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8/26 c21 jlnorris75
shepard acts like my bisexual cousin so not far off there's a reason their are stereotypes
8/9 c36 DARKLORDVADER
Most fic's are so boring and repetitive that it drives me crazy, THIS IS NOT ONE OF THOSE FIC'S!
Thank you for a entertaining read!
Keep writing bro!
5/27 c36 Guest
Corrupt and/or incompetent authorities who screwed it all up

The shards screw with peoples heads and seek out conflict

On top of trauma the shards give you want you think you want in the worst possible way

Choose the worst of us at our lowest

So there is no using tinker tech to improve society medically or arcology building and farming and the environment because they are there to make things worse

Maybe all powers like that

Clever assassination or attrition

Conflict is apparently more interesting to read about for most people than post bio/cyber solar punk post scarcity still I want to read about it

Everyone should have Symbioid duplicate a dozen like thoughtforms

Some think if it goes on like this it's not going to be any different than if aliens conquered/enslavevd humanity we'd be bred to be like dogs who genetically worship our masters as work/herd/guard/attack/lap/etc dogs

Survive-flight/eat/fight/mate THIS is who we are at our core we can't control our nature but we can control our actions

Sythdroid hench dies becomes two (max one thousand for balance) becomes fire team, squads, and sections, companies, platoons, and regiments, they cover entire continents entire worlds, behind them roar and howl the engines of battle tanks war machines so massive they crush mountains to dust beneath their treads, ships and attack craft blot out the sun
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Some will root for the underdog no matter what heroes don't punch down

Amy far more good as part time research assistant than first responder

Vicky more good as construction worker for habitat for humanity than superhero

Canned hunt rich kids pretending to be great white hunter

It's staying with an abusive spouse/friend because have no life skills or can't admit made a mistake with narcissistic sociopathic idiot some change for either better or worse

Some can only validate their own existence by grinding someone else beneath their heel

Some can only see the fight in front of them

Winning a duel is not winning a battle is not winning a war is not winning peace

There is always someone better fighting like a weakling is just common sense

For the law binds the mighty.

The law sets free the powerless and defends them from the cruel.

For we are not dumb beasts that know only the way of tooth and claw. Mercy. Justice. Duty. Those things we know.

In the name of Justice. Of Law. Of Civilization…

We Rise.

Not always true. There had been more than a few times that the law was used to bind the weak and empower the ruthless. But this was the ideal, the thing that people aspired to.

We the people…

As above, so below…

And you’re the youngest and weakest?

Luddites always lose

See the enemy you should respect not the enemy you despise hating them doesn't make them weaker or less intelligent neither blind self to the flaws of those you love

No fight is ever truly fair the opponent of one or an army will have better arms or armor, training or experience, tactics or strategies, or skill and talent, more comrades, or just luck

There is a fine line between courage and stupidity if a stupid plan works it doesn't make it any less stupid you just got lucky, there is always someone stronger/smarter/faster/sneakier and so on so learning to fight like a weakling is simply common sense

Duty is to the people if it was just a constant duels deciding everything

Just because they aren't a threat to the heroes doesn't mean they can't destroy civilization or lessen the quality of life of the common people

Corrupt and incompetent authorities who screwed it all up

The shards screw with peoples heads and seek out conflict

On top of trauma the shards give you want you think you want in the worst possible way

Choose the worst of us at our lowest

So there is no using tinker tech to improve society medically or arcology building and farming and the environment because they are there to make things worse

Maybe all powers like that

Clever assassination or attrition

Conflict is apparently more interesting to read about for most people than post bio/cyber solar punk post scarcity still I want to read about it

Everyone should have Symbioid duplicate a dozen like thoughtforms

Some think if it goes on like this it's not going to be any different than if aliens conquered/enslavevd humanity we'd be bred to be like dogs who genetically worship our masters as work/herd/guard/attack/lap/etc dogs

Survive-flight/eat/fight/mate THIS is who we are at our core we can't control our nature but we can control our actions

Sythdroid hench dies becomes two (max one thousand for balance) becomes fire team, squads, and sections, companies, platoons, and regiments, they cover entire continents entire worlds, behind them roar and howl the engines of battle tanks war machines so massive they crush mountains to dust beneath their treads, ships and attack craft blot out the sun

