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Nice chapter. Especially loved the part of cooking Arlong into a stew.
Nice chapter. Especially loved the part of cooking Arlong into a stew.
6/4/2016 c17 Koncor the great
You did great also I'm happy thy ate arlong oddly enough I know how insane that sounds but there is nothing more humiliating than being passed through the disgusting system still feel he got off easy but I'm more satisfied now oddly enough
You did great also I'm happy thy ate arlong oddly enough I know how insane that sounds but there is nothing more humiliating than being passed through the disgusting system still feel he got off easy but I'm more satisfied now oddly enough
6/4/2016 c17 pipi96
Does that mean luffy will have both Nami and Robin?
Personally I will say YES GO FOR IT LUFFY
thanks for the chapter
Does that mean luffy will have both Nami and Robin?
Personally I will say YES GO FOR IT LUFFY
thanks for the chapter
6/4/2016 c17 
33Devlin Dracul
Hot damn! You actually did it! Wonder if it was good. Arlong stew. Hm, so many questions, no way to answer them. Doctor M is one hell of an enigma. He's so hard to figure out. And it's obvious who the 5th Yonko is. Hint: Zehahahaha! Also, that lemon was pretty damn hot! Is it really gonna be a Luffy x Robin fic? Seems more like it's gonna lean towards the harem route. . . . . . Harem makes more sense.
33Devlin DraculHot damn! You actually did it! Wonder if it was good. Arlong stew. Hm, so many questions, no way to answer them. Doctor M is one hell of an enigma. He's so hard to figure out. And it's obvious who the 5th Yonko is. Hint: Zehahahaha! Also, that lemon was pretty damn hot! Is it really gonna be a Luffy x Robin fic? Seems more like it's gonna lean towards the harem route. . . . . . Harem makes more sense.
4/30/2016 c16 Why881992883840002882818839
Well this was fun. I've been in a grumpy mood today so this story hit the spot, nothing helps a bad mood like seeing an absolute bastard be tortured to death.
Well this was fun. I've been in a grumpy mood today so this story hit the spot, nothing helps a bad mood like seeing an absolute bastard be tortured to death.
4/26/2016 c16 DarkPirateKing69
Well, that was fairly entertaining. To me personally, it's actually easier to read a pure OP fic, rather than Xover. I don't feel the need to compare these to Kenchi's Naruto/OP fic. Makes things easier.. Anyway, looking forward to the next one.
Well, that was fairly entertaining. To me personally, it's actually easier to read a pure OP fic, rather than Xover. I don't feel the need to compare these to Kenchi's Naruto/OP fic. Makes things easier.. Anyway, looking forward to the next one.
4/26/2016 c1 DarkPirateKing69
I hope there will be some kind of explanation, otherwise this felt just too random and really forced. Let's see.
I hope there will be some kind of explanation, otherwise this felt just too random and really forced. Let's see.
4/22/2016 c16 johndoe5574
yeah great story. i am really interested in luffy's past. this story is more correct in context of live of a pirate. i love one piece but the canon is too soft hearted? anyway good job
yeah great story. i am really interested in luffy's past. this story is more correct in context of live of a pirate. i love one piece but the canon is too soft hearted? anyway good job
4/21/2016 c16 1whatnameshallitake
lemons?Did'ya say lemons?I could help if you want to..Just pm me,kay? :)
Amazing chapter btw!Sorry for being a silent reader..Hehe xP
1whatnameshallitakelemons?Did'ya say lemons?I could help if you want to..Just pm me,kay? :)
Amazing chapter btw!Sorry for being a silent reader..Hehe xP
4/10/2016 c16 jamestheghost19
You know the first time I read this story summary I just ignored this story since I am not a fan of Luffy x Robin, I like Luffy x Nami more. But after reading your other story darkest day I thought let's give this story a try. So I started reading it and continue reading it and reading it and reading it and...you know what. Fuck the world this story is freaking awesome. I fucking love this story. Never thought I would like a story containing gore.
Please make it a Luffy x Harem fic. Also please keep Nami's virginity intact until Luffy takes it. In chapter 15 you told about Nami getting raped but make it so that at last moments that octopus guy appeared and save Nami from those bastard fishmen.
I can't wait for next chapter. Hope you update soon and have a nice day. Ciao.
You know the first time I read this story summary I just ignored this story since I am not a fan of Luffy x Robin, I like Luffy x Nami more. But after reading your other story darkest day I thought let's give this story a try. So I started reading it and continue reading it and reading it and reading it and...you know what. Fuck the world this story is freaking awesome. I fucking love this story. Never thought I would like a story containing gore.
Please make it a Luffy x Harem fic. Also please keep Nami's virginity intact until Luffy takes it. In chapter 15 you told about Nami getting raped but make it so that at last moments that octopus guy appeared and save Nami from those bastard fishmen.
I can't wait for next chapter. Hope you update soon and have a nice day. Ciao.