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10/11/2015 c6 FateBurn
Good chapter and interesting way to team up with with GL as well as meet officially with Kara, also funny little conversation he had with her there, please continue soon.
10/11/2015 c6 Ranmaleopard
This is just really awesome I can't wait for more
10/11/2015 c6 1Kamagong
Yeah, about that... the news already gave out Harry's not-so-superheroish name so getting a masked identity is already too late. Let Harry be Harry - someone as unassuming as him can be easily underestimated until he brings out the can of whoopass to make every bad guy running.
10/11/2015 c6 177Firehedgehog
lol, amusing
10/11/2015 c6 17duskrider
Interesting meeting between supergirl and Harry.
Maybe have Harry make a joke costume like the Amazing Bagman (just wear a paperbag over his face with eye holes and take it off later saying costumes aren't his thing.)
10/11/2015 c6 marlastiano
Kara Harry ?
10/11/2015 c6 Watch213
Awesome, this is a pretty cool story.
10/11/2015 c6 Squadpunk 2.0
Disappearing act... Classic. Wonder if the League would actually ever go to shock about Harry's magic, though they have plenty of them already...
10/11/2015 c6 1Joe Lawyer
Harry acquitted himself well in the restaurant.

Part of me was rather pleased that Harry didn't hand over the Kryptonite, but without knowing the reason behind that decision, I can't say anymore.
10/11/2015 c6 2imgonnadie
Excellent chapter
10/8/2015 c5 28chicaalterego
I like this fic. I'm trully thankfull that I bumped into it.
10/8/2015 c5 Satisfied.Oddly
Great story so far, keep it up.
10/5/2015 c5 Squadpunk 2.0
I'm finding a lot of humor in this. Wonder how it will go...
10/2/2015 c1 Guest
Man, this story sounds so cool. But the Harem thing is just so unrealistic. And if all the girls are in love with him and not each other, it is a harem. And feelings wont work in the way you want them too. There will always be one girl you love more than others. The rest are just there to satisfy you and so an author doesn't have to write breakups or other drama that's beyond their skills. Harems are not only a cop-out for an author, they are also a weakness which ruins the realism of a story and turns it into a hormonal fantasy. Its great when I'm horny and horrible when I'm looking for a good story.
10/1/2015 c4 Belthezzor
Sooo...he can heal major injuries such as internal damage and broken bones, but not tissue and skin?!
That is so backwards...
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