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2Grizzpy
All in all it was a good chapter but the fact that most if not all of the fighting was skipped is just disappointing. We are at the climax of the Arc and it just doesn’t feel like a climax without a detailed battle to the death. You brought in the dragon maidens just to discard them without them doing anything „on screen“. Eleanora had her time to shine finally and she just gets sidelined to a couple lines of not very detailed descriptions. Lyudmila struggling against the Dragon trying everything she could. Every spell, transformation and curse. Nothing. How the Exchequer finally break through and finish the fight. Nothing. Honestly that just leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
2GrizzpyAll in all it was a good chapter but the fact that most if not all of the fighting was skipped is just disappointing. We are at the climax of the Arc and it just doesn’t feel like a climax without a detailed battle to the death. You brought in the dragon maidens just to discard them without them doing anything „on screen“. Eleanora had her time to shine finally and she just gets sidelined to a couple lines of not very detailed descriptions. Lyudmila struggling against the Dragon trying everything she could. Every spell, transformation and curse. Nothing. How the Exchequer finally break through and finish the fight. Nothing. Honestly that just leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
22h c129 7raw666
At this point, does Harriet need to keep going to school?
Also, do you think you made her too powerful, too quickly? Maybe it's just me, but we may have lost the steady pace and gone Game of Thrones Season 8 in trying to wrap things up since she became Lady Protector of England.
7raw666At this point, does Harriet need to keep going to school?
Also, do you think you made her too powerful, too quickly? Maybe it's just me, but we may have lost the steady pace and gone Game of Thrones Season 8 in trying to wrap things up since she became Lady Protector of England.
6/22 c129 ShadowPhyr
It took me 2 weeks to binge all of this. It's a great story, and im looking forward to more, particularly because you have an end game in mind and how to get there.
It took me 2 weeks to binge all of this. It's a great story, and im looking forward to more, particularly because you have an end game in mind and how to get there.
6/19 c58 RK
as with my first read trough this chapter for me marks the moment alexandra became a mortal enemy of morana le fay.
the way she bound ginny to her goes against the deepest traits of alexandras character. alex didnt even want to cage her owl.
to me this chapter pushed the whole of exchequer into iredeemably evil from alex pov.
its one of those lines alex doesnt tolerate beeing crossed.
as with my first read trough this chapter for me marks the moment alexandra became a mortal enemy of morana le fay.
the way she bound ginny to her goes against the deepest traits of alexandras character. alex didnt even want to cage her owl.
to me this chapter pushed the whole of exchequer into iredeemably evil from alex pov.
its one of those lines alex doesnt tolerate beeing crossed.
6/19 c129 2CMVreud
I don't know if I should congratulate you for your oh-so-clever puns or bob you on the noggin.
I think both. Both sounds good.
This chapter, for all it entailes, feels like you're in the waters of the rowdy sea, where you can see and feel the mountaintops and valleys of violent water that show no care for your corpus so compassionly clinging to life shoving you around like the loner kid at the playground getting shoved around by bullies.
And the best is yet to come.
I will wait with bated breath.
2CMVreudI don't know if I should congratulate you for your oh-so-clever puns or bob you on the noggin.
I think both. Both sounds good.
This chapter, for all it entailes, feels like you're in the waters of the rowdy sea, where you can see and feel the mountaintops and valleys of violent water that show no care for your corpus so compassionly clinging to life shoving you around like the loner kid at the playground getting shoved around by bullies.
And the best is yet to come.
I will wait with bated breath.
6/19 c129 xKikixVex
I can't express how amazed am i with your work. Is fenomenal. How you keep being inspired, and found new and incredible ideas is truly wonderful. I wait patienly to every new chapter, and enjoy them with pride and satisfaction. Its beyond "good work", is groundbreaking.
Thank you, thank you so much for publishing FOR FREE this amazing story. Kudos and "see you" in the next episode of "The odds were never in my favour"
I can't express how amazed am i with your work. Is fenomenal. How you keep being inspired, and found new and incredible ideas is truly wonderful. I wait patienly to every new chapter, and enjoy them with pride and satisfaction. Its beyond "good work", is groundbreaking.
Thank you, thank you so much for publishing FOR FREE this amazing story. Kudos and "see you" in the next episode of "The odds were never in my favour"
6/19 c129 Sonata1992
‘The odds were never in my favour’ ehh author finally couldn’t resist a title drop could they?
‘The odds were never in my favour’ ehh author finally couldn’t resist a title drop could they?
6/19 c129 vysirez
This one was a bit too over the top IMO. Not only is the scale getting even more implausible, it's getting hard to really know what is going on. You basically explained almost nothing of the final battle. So somehow Alex being Headmaster interfered with the ritual somehow. Why? What does Hogwarts have to do with anything. She used that to do something to interfere with Fate, somehow. No idea on that either. No explanation why Alex getting marked by Set matters, or marked by lightning, or why that matters. I mean it might be explained next chapter, but I'm not holding my breath. You just keep throwing out more and more random crap and barely explain anything. Everything has to be bigger and more then the last thing, it's been that way the whole story. Is the final way to deal with the great enemy using the moon like a billiard ball and bouncing it around the solar system to destroy his ship or whatever it is.
This one was a bit too over the top IMO. Not only is the scale getting even more implausible, it's getting hard to really know what is going on. You basically explained almost nothing of the final battle. So somehow Alex being Headmaster interfered with the ritual somehow. Why? What does Hogwarts have to do with anything. She used that to do something to interfere with Fate, somehow. No idea on that either. No explanation why Alex getting marked by Set matters, or marked by lightning, or why that matters. I mean it might be explained next chapter, but I'm not holding my breath. You just keep throwing out more and more random crap and barely explain anything. Everything has to be bigger and more then the last thing, it's been that way the whole story. Is the final way to deal with the great enemy using the moon like a billiard ball and bouncing it around the solar system to destroy his ship or whatever it is.
6/18 c129 1dreaddragonknight
This chapter was a trip and I am burning with curiosity about the lore drops and what some of this Marking business will lead to or result in.
1dreaddragonknightThis chapter was a trip and I am burning with curiosity about the lore drops and what some of this Marking business will lead to or result in.
6/18 c129 2AvidReader2425
Considering her already incredible abilities with lightning, I am certainly very curious about how that will be further enhanced now that she embodies it, and marked by Set? Anyway, this is one hell of a chapter filled with absolutely crazy shenanigans that were highly entertaining to read. Thank you very much for another enjoyable and entertaining addition to the story. Looking forward to the next.
2AvidReader2425Considering her already incredible abilities with lightning, I am certainly very curious about how that will be further enhanced now that she embodies it, and marked by Set? Anyway, this is one hell of a chapter filled with absolutely crazy shenanigans that were highly entertaining to read. Thank you very much for another enjoyable and entertaining addition to the story. Looking forward to the next.
6/18 c129 Regtech
Not a fan of the huge amount of death of skilled hands. I feel like there should have been more to reduce the number of casualties
Not a fan of the huge amount of death of skilled hands. I feel like there should have been more to reduce the number of casualties