for A girl in the woods9/11/2019 c1 Anonymous
Keep going!
Keep going!
4/2/2017 c1 kair0001
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2/15/2016 c1 
8polyptera
You should always keep writing... but maybe longer chapters? It's a nice premise.
8polypteraYou should always keep writing... but maybe longer chapters? It's a nice premise.
10/9/2015 c1 10dangogo
This has an interesting premise but it sounds very vague. Perhaps you should consider making your chapters longer; they are usually at least 2,000 words. Your character also sounds too much like a Mary-Sue with the way you described her, which might deter a lot of people from reading your story. I think this has a lot of potential and you should continue it, but you need to post longer chapters and brush up on your grammar, as well as plan out your plot and your character beforehand. Good luck; you should definitely keep going!
10dangogoThis has an interesting premise but it sounds very vague. Perhaps you should consider making your chapters longer; they are usually at least 2,000 words. Your character also sounds too much like a Mary-Sue with the way you described her, which might deter a lot of people from reading your story. I think this has a lot of potential and you should continue it, but you need to post longer chapters and brush up on your grammar, as well as plan out your plot and your character beforehand. Good luck; you should definitely keep going!
9/19/2015 c1 Scarlet is not here anymore
This doesn't even sound like the premise for a Harry Potter fanfiction if it weren't for Dumbledore's name being dropped there at the end for no real reason. You should just write an original story instead.
This doesn't even sound like the premise for a Harry Potter fanfiction if it weren't for Dumbledore's name being dropped there at the end for no real reason. You should just write an original story instead.