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WOW, I remember reading this when I was younger and becoming hardcore obsessed with it, haha!
WOW, I remember reading this when I was younger and becoming hardcore obsessed with it, haha!
9/13/2016 c3 
43remorsful fanfic writer
Ha Ha Pancham didn't leave with Smoochum! He just sent his stunt double!
43remorsful fanfic writerHa Ha Pancham didn't leave with Smoochum! He just sent his stunt double!
1/1/2016 c1 Guest
Awesome! Make more Pancham x Smoochum
Awesome! Make more Pancham x Smoochum
12/31/2015 c3 Guest
Please make more Pancham & Smoochums I love your writings and your translations! Pancham and Smoochum are cute together! I have read many, many, many fan fictions and yours is my favorite! Keep making more!
Please make more Pancham & Smoochums I love your writings and your translations! Pancham and Smoochum are cute together! I have read many, many, many fan fictions and yours is my favorite! Keep making more!
9/23/2015 c3 4scooter2
Thanks a lot for making this story! It was great. The first Pancham and Smoochum story. Just to let you know, I did say Pancham could go with Nini, but I didn't say he had to, they also could of just started dating and see each other often when Nini visits them again. It was a little sad Pancham left, but I still loved it. You great at making stories. I'm thrilled by what you wrote.
4scooter2Thanks a lot for making this story! It was great. The first Pancham and Smoochum story. Just to let you know, I did say Pancham could go with Nini, but I didn't say he had to, they also could of just started dating and see each other often when Nini visits them again. It was a little sad Pancham left, but I still loved it. You great at making stories. I'm thrilled by what you wrote.
9/23/2015 c3 77QUEENSPELLER67
Wow! What a surprise twist with Nene and Pancham. I didn't see that coming! Yes, it seems that Ash and Clemont are like that but you think they're dense on romance? Man, I can NOT wait to publish Dense Romance, but I really have to catch up on a lot of things before I can even start that two-shot.
77QUEENSPELLER67Wow! What a surprise twist with Nene and Pancham. I didn't see that coming! Yes, it seems that Ash and Clemont are like that but you think they're dense on romance? Man, I can NOT wait to publish Dense Romance, but I really have to catch up on a lot of things before I can even start that two-shot.
9/22/2015 c1 catspats31
I like the writing quality of the story, but the story breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
To make this story in compliance with the site's rules, you can have the chat in your story and just have the various characters from Pokemon discuss the chat and the ongoing stuff around it, referencing certain things said/done, without any of it being in chat form. Please make it so the chat/script portion doesn't exist at all.
Here is the background information about when the admins added the rule against chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries on September 12, 2002:
Chat room or keyboard dialogue based entries will no longer be allowed. Much of the chat room entries are void of plot, without attempt at plot and are more in line with random dialogue than with stories or poetry. Having these type of entries on the site is unfair to those that have spent quality time fleshing out substantial content.
I like the writing quality of the story, but the story breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
To make this story in compliance with the site's rules, you can have the chat in your story and just have the various characters from Pokemon discuss the chat and the ongoing stuff around it, referencing certain things said/done, without any of it being in chat form. Please make it so the chat/script portion doesn't exist at all.
Here is the background information about when the admins added the rule against chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries on September 12, 2002:
Chat room or keyboard dialogue based entries will no longer be allowed. Much of the chat room entries are void of plot, without attempt at plot and are more in line with random dialogue than with stories or poetry. Having these type of entries on the site is unfair to those that have spent quality time fleshing out substantial content.
9/22/2015 c2 QUEENSPELLER67
Dang! Clemont's Chespin can lay down the smack for smack talk! Clemont sounds a bit like a walking dictionary. I liked that!
Dang! Clemont's Chespin can lay down the smack for smack talk! Clemont sounds a bit like a walking dictionary. I liked that!
9/22/2015 c2 4scooter2
Great chapter. Man a whole lot of arguing. How about cooling things down a little. I can't wait to see what Pancham and Smoochum do next. Maybe they'll dance more, or get lost and have some quality time before their first hug and kiss. :)
4scooter2Great chapter. Man a whole lot of arguing. How about cooling things down a little. I can't wait to see what Pancham and Smoochum do next. Maybe they'll dance more, or get lost and have some quality time before their first hug and kiss. :)
9/21/2015 c1 77QUEENSPELLER67
Yeesh! Bonnie and Clemont are reminding me of some sibling pairs I know. I really loved Bonnie's sarcasm about Clemont's inventions. Nice Lumietalburg hint. I liked it. Ash is still dense, but that's why he's so loved!
77QUEENSPELLER67Yeesh! Bonnie and Clemont are reminding me of some sibling pairs I know. I really loved Bonnie's sarcasm about Clemont's inventions. Nice Lumietalburg hint. I liked it. Ash is still dense, but that's why he's so loved!