Kthanid
Time Clocks- transcend time and space Goldeneye (pocket)watch hyperspace weapons and gadgets flying castle tank (jet/submarine/spacecraft)/suit (White Shadow-symbioid/Spawn/Angelus Warriors/thoughtforms)- Avengers One Million BC-Panther(fauna/chimera/kaiju), Thor, Sorcerer Supreme, Ghost Rider, Iron Fist (Cap America), Phoenix (Cap Marvel), Starbrand, Hulk, Iron Man

Battery sized cold fusion power cities across planet

Reborn as noble abhumans-Dwarf/Giant
Beast(flora-Jack o Lanter)(chimera/kaiju)/Golem-robot cyborg)folk/ogre/troll Heroes of the Storm

Orks become Krork- Maestro/Leader/Doc Green/Professor/Green Scar/Sakaarson/Nul “Breaker of Worlds” as well as Hobgoblin/Demogoblin

Eldar become Asurai organic Amazos/ Warhammer Fantasy Elves

Krork-Maestro/Leader/Professor/Doc Green/Doc Samson/Green Scar/Sakaarson/Nul “Breaker of Worlds” as well as Hobgoblin/Demogoblyn, Eldar become Azurai Magno organic Amazos/Brother Grimm Warhammer Fantasy Elves, A/ErakylonCelestial-halfangel-half devil demoness, Fairy/Pixie/NegaSpyte/Genie, Gnome, arch/uber/ultragremlin/demiimp-antifairy, replicae (genetic diversity different races and genders) perfect human (captain America/Nick Fury/Cable) clone, enhance (cybernetic brains) completely under thrall Symbioids Justice Titans-Supermartian/Rann/(Skorp Von Warstar)Adam Strage-John Carter/Flash Gordon, Wonderhawk, Aquaorion, Alakazam-Captain Marvel/Shazam/Zatara-Doc Fate(Wyrd)Mandrake, Bat-Lantern, Zauriel, Superdemon, Squad Superman (Earth 14/33/13)

Oxy-chew/Ninja Gum
Sythdroid hench dies becomes two (maximum one thousand for balance) becomes fire team, squads, and sections, companies, platoons, and regiments, they cover entire continents entire worlds, behind them roar and howl the engines of battle tanks war machines so massive they crush mountains to dust beneath their treads, ships and attack craft blot out the sun

Skins no two exactly alike enough genetic diversity gender and color

General Industrious

Scientific facts are true and denying them for corporate greed only gets people killed

Corporations being allowed to run every industry and infiltrate every facet of life is a recipe for disaster — especially when it comes to public safety — and they should always be made to know their limits. At the same time, corporations exist for a reason and are made up of people, not cartoon villains (even if the people at top can be greedy jerks) and "tearing down the system" instead of fixing it will lead to just as much death and horror as letting them run rampant.

More upset won't kill them

Nurture means teaching to take care of themselves and praising when earned and scolding not shaming when deserved

Horokoth/Zoar/Serpos

Krakoa/Superego/Phalanx seeds

Techno Organic Jungle virus Intergalactic Empire of Wakanda

Telefloronics

Asteroid M(s)-Krakoa- Savageland(s), Danger, Planet X Attilan(Zero-Techno-organic-Technoarchy, Phalanx, Barbuda, Builders

Yuuzhan Vong biots/Star Forge

Miniature thundercloud engine
Bug Out vehicles
Army tank truck Motor homes/RVs run only human waste replicator

Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude(Kole)/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Zerox/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X-Celestial City/Warworld

Flying teleporting superscience city on own planet in own solar system in own pocket dimension each in own five hundred trillion alternative universes

Aether dragons wear city as crown crew spaceship fleets

Prim8-werecyborggorilla (duplicate eight for balance) with superintelligent tinker/thinker build nanoforge/fabricator post scarcity barrel of monkeys army armed with monkeywrench for super science magic wand

Kong/Grodd/Ultra-Humanite/Jokaero/Captain Simian and the Space Monkeys/Super Apes/Super Abominapes/Ghouloon

Kwisatz Haderach powers summon and command the cinnamon spice like dust and sandstorm Cinnamon beach desert sandstorm make grains of sand enlarge to boulders to asteroids

