
4/4/2019 c7 Guest
Wow... the sword thing...way overboard.
Wow... the sword thing...way overboard.
12/4/2018 c14 Servillius
Man! I know it's been ages since You've written this particular piece but I hopefully You continue! It's really indulging!
Man! I know it's been ages since You've written this particular piece but I hopefully You continue! It's really indulging!
8/8/2018 c2 Guest
Wet himself... Shat himself...
Yuck...
Who told you people like to read stuff like this? Extremely bad writing.
Wet himself... Shat himself...
Yuck...
Who told you people like to read stuff like this? Extremely bad writing.
7/3/2018 c19 sad
i wanted to read everything in this story, why the good story always die?
i wanted to read everything in this story, why the good story always die?
7/1/2018 c6 dandraft15
A less forgiving luffy? Based on how he handle this, I don't agree that, your depiction of Luffy is very much the same. The black cats are one hell of a loose end to let go.
A less forgiving luffy? Based on how he handle this, I don't agree that, your depiction of Luffy is very much the same. The black cats are one hell of a loose end to let go.
6/18/2018 c19 hmm
i really hope those really aren't saitama and genos, or luffy is gonna get rekt
i really hope those really aren't saitama and genos, or luffy is gonna get rekt
6/18/2018 c17 hmm
alot of people aren't gonna forget about this huge bomb you dropped, probally killed a bunch of boa and robin fans. well im just gonna pretend this didn't happen, also please warn us for lemon.
alot of people aren't gonna forget about this huge bomb you dropped, probally killed a bunch of boa and robin fans. well im just gonna pretend this didn't happen, also please warn us for lemon.
6/18/2018 c18 yikes
robin and boa gonna be very mad.
robin and boa gonna be very mad.
6/18/2018 c17 hmm
bitch-long stew sounds tasty.
bitch-long stew sounds tasty.