
6/13/2020 c3 Nami4Life
Solid chapter ,not much happened ,but zoro one shotting morgan was very satisfying indeed.
Solid chapter ,not much happened ,but zoro one shotting morgan was very satisfying indeed.
6/13/2020 c2 Nami4Life
Boom ,first villain done ,first friend acquired ,first Nami contact ,first mate incoming ,lol, good stuff author-san.
Boom ,first villain done ,first friend acquired ,first Nami contact ,first mate incoming ,lol, good stuff author-san.
1/25/2020 c17 Guest
Loved everything about this chapter ,eating Arlong is fine he just a fish , he thinks he’s so strong he can’t even recognise what I call genuine strength, did not expect the lemon but it was really sweet , thought you did a good job , and the epic one sided beat down of Arlong’s entire crew was exactly what was due and also what I wanted to see
Loved everything about this chapter ,eating Arlong is fine he just a fish , he thinks he’s so strong he can’t even recognise what I call genuine strength, did not expect the lemon but it was really sweet , thought you did a good job , and the epic one sided beat down of Arlong’s entire crew was exactly what was due and also what I wanted to see
1/24/2020 c16 Guest
Loved it!
Loved it!
1/24/2020 c13 Guest
Honestly , I think you went too far and of course he was utterly defeated , disappointing
Honestly , I think you went too far and of course he was utterly defeated , disappointing
1/24/2020 c1 Guest
Interesting, hope he takes no shit at all .
Interesting, hope he takes no shit at all .
11/8/2019 c2 Guest
Why would a pirate have kunai instead of a daggers? This ain't Naruto and Luffy ain't no ninja, he's a pirate. I get he has a sea stone dagger, but seriously, kunai?
Why would a pirate have kunai instead of a daggers? This ain't Naruto and Luffy ain't no ninja, he's a pirate. I get he has a sea stone dagger, but seriously, kunai?
11/1/2019 c17 Guest
I like it , it’s different, it’s your story, so ,do as you want , as long as I’m hearing the names Luffy, Zoro, Nami etc etc I don’t mind.
I like it , it’s different, it’s your story, so ,do as you want , as long as I’m hearing the names Luffy, Zoro, Nami etc etc I don’t mind.
11/1/2019 c16 Guest
This chapter was sick af, short ,sharp ,direct and brutal fights , and with the most perfect end ,you nailed this chapter !
This chapter was sick af, short ,sharp ,direct and brutal fights , and with the most perfect end ,you nailed this chapter !
11/1/2019 c7 Guest
Enjoyed the fight a lot , it was basically just a power meter, letting us know how big the gap is , would really like Zoro to have a sword like Luffy’s .
Enjoyed the fight a lot , it was basically just a power meter, letting us know how big the gap is , would really like Zoro to have a sword like Luffy’s .
11/1/2019 c5 Guest
Really enjoying this story so far,love how op they are because I actually want them to steamroll everyone at all times lol , but that’s just me.
Really enjoying this story so far,love how op they are because I actually want them to steamroll everyone at all times lol , but that’s just me.
11/1/2019 c3 Guest
Haha , I thought we were getting a captain vs vice-captain rumble .
Haha , I thought we were getting a captain vs vice-captain rumble .
4/11/2019 c19 Guest
im sad...and yet happy that this wasnt continued...since the more it goes on the more it sucks...
im sad...and yet happy that this wasnt continued...since the more it goes on the more it sucks...
4/11/2019 c15 Guest
oh yeah...nami would just have that conversation right there...
oh yeah...nami would just have that conversation right there...