Castlevania summon castles, hordes of armors/wolves/bats/birds/mist

picotech tooth jewelry

summon copy of opponent under thrall

Gemflamelasersnakebeard

High tech and/or mystic slingshot infinite effect/infinite prehensile ricochet maybe limit amount of ammunition every twenty four hours ammo for balance

Force field tinker
Number Man/permanent Miss Militia-tank/Doomfort-Fortress of Doom/Matrix powers
Summon like Super Best Friends South Park

Shmoo
Pancea more good as part time research assistant than first responder
Eierlegende Wollmilchsau or egg laying wool-milk-sow

Clever assassination or attrition

Conflict is apparently more interesting to read about for most people than post bio/cyber solar punk post scarcity still I want to read about it

Everyone should have Symbioid duplicate a dozen like angelus warriors

Some think if it goes on like this it's not going to be any different than if aliens conquered/enslaved humanity we'd be bred to alter brain chemistry to be like dogs who genetically worship our masters as work/herd/guard/attack/lap/etc dogs

Survive-flight/eat/fight/mate THIS is who we are at our core we can't control our nature but we can control our actions

G.E.C.K
matter replicator-Vending Machine

Synthdroid

Human replica droid

blasters, droid army, ships

medpack- diagnostics such as medisensors and also could provide flexclamps, synthflesh, irrigation bulbs, bacta, kolto, spray-bandages, bacta patches, spray hypos, bone stabilizers, antiseptics, medical drugs, coagulants, stimulants such as stim-shots, and other essential medicines for the treatment of wounds.

Terraform processor
Farkiller
Single atom wide blade

Infantilization is also abuse

the real world is a harsh and violent place that sometimes takes a fair amount of violence to survive in

Floating teleporting archipelago palace eyerie pyramid with a dozen smaller of same in garage

Spore-virus/bacteria
Swarms wasp/kaiju dragonmen snake/scorpion tails
Packs of Heavenhounds batwinged three headed wolfmen/werecerberusmen
Flocks (fauna)chimera-wyvern/wolf/sabretooth(stripes/spots)/bat/avianmen

Medusa
Nolabab Mane of Snakes
SnakeflameMane

Truthbrarian
Omnikron

Got thinking Black Lagoon omakes
Gun Pixie (BB Hood)
summon werebear/dragon commandos (Fin Fang Foom wear cities as crowns crew fleets of spaceships)
Tanya von Degurechaff

Zerg/Tyranids

Ice/Acid/Taser/Impact/Magnetic/Lead-Line/Flame/Sonic Disruptors/Expanding Web-Foam/Micro-Coiled Z-Metal/Quick-Drying Web-Cement Webbing
Specialized Voice Commands
Web Barrage/Wide Net/Recoil Strand
Spider-Boy
Richard Wenthworth
Spidercar
Spider Noir
Slingers
Prodigy's Suit, Ricochet's Suit, Dusk's Suit and Hornet's Suit
Symbiote

Stark enhanced Iron
Insect Queen Bee Exobytes, One Earth Regime Troops 5-U-93-R
Queen Desira
Zealot
Jestra, Sphinx
Blackfire, Jinx
Tokyo Rose (Kasumi twin sister Cassandra Cain)
Nightflame
Mirabai
Enchnatress
Nightshade
Matrix, Belinda Zee, Supra/Ultra/Ubergirl, Superior Girl, Divine, Nuclear (Wo)Men, Bizarros-stronger, Smarter, faster, tougher, better looking than Supes, Ms. Gsptlsnz, Gzntplzk
Astarte/Veronica Cale Theana, Paula/Gerta von Gunther, Bruna-Brunhilde, Gudra/Gundra, Deva, Dark Angel, Deathbringer, Grail, Queen of Fables, Crow Children
Barda, Bekka, Maxima
Blithe, Twilight, Majesty, (Herculina)
Theana, Satin Satan Girl
Dawn/She-Ra (Bruna Ambrozia Fay)
Thundra, Zarda
Zamaron
Wonder Woman One Million
Transportation
Invisible Spacecraft made by Harmony and Charity
Weapons
Harmony and Charity: Wonder Woman wields a pair of bracers with an AI in them that could create Energy Construct Creation Force Field indestructible force-field objects like shields and swords in addition to providing tactical advice.
Purple Healing Ray/Mental Radio
Hephaestus guns/lasers/invisible jet

