for Harry and the Colonel version 21/7/2016 c1 
1huntress19
I really like your story so far, the buildup was a bit fast but it's not to bad and it gives a good backstory without dragging it out too much. I'd like to become your beta if you don't already have one. I'll PM to ask too but I really liked the story so I decided to review also.
1huntress19I really like your story so far, the buildup was a bit fast but it's not to bad and it gives a good backstory without dragging it out too much. I'd like to become your beta if you don't already have one. I'll PM to ask too but I really liked the story so I decided to review also.