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1Redery
Ahhh Kuro was a let down, could've had an awesome fight between him and Zoro.
And cool Luffy got a sword. How'd he get in contact with them though and seems like they already knew him? So many mysteries :o
1RederyAhhh Kuro was a let down, could've had an awesome fight between him and Zoro.
And cool Luffy got a sword. How'd he get in contact with them though and seems like they already knew him? So many mysteries :o
7/21/2016 c5 Redery
Whoa how the heck did he do that?! Like I get the fire but what about the water.
Also when did he learn all this stuff? From the first chapter it just seemed like he was being tortured and experimented on not trained to fight so many different ways. He should've had less training time than in canon as well
Not complaining, I'm all for OP smart Luffy, just trying to make sense of it lol.
Whoa how the heck did he do that?! Like I get the fire but what about the water.
Also when did he learn all this stuff? From the first chapter it just seemed like he was being tortured and experimented on not trained to fight so many different ways. He should've had less training time than in canon as well
Not complaining, I'm all for OP smart Luffy, just trying to make sense of it lol.
7/20/2016 c4 Redery
Oh no. Please don't tell me Ace and Sabo are dead and that money is their old stash.
Also where is he keeping it? Clearly not on that tiny boat, it'd sink under the weight of that much money lol.
Oh no. Please don't tell me Ace and Sabo are dead and that money is their old stash.
Also where is he keeping it? Clearly not on that tiny boat, it'd sink under the weight of that much money lol.
7/20/2016 c19 ako.jomar.5
Saitama? he would wreck luffy to oblivion. why did you introduced him is he gonna be an ally?
Saitama? he would wreck luffy to oblivion. why did you introduced him is he gonna be an ally?
7/18/2016 c19 1loveanimation4life
like it. to ur previous question of vivi i think that she should not join the crew. it can be that luffy has an helper in the government with her being the princess.
1loveanimation4lifelike it. to ur previous question of vivi i think that she should not join the crew. it can be that luffy has an helper in the government with her being the princess.
7/15/2016 c19 Koncor the great
Interesting looking forward to it btw never got back to me on the submission but I'm guessing it's out seeing how ace used the captains ability
Interesting looking forward to it btw never got back to me on the submission but I'm guessing it's out seeing how ace used the captains ability
7/15/2016 c19 33Devlin Dracul
So I'm the unofficial Yonko? *chuckle* Nice. How many people can say they have Spike Spiegel as a subordinate? Though, I'm kinda surprised Death is working for me, considering... well, you know. Still, Spike vs. Luffy. Now that'll be interesting. . . . . . Is Ed going to be there? I'm sure she'd get along well with Luffy. . . . . *snicker* "Nimrod".
33Devlin DraculSo I'm the unofficial Yonko? *chuckle* Nice. How many people can say they have Spike Spiegel as a subordinate? Though, I'm kinda surprised Death is working for me, considering... well, you know. Still, Spike vs. Luffy. Now that'll be interesting. . . . . . Is Ed going to be there? I'm sure she'd get along well with Luffy. . . . . *snicker* "Nimrod".
7/15/2016 c19 hcrible
Great fight! Even though i don't like OCs, i really enjoyed it.
And don't you think you should change the summary from Luffy x Robin to Luffy x Harem.
Great fight! Even though i don't like OCs, i really enjoyed it.
And don't you think you should change the summary from Luffy x Robin to Luffy x Harem.
7/15/2016 c19 MKaius
I don't really enjoy the hunters pov.
I hope they have enemies that can threaten them and keep them in check instead of only difficult prey to subdue. Otherwise they will overshadow every other antagonist and that would be kind of meh.
I don't really enjoy the hunters pov.
I hope they have enemies that can threaten them and keep them in check instead of only difficult prey to subdue. Otherwise they will overshadow every other antagonist and that would be kind of meh.
7/15/2016 c19 2Chrisfragger
So... You weren't misspelling Kaidou then? I'm confused? Are you gimping the Yonko if these simple bounty hunters, one I might add that just lost to Ace are not intimidated at all, at the threat of a Yonko attacking them? I'm really confused about this chapter.
2ChrisfraggerSo... You weren't misspelling Kaidou then? I'm confused? Are you gimping the Yonko if these simple bounty hunters, one I might add that just lost to Ace are not intimidated at all, at the threat of a Yonko attacking them? I'm really confused about this chapter.
7/15/2016 c19 SonWuKong66
Powers from top to bottom
Dragon/devil or vampire
Scorpion devil fruit or demon scorpion
Wood manipulation or ocean plant control
Dead space style necromorph creation/control
No idea about big racket
Pm me about right or wrong
PS wood control would make evergreen the most dangerous at sea for other devil fruit uses she'll sick enemy ships with a thought (perfect assassin skill mass killing ability)
Powers from top to bottom
Dragon/devil or vampire
Scorpion devil fruit or demon scorpion
Wood manipulation or ocean plant control
Dead space style necromorph creation/control
No idea about big racket
Pm me about right or wrong
PS wood control would make evergreen the most dangerous at sea for other devil fruit uses she'll sick enemy ships with a thought (perfect assassin skill mass killing ability)