
6/25 c4 snoopythepenguin
sorry I couldn’t stand reading more of the fic bc he kept calling harry pup or puppy
sorry I couldn’t stand reading more of the fic bc he kept calling harry pup or puppy
3/23 c7 Star Gurl
Dumbledore gon take sirius out
Dumbledore gon take sirius out
3/23 c2 Star Gurl
YESSSSSSS GET THE WEASLEYS TOO
AND THE GRANGERS
AND THE HOUSE ELVES
AND MCGONAGALL
AND LILY AND JAMESS GOHSTSS BC THE DURSLEYS MUST
DIEEEEEEEEEE
*gasp*
too much?
YESSSSSSS GET THE WEASLEYS TOO
AND THE GRANGERS
AND THE HOUSE ELVES
AND MCGONAGALL
AND LILY AND JAMESS GOHSTSS BC THE DURSLEYS MUST
DIEEEEEEEEEE
*gasp*
too much?
2/14 c3 Bosmer1701
I'm three chapters in and the Pup/Puppy is like nails on a chalkboard. Please stop. You have Harry behaving like a 4 yr old. This reads like you have no idea how a 11-12 yr old behaves, let alone an abused one. I'm going to read a few more chapter to see if this improves.
I'm three chapters in and the Pup/Puppy is like nails on a chalkboard. Please stop. You have Harry behaving like a 4 yr old. This reads like you have no idea how a 11-12 yr old behaves, let alone an abused one. I'm going to read a few more chapter to see if this improves.
2/12 c10 Guest
Harry doesn't look for trouble trouble finds him
Harry doesn't look for trouble trouble finds him
1/31 c13 Saisha
Good story but isn't Oliver wood elder than Harry2
Good story but isn't Oliver wood elder than Harry2
7/22/2021 c8
30skyatnight13
TELL HIM OUT DOBBY YOU ABSOLUTE COMPLETE DOOF, HARRY! MERLINS UNDERPANTS! TELL HIM!

TELL HIM OUT DOBBY YOU ABSOLUTE COMPLETE DOOF, HARRY! MERLINS UNDERPANTS! TELL HIM!
7/5/2021 c51 Guest
Hi please update the story it is amazing️
Hi please update the story it is amazing️
6/7/2021 c3 Guest
Puppy?
Puppy?
5/9/2021 c9 Jaye
NOOOO, don’t give Sirius a daughter. You ruining your story. No1 gives af about some random bastard daughter. We only care about Harry and Sirius and maybe Remus. Harry NEEDS all of Sirius attention. I can’t finish this story knowing that you might give Sirius a daughter. I’ll rather stop reading now and save me the annoyance smh. Shame you fucked up what could have been a good story you twat
NOOOO, don’t give Sirius a daughter. You ruining your story. No1 gives af about some random bastard daughter. We only care about Harry and Sirius and maybe Remus. Harry NEEDS all of Sirius attention. I can’t finish this story knowing that you might give Sirius a daughter. I’ll rather stop reading now and save me the annoyance smh. Shame you fucked up what could have been a good story you twat