for The Chaotic Nature of Life5/22/2022 c5 Keres47
I think it would be better to describe what he looks like instead of forcing us to try and imagine what he’s been through. We don’t really have that much background knowledge on Harry besides his original worlds and that he’s been fighting a long time. So trying to imagine what you make him look like can be pretty difficult. Like is he just scared on his arms neck etc. or is his face deformed from getting his cheek blasted off. The details are important
I think it would be better to describe what he looks like instead of forcing us to try and imagine what he’s been through. We don’t really have that much background knowledge on Harry besides his original worlds and that he’s been fighting a long time. So trying to imagine what you make him look like can be pretty difficult. Like is he just scared on his arms neck etc. or is his face deformed from getting his cheek blasted off. The details are important
7/19/2021 c7 MeMeMooMoo
Why are literally all of you the same? Always too brain dead to finish your posted stories.
Why are literally all of you the same? Always too brain dead to finish your posted stories.
1/21/2020 c1 Seraphy64
I couldn't even get halfway through chapter one. Millenia old Harry and he's still a stuttering pussy.
I couldn't even get halfway through chapter one. Millenia old Harry and he's still a stuttering pussy.
12/9/2019 c3 Pimity
you're a bit of a pussy aren't you, author? this harry is unable to kill anyone, rather let hundreds die than execute a dangerous criminal and put him in jail so he can escape again? Go fuck yourself.
you're a bit of a pussy aren't you, author? this harry is unable to kill anyone, rather let hundreds die than execute a dangerous criminal and put him in jail so he can escape again? Go fuck yourself.
7/30/2019 c7 OmegaUltima
Aaaand the story dies just as it's getting really good, with so much left to address; and with you seemingly having vanished into the aether, there's no telling if this will ever continue
Well, I at least hope that you're still alive and kicking out there
Aaaand the story dies just as it's getting really good, with so much left to address; and with you seemingly having vanished into the aether, there's no telling if this will ever continue
Well, I at least hope that you're still alive and kicking out there
4/11/2019 c7 Guest
Very interesting story look forward to you finishing sometime
Very interesting story look forward to you finishing sometime
112/20/2018 c7 Netchka
Interesting storyline so far. Looking forward to reading more when it gets posted.
Interesting storyline so far. Looking forward to reading more when it gets posted.
12/15/2017 c5 Guest
While a good over all story something stood out here.
(As Harry's foot clipped the edge of the roof, and he slammed face first into the concrete, he decided he needed more practise.
Harry spat out a few teeth with a glob of blood, and snapped his nose back into place )
He hurt himself here? How? He took a Thanagarian blade to the back, those weapons are better than common Earth based ones and those birds are more powerful than humans. If that didn't go through him there is simply no way a fall would have hurt him at all.
Had to point that out.
While a good over all story something stood out here.
(As Harry's foot clipped the edge of the roof, and he slammed face first into the concrete, he decided he needed more practise.
Harry spat out a few teeth with a glob of blood, and snapped his nose back into place )
He hurt himself here? How? He took a Thanagarian blade to the back, those weapons are better than common Earth based ones and those birds are more powerful than humans. If that didn't go through him there is simply no way a fall would have hurt him at all.
Had to point that out.