
12/3/2020 c1
6PDCr2O3
You wrote an excellent story. I never liked the original plot all that well, either.
I was a sucker for Robert Lansing's General Savage. You stayed true to the general's character as well as the usual cast of players that supported him. I thought you did a good job with your German characters as well, very 3D, and nuanced. Most men and officers were as you described them rather than the fanatic ones that were / are portrayed in movies and TV. There were definite differences between Nazis and the majority of the soldiers in the German armed forces.
This was quite the adventure for Frank.
I hope to see you write more.

You wrote an excellent story. I never liked the original plot all that well, either.
I was a sucker for Robert Lansing's General Savage. You stayed true to the general's character as well as the usual cast of players that supported him. I thought you did a good job with your German characters as well, very 3D, and nuanced. Most men and officers were as you described them rather than the fanatic ones that were / are portrayed in movies and TV. There were definite differences between Nazis and the majority of the soldiers in the German armed forces.
This was quite the adventure for Frank.
I hope to see you write more.
8/26/2018 c1 zebragoats
I've read this story multiple times. It far outshines the episode. What great characters and dialog! (General Savage is my absolute favorite. I think he and Wiley Crow had terrific back-and-forth banter.) Very suspenseful, I wondered how Savage was going to get home. Please consider writing more! Thanks for sharing your talent!
I've read this story multiple times. It far outshines the episode. What great characters and dialog! (General Savage is my absolute favorite. I think he and Wiley Crow had terrific back-and-forth banter.) Very suspenseful, I wondered how Savage was going to get home. Please consider writing more! Thanks for sharing your talent!
10/20/2015 c1 admiralnuke
This is great! I'm enjoying your stories. Please keep them coming. I only discovered Robert Lansing and 12 O'clock High a few weeks ago, and I can't get enough. There is very little 12 O'clock High Fanfiction out there. Kudos.
This is great! I'm enjoying your stories. Please keep them coming. I only discovered Robert Lansing and 12 O'clock High a few weeks ago, and I can't get enough. There is very little 12 O'clock High Fanfiction out there. Kudos.
10/13/2015 c1 Angie
Great Story. I often thought that this episode could have had a different story line. You nailed it. A pleasure to read. Hope you post more.
Great Story. I often thought that this episode could have had a different story line. You nailed it. A pleasure to read. Hope you post more.