Society's Fault/Social Contractors
Lesser/Necessary Evil/Utilitarians/Pragmatists

Without a competent bureaucracy all you have is urine soaked graffiti

Corrupt and/or incompetent democracy ideal autocracy

I think of Taylor as Cincinnatus civic duty citizenship duty to future generations
Do anything sacrifice anything for humanity, for her city, for a stranger

Everyone has some tunnel vision

Do we do away with fire because of arson

Steal or starve, kill or be killed, when the devil is the only one offering you hand up you take it

"Everyone is a criminal, we bribe people every day to not commit crimes. Little offers of things like security and comfort in exchange for not simply taking what is wanted. We write arbitrary rules that define criminal and not criminal activities and then we withhold the generous bounty of society from those that do not conform to the rules we have written Heros, villains, rogues, these are labels we apply out of some adolescent desire to make the world black and white. this is the real world, street level drug dealers are desperately peddling drugs to feed their own addictions, women are forced into prostitution to feed their families, kids join gangs to get enough money to help their parents. The conventions of good and evil, us and them, are the simple bigoted stereotypes of an older age. If you want to solve the problem you have to remove your blinders and actually see what's going on here. A few kids have crashed into an upscale party and held up a bank while wearing little more than Halloween masks. Sure the kids have prior felonies, and sure they are armed with extra-normal abilities, but if we treat them like supervillains then that is exactly what they will become. We are the ones that define these people. If we stick the wrong label on them then ten years from now, when they aren't half our size we will be facing hardened criminals with body counts. The system does not work. I have seen the statistics. Outside of lifetime sentences in the Birdcage the recidivism rate on criminal behavior is almost eighty percent. "

It comes down to ability and opportunity

Equitability and equality

Where are the hospitals and universities

Mad dogs need to be put down but lambs are only good for going to the slaughter

We aren't worker/warrior ants we're tool using killer apes
5/27 c36 Guest
wow so awesome
11/16/2020 c27 3Ikasuki
This chapter represent everything wrong with the story... the Shepard not leading part cause she is ‘just a soldier’ and letting a 15 year old teenager with social issue and a broken line to call the shot. You make a specter. Agents that are trained. The best and brightest of their species’ specialist in différents fiels’ infiltrator’ assassin’ and just overall in Shepard case galactic hero with more diplomacy miracles and battle power under her coat than anything earth amethyst or Beth could ever muster be directed by an inexperienced teenager... Taylor is nothing. At this point of the story she is nothing. And there shouldn’t be any reason for a Shepard even a mentally deficient and space magically rejuvenated one ( for some reason) to put her in a place of leadership. Processing information fast doesn’t make you a leader.
1/28/2020 c29 Arsur3215Loki
up to this chapter, I could tell that it's a shame that the story was abandoned. I very much enjoyed the story and I felt that it was a shame that it never will see the end of the story. such a shame.
10/16/2019 c36 3Gibelyou
I very much enjoyed the ride, and I hope you come back to it.
9/6/2019 c2 2Ariel Schnee
One serious problem.

You have "She" this and "She" that when Shepard and Taylor are alone. I can't tell who the "She" means sometimes. It could be either of the girls.

Please do something about this confusing word.
5/16/2019 c15 4Azaira
Snort. Wince. - need names. While a reader should have able to figure out the character, it shouldn’t be needed.
5/16/2019 c7 Azaira
I’m hoping I read this chapter wrong, because I highly doubt Taylor would ever for for blue pixie hair and nose ring. She’s ooc enough, but that can cause more issues for her than she would be comfortable with, with her fathers reaction and loss of her motherly reminder only being the more prominent.
5/10/2019 c1 Terous
And to continue now having read your profile the story makes more sense and I think that the psychology and interactions between the characters is really well done

Why does this site limit you to one review per chapter
5/10/2019 c36 Terous
Most people are ass holes
Personally I really like the story and it would be great if you continued the story. A little more fighting would be nice but not necessary
1/3/2019 c17 Caincrux
Disgusting. You're falling for the same mistake every spacebattle fiction does.
1/3/2019 c14 Caincrux
Nice, Cerberus is online! But Taylor usually have 1mil to 1bil bug heads though
1/3/2019 c13 Caincrux
You marginalize what is actually entertaining then expand the less interesting parts. geez so counterproductive.
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