FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for The Chaotic Nature of Life

5/22/2022 c5 Keres47
I think it would be better to describe what he looks like instead of forcing us to try and imagine what he’s been through. We don’t really have that much background knowledge on Harry besides his original worlds and that he’s been fighting a long time. So trying to imagine what you make him look like can be pretty difficult. Like is he just scared on his arms neck etc. or is his face deformed from getting his cheek blasted off. The details are important
7/19/2021 c7 MeMeMooMoo
Why are literally all of you the same? Always too brain dead to finish your posted stories.
6/1/2020 c7 HAEVs Sha
Good. But just another junk
1/21/2020 c1 Seraphy64
I couldn't even get halfway through chapter one. Millenia old Harry and he's still a stuttering pussy.
12/9/2019 c3 Pimity
you're a bit of a pussy aren't you, author? this harry is unable to kill anyone, rather let hundreds die than execute a dangerous criminal and put him in jail so he can escape again? Go fuck yourself.
8/7/2019 c3 Mac55
Why did you give a wizard guns? that is just weird in this super powered story
7/30/2019 c7 OmegaUltima
Aaaand the story dies just as it's getting really good, with so much left to address; and with you seemingly having vanished into the aether, there's no telling if this will ever continue

Well, I at least hope that you're still alive and kicking out there
4/11/2019 c7 Guest
Very interesting story look forward to you finishing sometime
1/3/2019 c7 1Dispatchking1
Please tell me this isn’t abandoned. This is fantastic!
12/20/2018 c7 Netchka
Interesting storyline so far. Looking forward to reading more when it gets posted.
8/31/2018 c7 Dreous44
Good story.
7/8/2018 c7 WhiteEagle1985
A very interesting story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!
6/18/2018 c7 Spartan3909
Thanks for the chapter _.
12/15/2017 c5 Guest
While a good over all story something stood out here.

(As Harry's foot clipped the edge of the roof, and he slammed face first into the concrete, he decided he needed more practise.

Harry spat out a few teeth with a glob of blood, and snapped his nose back into place )

He hurt himself here? How? He took a Thanagarian blade to the back, those weapons are better than common Earth based ones and those birds are more powerful than humans. If that didn't go through him there is simply no way a fall would have hurt him at all.

Had to point that out.
11/5/2017 c7 Fainfan
Great chapter
268 Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service