for The Chaotic Nature of Life3/2/2016 c7 Blaze1992
Well this looks like t's gonna be epic I give it a 9 out of 10 for now. While I look forward to reading more I have a question will harry use other weapons than just his pistol? Please update this fic!
Well this looks like t's gonna be epic I give it a 9 out of 10 for now. While I look forward to reading more I have a question will harry use other weapons than just his pistol? Please update this fic!
2/28/2016 c7 
2Shoetsu Otaku
This is very good. I can't say I'm looking forward to any Harry ships in this universe, he seems better off as a single man. I do enjoy how you're slowly revealing more that he can do as the story goes on, and yes there are a few grammar issues but that's forgivable. No one is perfect after all. I'm looking forward to the confrontation coming up, can't wait for more!
2Shoetsu OtakuThis is very good. I can't say I'm looking forward to any Harry ships in this universe, he seems better off as a single man. I do enjoy how you're slowly revealing more that he can do as the story goes on, and yes there are a few grammar issues but that's forgivable. No one is perfect after all. I'm looking forward to the confrontation coming up, can't wait for more!
2/27/2016 c7 MVDB
A great story! Too bad you haven't updated in a long while, but I knew that before I started reading. I don't get why the best stories always get abandoned or rarely updated, and the worst go on forever. So, I hope you're one of those rare authors with a great story who won't abandon it.
A great story! Too bad you haven't updated in a long while, but I knew that before I started reading. I don't get why the best stories always get abandoned or rarely updated, and the worst go on forever. So, I hope you're one of those rare authors with a great story who won't abandon it.
2/6/2016 c7 luffy
it has been to long the next chapter must be soon I hope
it has been to long the next chapter must be soon I hope
1/1/2016 c1 1Spectre1102
I LOVE this first chapter. It is very well written and everything I was trying write my own story "The Next Great Adventure." I just can't seem to with the ease that you and other authors make writing appear. I'll defiantly be following this story and make sure its in my favorite story section.
1Spectre1102I LOVE this first chapter. It is very well written and everything I was trying write my own story "The Next Great Adventure." I just can't seem to with the ease that you and other authors make writing appear. I'll defiantly be following this story and make sure its in my favorite story section.
12/21/2015 c5 Rakaan
Eh. Harry needs to be shown better than he is. For a centuries-old magical warrior/soldier he really doesn't show any of the skill his backstory implies. Breaking his teeth trying to land on a roof just isn't it. I'd expect blatant incompetence like this when he's just starting out, not after hundreds of years of experience. As it is, we're pretty much told he's a competent magical soldier, but are actually shown he's a joke. It's a bit off-putting.
Eh. Harry needs to be shown better than he is. For a centuries-old magical warrior/soldier he really doesn't show any of the skill his backstory implies. Breaking his teeth trying to land on a roof just isn't it. I'd expect blatant incompetence like this when he's just starting out, not after hundreds of years of experience. As it is, we're pretty much told he's a competent magical soldier, but are actually shown he's a joke. It's a bit off-putting.
12/16/2015 c7 1Beloved Daughter
LOVE the chapter update. Wow... blood boiling energy absorption. Just goes to show how powerful Harry is I suppose.
I can't wait for more! :D
1Beloved DaughterLOVE the chapter update. Wow... blood boiling energy absorption. Just goes to show how powerful Harry is I suppose.
I can't wait for more! :D