10/4/2016 c4 1Mokuren77
YAY! A new chapter! I recently finished the series and totally love Yusuke/Keiko. Their dynamic is really interesting to me, and you write them well. I am so glad to see good, active writers in this fandom. Fics like this are inspiring me to write a fic of my own, but I'm still super nervous about it. ;;;; I look forward to more!
YAY! A new chapter! I recently finished the series and totally love Yusuke/Keiko. Their dynamic is really interesting to me, and you write them well. I am so glad to see good, active writers in this fandom. Fics like this are inspiring me to write a fic of my own, but I'm still super nervous about it. ;;;; I look forward to more!
10/3/2016 c4 Darkmignonette
Aw that was cute! Great idea too, about how events affected her at a deeper level. Makes sense. Those insects were gross. Very in character:) I love little moments like those:) appreciate your hard work
Aw that was cute! Great idea too, about how events affected her at a deeper level. Makes sense. Those insects were gross. Very in character:) I love little moments like those:) appreciate your hard work
7/26/2016 c3 24DarkMignonette
Omg omg I loved it! Thanks for the update. I have been re-reading YuKei fics including yours and that was great timing. You write them so perfectly in character. This chapter was a nice little background scene to that quote, and very sweet. Your writing is perfect! Good luck with your exams btw. I understand why your updates take time. I'm doing 50 scenes too and I'm a bit overwhelmed about the amount as well, but I've found keeping it short helps. But man a 50 chapter fic of your writing with this ship would be magical. A dream come true tbh! Great work!:D
Omg omg I loved it! Thanks for the update. I have been re-reading YuKei fics including yours and that was great timing. You write them so perfectly in character. This chapter was a nice little background scene to that quote, and very sweet. Your writing is perfect! Good luck with your exams btw. I understand why your updates take time. I'm doing 50 scenes too and I'm a bit overwhelmed about the amount as well, but I've found keeping it short helps. But man a 50 chapter fic of your writing with this ship would be magical. A dream come true tbh! Great work!:D
6/26/2016 c2 19empathapathique
This chapter was amazing. It's so good to see those problematic aspects of his personality expressed!
This chapter was amazing. It's so good to see those problematic aspects of his personality expressed!
5/24/2016 c2 2LitBlerd601
Wow, this was INTENSE. You captured Yusuke's troubled, darker side perfectly. I almost forgot that this here is just a one-shot...and that's ALWAYS a good thing. That means you grabbed my interest right away! And yes I agree with you: I love the fluff of Yusuke and Keiko, but seeing these other dynamics of their relationship (ESPECIALLY Yusuke's not-so-kind side), is so much more thrilling for me and makes me yearn for that beloved 90s anime even more. Great job!
Wow, this was INTENSE. You captured Yusuke's troubled, darker side perfectly. I almost forgot that this here is just a one-shot...and that's ALWAYS a good thing. That means you grabbed my interest right away! And yes I agree with you: I love the fluff of Yusuke and Keiko, but seeing these other dynamics of their relationship (ESPECIALLY Yusuke's not-so-kind side), is so much more thrilling for me and makes me yearn for that beloved 90s anime even more. Great job!
5/24/2016 c1 LitBlerd601
This was so cute! I could almost feel myself blushing on Keiko AND Yusuke's behalf. *sigh* The utter innocent shyness of two teenagers in love. I can never resist the childhood friends raging hormones upon growing up combination. :)
This was so cute! I could almost feel myself blushing on Keiko AND Yusuke's behalf. *sigh* The utter innocent shyness of two teenagers in love. I can never resist the childhood friends raging hormones upon growing up combination. :)
2/20/2016 c2 24DarkMignonette
Not too harsh I think, Yusuke at the end of the day is rough around the edges, and they do bicker so I feel this chapter adds some realism. I think it's great, wonderful characterizations in this chapter. I'm impressed, especially because you let Yusuke' s voice flow naturally. The writing is also superb as always. Poor Keiko. But it adds some nice tension for romance(: So looking forward to the next chapter! Bless you for writing about them. I feel you could make a career out of writing also, you are really talented.
Not too harsh I think, Yusuke at the end of the day is rough around the edges, and they do bicker so I feel this chapter adds some realism. I think it's great, wonderful characterizations in this chapter. I'm impressed, especially because you let Yusuke' s voice flow naturally. The writing is also superb as always. Poor Keiko. But it adds some nice tension for romance(: So looking forward to the next chapter! Bless you for writing about them. I feel you could make a career out of writing also, you are really talented.
1/28/2016 c2 Saki-Hime
Jerk, she just cares for him. Wonder what she will do. Good chapter, update soon.
Jerk, she just cares for him. Wonder what she will do. Good chapter, update soon.
1/23/2016 c1 19empathapathique
I agree with your interpretation of their relationship; there was definitely some off-screen agreement between them, which was clear in the change in their relationship (which I suppose I would characterize as a more secure intimacy than what they shared earlier in the series, like you pointed out).
Great work with this.
I agree with your interpretation of their relationship; there was definitely some off-screen agreement between them, which was clear in the change in their relationship (which I suppose I would characterize as a more secure intimacy than what they shared earlier in the series, like you pointed out).
Great work with this.
1/10/2016 c1 24DarkMignonette
Omg bless your writing skills. And your sense of characterization. Your fics are great. Their awkwardness is super cute, I will never get tired of yu/kei fluff, I wish there were more like this. This deserves more praise, but unfortunately this isn't the most popular pairing in the yyh fandom, it seems, it does suck not to receive much feedback, but bless you for writing this, I need something to read. XD
Also I agree with you that they had more stuff going on on the down low lol, its just a shounen action series so they didn't focus on it. But considering that they did give the canon pair alot of attention. Anyways good writing!
Omg bless your writing skills. And your sense of characterization. Your fics are great. Their awkwardness is super cute, I will never get tired of yu/kei fluff, I wish there were more like this. This deserves more praise, but unfortunately this isn't the most popular pairing in the yyh fandom, it seems, it does suck not to receive much feedback, but bless you for writing this, I need something to read. XD
Also I agree with you that they had more stuff going on on the down low lol, its just a shounen action series so they didn't focus on it. But considering that they did give the canon pair alot of attention. Anyways good writing!