kidnap her during Dressrosa)
Stopping Whitebeard from getting stab might not change his death because this is the moment Blackbeard actually made a power move which 100% shaped history.
Ace's secret not being revealed is actually a good thing in the long run, unless the Marines put; Gol D Ace on his next wanted poster.
12/10/2022 c22 Nora
So thoughts from other worlds (like Rose) have a red color aura. That's interesting.
Still, the world Government using Rose's secrets in the war against her is a move, but they government also proves that other people could travel between worlds.
The crystals do sound like kyber crystals from Star Wars. Always growing and living in certain places. I guess the crystals can never be destroyed because other worlds can exist which the World Government can't control-which is why they can't destroy the crystals.
Zira the Falcon. I love that bird already. A cute and cool character for Rose to have. Zira's ability to use their voice to act like someone else is going to come in handy. Especially in battles to confuse people.
So thoughts from other worlds (like Rose) have a red color aura. That's interesting.
Still, the world Government using Rose's secrets in the war against her is a move, but they government also proves that other people could travel between worlds.
The crystals do sound like kyber crystals from Star Wars. Always growing and living in certain places. I guess the crystals can never be destroyed because other worlds can exist which the World Government can't control-which is why they can't destroy the crystals.
Zira the Falcon. I love that bird already. A cute and cool character for Rose to have. Zira's ability to use their voice to act like someone else is going to come in handy. Especially in battles to confuse people.
12/10/2022 c21 Nora
Rose and Luffy finally together, only to be separated.
And Rose at the end of the chapter made a Luffy entrance.
Even if she did somehow get into Impel Down, I don't think it would've stopped the war. Since Rose and Luffy would've been able to free Ace and the others but wouldn't have a way to contact Whitebeard to let them know Ace was freed, and the Marine's would've still tried for a fight with whitebeard regardless (rather they have Ace or not).
Rose and Luffy finally together, only to be separated.
And Rose at the end of the chapter made a Luffy entrance.
Even if she did somehow get into Impel Down, I don't think it would've stopped the war. Since Rose and Luffy would've been able to free Ace and the others but wouldn't have a way to contact Whitebeard to let them know Ace was freed, and the Marine's would've still tried for a fight with whitebeard regardless (rather they have Ace or not).
12/10/2022 c18 Nora
Young Rose with the crew was cute.
Young Rose with the crew was cute.
12/10/2022 c17 Nora
Finally the crystal has a name. Hopefully Rose will learn more information later on.
Personally Rose should try everything in her power to save Ace-since she knows his death is coming. Plus, if Luffy learned that she knew about it and didn't do anything (or everything is her power to prevent it) then he might not be able to forgive her.
Finally the crystal has a name. Hopefully Rose will learn more information later on.
Personally Rose should try everything in her power to save Ace-since she knows his death is coming. Plus, if Luffy learned that she knew about it and didn't do anything (or everything is her power to prevent it) then he might not be able to forgive her.
12/10/2022 c16 Nora
Rose being able to see the future is the best lie to come up with. It does explain her knowledge without telling everyone the truth.
Rose being able to see the future is the best lie to come up with. It does explain her knowledge without telling everyone the truth.