for The unicorn Twilight Sparkle - A magical extinct star10/21/2015 c2 
112otherrealmwriter
Good work. I noticed a lot of improvement but I would get a beta reader for more help. Sorry I can't offer more here but I am on a smartphone :(
112otherrealmwriterGood work. I noticed a lot of improvement but I would get a beta reader for more help. Sorry I can't offer more here but I am on a smartphone :(
9/22/2015 c1 117bluecatcinema
I'm not normally into these "actors in a show" stories, but this has potential. Keep going, and we'll see how things turn out.
117bluecatcinemaI'm not normally into these "actors in a show" stories, but this has potential. Keep going, and we'll see how things turn out.