for The odds were never in my favour1h c57 ShineX
I'm rather surprised she'd want to participate in the tournament in the first place. Seems like a great way to be assassinated.
I'm rather surprised she'd want to participate in the tournament in the first place. Seems like a great way to be assassinated.
4h c55 ShineX
Well that was well done. The compulsion thing becomes way more of an issue now I guess, and having his sister appear I admit makes things more interesting for the world you've built. Well done.
Well that was well done. The compulsion thing becomes way more of an issue now I guess, and having his sister appear I admit makes things more interesting for the world you've built. Well done.
6h c53 ShineX
I admit the compulsion bit on Ginny would've had me instantly naming that as priority 1 in figuring out how to get rid of it. After all, if it can happen to her it can happen to you.
I admit the compulsion bit on Ginny would've had me instantly naming that as priority 1 in figuring out how to get rid of it. After all, if it can happen to her it can happen to you.
1/19 c49 ShineX
So why was Dumbledore late again? That wasn't explained. Also, definitely time to look into those anti-dementor spells.
So why was Dumbledore late again? That wasn't explained. Also, definitely time to look into those anti-dementor spells.
1/19 c48 ShineX
I do hope you go more in depth with what goes on after that last bit there instead of just jumping ahead in time like normal.
I do hope you go more in depth with what goes on after that last bit there instead of just jumping ahead in time like normal.
1/19 c47 ShineX
Well at least Dudley didn't die there. While he's been written as a rotten kid he wouldn't have deserved that. I'd also been curious for a long while whether or not James actually did a betrayal or not in your au. Let's see where this goes.
Well at least Dudley didn't die there. While he's been written as a rotten kid he wouldn't have deserved that. I'd also been curious for a long while whether or not James actually did a betrayal or not in your au. Let's see where this goes.
1/17 c31 ShineX
I'm somewhat surprised that you had Longbottom get the parselmouth rather than Alex, but I guess I can get it even if it makes it more canon like on the sidelines.
I'm somewhat surprised that you had Longbottom get the parselmouth rather than Alex, but I guess I can get it even if it makes it more canon like on the sidelines.
1/14 c19 ShineX
Having things be destroyed by the force of movement in comparison to slowly floating about isn't a case of powers weakening lol.
Interesting ending, the dynamics of your world building are quite good.
Having things be destroyed by the force of movement in comparison to slowly floating about isn't a case of powers weakening lol.
Interesting ending, the dynamics of your world building are quite good.
1/14 c18 ShineX
Self defense isn't murder. Beyond that this first section was interesting if only in the fact that you got a twisted version of the first book. Hmm.
Self defense isn't murder. Beyond that this first section was interesting if only in the fact that you got a twisted version of the first book. Hmm.