for A Twisted Strawhat7/14/2016 c19 
10Forzarismo
Really enjoyed that chapter! Good to see that you added some fellow OC's that are VERY familiar to some of us, if you know what I mean. This new chapter gave me some inspiration that I definitely needed for my next chapter, so thank you for that. They all seem to have really OP Devil Fruit powers, like my own bounty hunter OC's, which isn't a bad thing mind you and they also seem to have interesting personalities as well. I'd like to see what this 5th Yonko and his crew bring into the table and how they change the timeline. Keep up the good work, keep on writing, and I hope you never lose interest in your stories. Have a pleasant remainder of the day.
Forzarismo
10ForzarismoReally enjoyed that chapter! Good to see that you added some fellow OC's that are VERY familiar to some of us, if you know what I mean. This new chapter gave me some inspiration that I definitely needed for my next chapter, so thank you for that. They all seem to have really OP Devil Fruit powers, like my own bounty hunter OC's, which isn't a bad thing mind you and they also seem to have interesting personalities as well. I'd like to see what this 5th Yonko and his crew bring into the table and how they change the timeline. Keep up the good work, keep on writing, and I hope you never lose interest in your stories. Have a pleasant remainder of the day.
Forzarismo
7/14/2016 c19 sudhush
Good and interesting chapter. its completely devoid of Strawhats thats a first and liked the Idea. Keep up the Great Work.
Good and interesting chapter. its completely devoid of Strawhats thats a first and liked the Idea. Keep up the Great Work.
7/5/2016 c18 2DarthMaine
I'm confused, since you say it's LuffyxRobin but it seems like LuffyxNami right now, what's going to happen? hope it's not (too) bad
2DarthMaineI'm confused, since you say it's LuffyxRobin but it seems like LuffyxNami right now, what's going to happen? hope it's not (too) bad
6/28/2016 c18 Guest
When ur next chapter will release? Great fiction
When ur next chapter will release? Great fiction
6/25/2016 c17 Guest
nice twist 5th younko but the word actually means 4 so it would be a different word wouldn't it?
nice twist 5th younko but the word actually means 4 so it would be a different word wouldn't it?
6/17/2016 c18 Toolazytologin
If Ace's first bounty was 91,000,000, than I bet that Luffy's will be 91,000,001!
If Ace's first bounty was 91,000,000, than I bet that Luffy's will be 91,000,001!
6/17/2016 c17 Guest
LOLs, ohh Ace, can't stop laughing!
LOLs, ohh Ace, can't stop laughing!