for The Chaotic Nature of Life6/4/2016 c7 
7bigfan22
Nice start. I def look forward to seeing where you go with this fic. Great job so far and I hope we get another update soon.
7bigfan22Nice start. I def look forward to seeing where you go with this fic. Great job so far and I hope we get another update soon.
5/28/2016 c2 Guest
ive gotta be honest... i only got to the point where harry started worrying about weather he had killed the ENEMY SOLDIER! not wanting to kill bystanders or even confused civilian enemies is one thing, but if your here refuses to even kill an enemy soldier... i dont need to waste my time. they are soldiers. by definition they exist to fight and kill people. he doesnt have to kill everybody, but if he wont kill people whose chosen profession is to kill others... yeah
ive gotta be honest... i only got to the point where harry started worrying about weather he had killed the ENEMY SOLDIER! not wanting to kill bystanders or even confused civilian enemies is one thing, but if your here refuses to even kill an enemy soldier... i dont need to waste my time. they are soldiers. by definition they exist to fight and kill people. he doesnt have to kill everybody, but if he wont kill people whose chosen profession is to kill others... yeah
5/22/2016 c7 10Dalxein
Huh. Well, I hope the break has been from writer's block, and that whatever is causing it resolves itself peaceably and soon. This was a pretty good read so far, hoping to see where it goes.
10DalxeinHuh. Well, I hope the break has been from writer's block, and that whatever is causing it resolves itself peaceably and soon. This was a pretty good read so far, hoping to see where it goes.
5/4/2016 c5 Watch213
Great story so far, just like Feral, Thanks for writing! Cant wait to read more :)
Great story so far, just like Feral, Thanks for writing! Cant wait to read more :)
4/29/2016 c1 guestie
Don't listen to the haters, you're a talented writer. I think this story has amazing potential. You've managed a crossover with Harry not being a completely new character. I like that you tied in the higher being of death, and are building her character as well. This is missing in so many fanfics, proper character development, and I hope you continue on the same path you're going. I look forward to Kara learning herself, Harry, and how that relationship is going to grow. Barbara deserves better than Nightwing, so feel free to pair her up with Harry too. Although it may be better to go with a nonteenage third choice... well it's up to you! Please keep it up, I look forward to reading more.
Don't listen to the haters, you're a talented writer. I think this story has amazing potential. You've managed a crossover with Harry not being a completely new character. I like that you tied in the higher being of death, and are building her character as well. This is missing in so many fanfics, proper character development, and I hope you continue on the same path you're going. I look forward to Kara learning herself, Harry, and how that relationship is going to grow. Barbara deserves better than Nightwing, so feel free to pair her up with Harry too. Although it may be better to go with a nonteenage third choice... well it's up to you! Please keep it up, I look forward to reading more.
4/29/2016 c1 trninjakiller
Wow this is going to be a stupid harem fic. And it was going beautifuly as well. Oh well. Back to the story list.
Wow this is going to be a stupid harem fic. And it was going beautifuly as well. Oh well. Back to the story list.
4/6/2016 c7 Ol'Joe
The purpose of a review is twofold. First, to give someone considering a story an idea of what to expect, and secondly, to give the author feedback. Reading the reviews for Chaotic, between the grammar nazis, canon nazis, exact-obscure-terminology-nazis and of course, general flametards, would make you think this story sucks. It doesn't.
Great writing, characterization, plot development are melded with a plain fun story. This is what fanfiction is supposed to be. At the top of the list of stories I hope to see more of. Thanks for writing it, BRD.
The purpose of a review is twofold. First, to give someone considering a story an idea of what to expect, and secondly, to give the author feedback. Reading the reviews for Chaotic, between the grammar nazis, canon nazis, exact-obscure-terminology-nazis and of course, general flametards, would make you think this story sucks. It doesn't.
Great writing, characterization, plot development are melded with a plain fun story. This is what fanfiction is supposed to be. At the top of the list of stories I hope to see more of. Thanks for writing it, BRD.
3/28/2016 c5 Guest
I don't see the point to giving harry scars and if it was just to have an excuse to give him metamorph powers well its a weak and flimsy excuse you should of just had death give it to him as a gift
I don't see the point to giving harry scars and if it was just to have an excuse to give him metamorph powers well its a weak and flimsy excuse you should of just had death give it to him as a gift
3/28/2016 c3 Guest
Vomiting would bring stuff up from the stomach and possibly the esophagus not the lungs
Vomiting would bring stuff up from the stomach and possibly the esophagus not the lungs
3/28/2016 c3 RowenCloude
What do you mean by joker venom? Is it a combination of jokers smilex gas and banes venom? Or did you just call it the wrong thing?
What do you mean by joker venom? Is it a combination of jokers smilex gas and banes venom? Or did you just call it the wrong thing?
3/19/2016 c4 MrHam31
Oh man, Harry is such a badass! That deductive reasoning! There are so few and far between stories with characters that are goddamn ireasonable/i. What with bashing, over the top reactions etc.
But I didn't really appreciate Harry's flippant attitude regarding secret identities. And I guess to Superman it hasn't sunk in yet that he is not from their world, to be asking about loved ones. He hasn't been there that long for that.
Oh man, Harry is such a badass! That deductive reasoning! There are so few and far between stories with characters that are goddamn ireasonable/i. What with bashing, over the top reactions etc.
But I didn't really appreciate Harry's flippant attitude regarding secret identities. And I guess to Superman it hasn't sunk in yet that he is not from their world, to be asking about loved ones. He hasn't been there that long for that.